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如何拯救你字数不够的雅思作文 雅思作文task1经典套句整理

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如何拯救你字数不够的雅思作文 雅思作文task1经典套句整理

如何拯救你字数不够的雅思作文?

在雅思议论文写作中,通常建议大家遵循introduction- body-conclusion(引言段-主体段-结论段)的“三步曲”。Body(主体)段落提供了论证观点的理由,是整个文章的主体,在评分中占有很大的比重。

例如9分雅思作文评分就要求:

presents a fully developed position in answer to the question with relevant, fully extended and well supported ideas

如果你问,什么叫fully extended / well supported?就是丰满的主体段。

即使是5分作文,也要求:

is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details

即同样要主体段落丰满才行。

一般来说,想要雅思作文写的好,至少需要含有两个主体段,且每个主体段都必须拥有明确的主题句即topic sentence,并有若干句supporting sentences,也就是我们常说的论据与论点。建议大家在练习议论文写作时遵循几个简单的原则,就能够迅速完成理由段,并且构建连贯和理由充分的议论文哦!

Write a topic sentence for each paragraph you plan to write. Each topic sentence should relate to your thesis statement and introduce what the paragraph will be about. If you find that the topics you want to discuss do not support the thesis statement you have written, revise your thesis statement or reconsider your topic sentences.

简单的来说,就是每一段,必!须!拥有一个明确的主题句,所有论据都围绕这一句展开,避免小段跑题。

Write ideas that support your topic sentences. The topic sentence for each paragraph tells the reader what the paragraph will be about. The ideas stated in the rest of the paragraph should all relate to the topic sentence.

支持句必须围绕主题句展开,烤鸭们一定要注意这一点,如果跑题,那么就会出现较为严重的扣分,那可真是哭都来不及啦!

例子看这里

Hobbies are important for many reasons. First, a hobby can be educational. For example, if the hobby is stamp collecting, the person can learn about the countries of the world and even some of their history. Second, engaging in a hobby can lead to meeting other people with the same interests. A person can also meet other people by going to the school. Third, a person's free time is being used in a positive way. The person has no time to be bored or get into mischief while engaged in the hobby. Finally, some hobbies can lead to a future job. A person who enjoys a hobby-related job is moresatisfied with life.

后面紧跟的First,second, third都是为了支持前面的第一句话。此外,在每一个点,又加入新的支持。比如在First句后面,又加了For example,来支持前面的观点,这样层层递进,文章就看起来格外的脉络清晰。这句中,很明显主题句就是Hobbies are important for many reasons.

但本段也并非完美无瑕哦~ A person can also meet other people by going the school"与hobby重要的原因没有关系,因此削弱了整个段落的连贯性与统一性,应该被去掉。

雅思作文task1经典套句整理

  1. the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to...  该表格描述了在...年至...年间...数量的变化。
  2. the bar chart illustrates that...  该柱状图展示了...
  3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding...  该图为我们提供了有关...的有趣数据。
  4. the diagram shows (that)...  该图向我们展示了...
  5. the pie graph depicts (that)....  该饼图揭示了...
  6. this is a cure graph which describes the trend of...  这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。
  7. the figures/statistics show (that)...  数据(字)表明...
  8. the tree diagram reveals how...  该树型图向我们揭示了如何...
  9. the data/statistics show (that)...  该数据(字)可以这样理解...
  10. the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that...  这些数据资料令我们得出结论...
  11. as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table...  如图所示...
  12. according to the chart/figures...  根据这些表(数字)...
  13. as is shown in the table...  如表格所示...
  14. as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in...  从图中可以看出,...发生了巨大变化。
  15. from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that...  从图表中我们可以很清楚(明显)地看到...
  16. this is a graph which illustrates...  这个图表向我们展示了...
  17. this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to...  该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。
  18. the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in...  该图以饼图形式描述了...总的趋势。
  19. this is a column chart showing...  这是个柱型图,描述了...
  20. as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of...  如图所示,两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。

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