让考官看懂你的雅思作文三条妙计帮你写出完美雅思作文

更新：2023年04月17日 14:15 雅思无忧

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让考官看懂你的雅思作文三条妙计帮你写出完美雅思作文

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一般情况下，烤鸭们会很顺利地读懂自己写的雅思(微博)作文，但是却不知道，身为“老外”的雅思考官是否能读出同样的味道。这主要是因为汉语和英语在表达顺序上的差异。

首先我们先看几个短句，来体会这种语言差异：

例1:Chatting on the Internet provides us with a lot of fun.

网上聊天给我带来很多乐趣。

汉语：网上聊天

英语：聊天在网上

可见，英语习惯性地将修饰成分后置，尤其是短语结构的修饰语。

更多例子：

Self-confidence is the first step on the road to success.

自信是成功之路的第一步。

汉语：成功之路的第一步

英语：第一步在路上成功的

Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass.

没有目标的活着就像没有罗盘的航行。

汉语：没有目标地活着

英语：活着没有目标

汉语：没有罗盘的航行

英语：航行没有罗盘

看了以上的例子我们不难发现英语和汉语在修饰方面的差异，下面让我们练习翻译几个句子，进一步体会写作过程中如何利用这样规律：

练习1: 一提到即将开始的学校生活，许多学生都会兴高采烈。

step1:找句子的主干(表达的核心内容)——学生都会兴高采烈numerous students will go to rapture

step2:找修饰成分——生活life——学校生活school life——即将开始的学校生活 the coming school life

考虑到修饰位置的平衡我们将the coming school life调整为the coming life of school, 修饰的核心词是life，前后都有修饰语，结构上比较平衡，避免修饰语过多而造成chinglish。

step3：整理——Numerous students will go to rapture at the mere mention of the coming life of school.

注意：英语习惯将重要信息前置，所以一般先写句子主干，在写其他修成成分。这样你的表达和老外的理解就很容易契合。

练习2: 考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效的措施。

step1:找主干——必须采取有效的措施：effective measures should be taken(由于无明确主语所以选择被动形式)

step2: 找修饰语——(1)考虑到问题的严重性in view of the seriousness of this problem

(2)在事态进一步恶化之前(时间状语)before things get worse

step3：整理In view of the seriousness of this problem ,effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

注意：此处，修饰成分没有全部放到句子后面，而是分为两个部分一个放前一个放后，这是考虑句子平衡的结果。

不知道同学们是否有了一些启发。同时希望愤怒的烤鸭们能尽快拿到自己的理想成绩。

三条妙计帮你写出完美雅思作文

　　妙计一：避免空洞的单词和词组
　　1. 一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子：
　　When all things are considered ， young *s of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents， in my opinion.
　　这句话当中的“ when all things are considered ”和“ in my opinion “都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：
　　Young *s of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
　　2. 有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换，例如：
　　Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
　　“ due to the fact that ”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：
　　Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have now.
　　妙计二：避免重复
　　1. 尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子：：
　　The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
　　large 对一个 farm 来说就是 size 方面的 large ，所以 in size 可以去掉，改为：
　　The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
　　更简洁的表达方式为：
　　My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
　　2. 有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换，例如：
　　My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.
　　这里的 over and over again 就可以改为 repeatedly ，显得更为简洁：
　　My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.
　　妙计三：选择最恰当的语法结构
　　选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要，但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑因素。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则：
　　1. 一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如： .
　　The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.
　　从意思上来分析，上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“ grandfather's not being able to study ”，而在表达这个概念时，原句用的主语是 situation ，谓语动词是 was ，不能强调需要表达的重点概念，可以改为下面这句话：
　　My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.
　　2. 避免频繁使用“ there be ”结构，例如下面的句子：
　　There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.
　　可以改为：
　　My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.
　　更简洁的句式为：
　　My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.
　　3. 把从句改为短语或单词。例如：
　　Dairy cows were raised on the farm， which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.
　　简介的表达方式为：
　　The dairy farm was located in a remote area， 100 kilometers to the nearest university.
　　4. 仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候，才使用被动语态。例如：
　　In the fall， not only did the cows have to be milked， but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family.
　　本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭 -my grandfather's family ”，而使用了被动语态后，仿佛重心变成了 cows 和 hay 。下面的表达方式是主动语态，相对来说更简洁一些：
　　In the fall， my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.
　　5. 用更为精确的一个动词来代替动词短语，例如下面这句话：
　　My grandfather didn't have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends.
　　Stand around doing nothing 其实可以用一个动词来表达，即 loiter ：
　　My grandfather didn't have time to loiter with his school friends.
　　6. 有时两句话的信息经过组合完全可以用一句话来简练地表达，例如：
　　Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too *all to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree.
　　两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简洁的句子：
　　Profits from the farm were sometimes too *all to meet operational expenses， let alone pay for a university degree.

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