“烤鸭”必读：多样化句式为雅思作文加分 雅思作文写作技巧与注意事项(3)

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“烤鸭”必读：多样化句式为雅思作文加分

雅思写作的评分标准变为：TR，CC，GRA和LR后，评分标准细化，具体化，从而对英语语言基本功的考查力度加大。 笔者现将在课堂上讲的多样化句式的一部分内容拿出来跟读者共享。

雅思写作句子开头的变化的手段：

A Begin sentence with an appositive

The forest ranger, an expert in forest fire control, talked to the campers about safety in the woods。

An expert in forest fire control, the forest ranger talked to the campers about safety in the woods。

the country’s biggest cellular operator, China Mobile is looking at tighter controls on Internet-related service providers, industry insiders say。

B Begin a sentence with an adverb

The fog was slowly settling down。

Slowly the fog was settling down。

Obviously enough, he himself can not handle the trouble by himself。

C Begin a sentence with an adjective or adjective phrase

Mr Boyd was very angry and began to defend his reputation with strong arguments。

Angry, Mr Boyd began to defend his reputation with strong argument。

Tired and frustrated, the teacher went home to have a rest。

D Begin sentences with participle phrases

I jogged very day and increased my energy level。

Jogging every day, I soon increased my energy level。

Tim was troubled by a dream and he woke up with a start。

Troubled by a dream, Tim woke up with a start。

Witnessed by Chinese Premier Wen Jiabao and leaders of the 10-mem ber ASEAN, Chinese Minister of Commerce Bo Xilai signed the agreement with 10 economic ministers of the ASEAN countries。

E Begin sentences with an infinitive phrase

You must attend every class to succeed in a course。

To succeed in a course, you must attend every class。

F Begin sentences with a prepositional phrase

Madame Curie was an industrious worker in the scientific laboratory。

In the scientific laboratory, Madame Curie was an industrious worker。

Under a new scheme, established SPs can become pure content providers and China Mobile may seek a bigger portion of the shared revenues。

In the short term, operators will not abandon SPs。

For China Mobile, a dramatic change in its partnership scheme may be harmful。

G Begin sentences with clause modifiers

He did not want to rewrite the paper because he was tired and hungry and discouraged。

Because he was tired and hungry and discouraged, he did not want to rewrite the paper。

You may regret in leisure what you impulsively do in haste。

What you impulsively do in haste you may regret in leisure。

以上就是小编为大家整理的雅思写作中的几种多样化句式。最后，祝大家在雅思考试中取得理想的成绩！

雅思作文写作技巧与注意事项(3)--大作文

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句子、词语。文章由句子组成，句子由词语组成。在着手写文章之前，应该提醒自己注意下面几点
１）句子与词语的正确用法。这是最基本的一点。这里包括单字的正确拼写、词语在特定句子中的正确应用、正确的句子模式。注意：千万不要在文章中出现中国式的英语。这就要求在构思的时候不要用中文进行思考，写的时候要仔细斟酌文章的语句。
２）句子的多样化。这点的实现必须在句子与词语的正确上来实现。句子的多样化是体现一个人英语语言水平的关键也是使文章获得高分的重点。如非谓语从句、定语从句、宾语从句等，以及简单句、复杂句的综合使用。
３）标点的正确使用

文章的整体风格与气氛。

作为考官或者是阅读你文章的人，在第一次接触到你文章时就可以感受到文章的特点与风格，或者活泼或者呆板，而依据模板写的文章很难做到活泼或者是吸引读者。

保持书写的工整性与字迹
　常见错误提醒
一． 不一致（disagreements）
所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致　时态不一致及代词不一　致等．
例１． when one have money ,he can do what he want to .
(人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么．)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致．
改为：　once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do)
二． 修饰语错位（misplaced modifiers）
英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化．对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解．例１． i believe i can do it well and i will better know the world outside the campus.
剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末．
三． 句子不完整（sentence fragments）
在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生．
例１． there are many ways to know the society. for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
剖析：本句后半部分＂for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句．
改为：there are many ways to know society ,for example ,by tv ,radio ,and newspaper.
四． 悬垂修饰语（dangling modifiers）
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清．例如：at the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中＂at the age of ten＂只点出十岁时，但没有说明” 谁”十岁时．按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了．

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