三条让你的雅思作文简洁的建议

更新：2023年04月18日 05:18 雅思无忧

雅思考试主要是通过对考生听、说、读、写四个方面英语能力的考核，综合测评考生的英语沟通运用能力，实现“沟通为本”的考试理念。对于雅思考生来说，也有很多考试难点和政策盲区需要帮助解答。今天雅思无忧网小编准备了三条让你的雅思作文简洁的建议，希望通过文章来解决雅思考生这方面的疑难问题，敬请关注。

三条让你的雅思作文简洁的建议

　　雅思作文简洁的建议一：避免空洞的单词和词组

　　1. 一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子：

　　When all things are considered, young *s of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.

　　这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：

　　Young *s of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

　　2. 有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换，例如：

　　Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

　　“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：

　　Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.

　　雅思作文简洁的建议二：避免重复

　　1. 尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。

　　2. 有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换

　　雅思作文简洁的建议建议三：选择最恰当的语法结构

　　选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要，但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑因素。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则：

　　1. 一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。

　　2. 避免频繁使用“there be”结构，

　　3. 把从句改为短语或单词。

　　4. 仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候，才使用被动语态。

　　5. 用更为精确的一个动词来代替动词短语，例如下面这句话：

　　My grandfather didn't have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends.

　　Stand around doing nothing其实可以用一个动词来表达，即loiter：

　　My grandfather didn't have time to loiter with his school friends.

　　有时两句话的信息经过组合完全可以用一句话来简练地表达，例如：

　　Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too *all to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree.

　　两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简洁的句子：

　　Profits from the farm were sometimes too *all to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree.

雅思作文素材--父母的悲观对孩子的影响

Does parental permissiveness affect children's development?

Arguments
1. The excessive permissiveness of present-day parents is doing more
harm than good to children and society as well.
2. Children should develop the habit of working and living independently
and, meanwhile, practise the virtue of being filial to their parents.
3. Children who have a surfeit of happiness in their child hood often
emerge like stodgy puddings and fail to make a success of life.
4. The fact that young people nowadays are self-centred, indifferent
and inconsiderate 'of others is largely the outcome of parental
permissiveness in their childhood.
5. Parental authority in a family helps a child to develop his
character healthily.
6. Parents should exercise strict discipline over their children because,
the more permissive the parents are, the more rebellious against their
parents the children will become.
7. Lavish care and excessive permissiveness will only give rise to
hedoni* among the younger generation.
8. If one lets the child do whatever he wants to, he will ruin
the child for life.
9. We have to admit the fact that we now have got a generation of spoilt,
self-centred brats with no respect for their elders.
10. The spread of juvenile delinquency in our age is largely due
to parental permissiveness.

Counter-arguments
1. More care for children is not the same as permissiveness to them.
2. The truth is that parents nowadays do not take enough care of their
children and often neglect their development because the parents are
only interested in their careers.
3. Parents are not at all permissive to their children. Violence often
takes place in families in which children are abused.
4. Only a relaxed family atmosphere can help the physical and psychological
growth of children.
5. To let children do what they like contributes to their independence
and competence in their * lives.
6. It is unfair to blame parents for the spread of juvenile delinquency.
There are a lot of other causes involved.
7. Many cases show that children leave home and become members of street
gangs just because they can not bear authoritarian control over them by
their parents.
8. Strict discipline does not always work in terms of developing children's
personal qualities. Too much pressure on children leads to rebellion and
other extreme actions.
9. Parents are not justified in using violence to keep discipline and
maintain their authority over the children.
10. Children are human beings, too. They need to be protected instead
of being frequently scolded or physically abused.