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5天雅思作文从5分提高到6.5经验 雅思作文修改一例:现代技术对人的影响

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5天雅思作文从5分提高到6.5经验 雅思作文修改一例:现代技术对人的影响

5天雅思作文从5分提高到6.5经验

还有一个星期时间了,雅思作文仍然是差成渣怎么办?下面一位花了5天时间从坑爹的5分提高到6.5分的雅思考生告诉你她的经验。

废话不多说,不浪费各位宝贵的复习时间了。总体方法:task 1分析思路,使用固定词汇及句式;task 2 针对题型,写模板(一共用了两天时间);剩下3天,打印出来几套雅思写作专用纸,每天两篇task 1(LZ的弱项),一篇task 2(必须完全使用自己的模板)。一共是5天,结果:从第一次坑爹的5分到了6.5。

具体操作方法:

task 1操作方法:

雅思真题4-8里的line chart, bar chart, pie chart和table题以及地图题、流程图题各找出一个,参考后面的范文(只看7.5分以上及官方范文,放心吧LZ找过,这几种类型都有的,不是范文就是8分的好文),然后分析其写作结构;

总结出每个题的写作结构(如何进行比较等);

根据10天突破总结各种词(替换词、各种上升、下降词等、连接词),每个最多最多选2个就够了!!并且一定要附上例句!!

接着就是练吧。。。拿到一个表,迅速整理出写作结构,就写的快多了!

task 2 操作方法:

1.把蓝皮那个《十天突破IELTS写作完整真题库与6-9分范文全解》翻一遍,分出了几大类:

discuss both views and give your own opinion;

“To what extent do you agree or disagree”(细分:完全同意/不同意;折衷——同意一部分,不同意一部分)

“To what extent do you think the advantages ofthis practice outweigh the disadvantages”(细分:利大于弊/弊大于利;折衷——利弊均衡)

报告题:“What are the causes/what problem will thiscause and what can… do to solve these problems?

解释现象/问题/目的等+自己的观点/另外的问题~~(综合前面的各种情况)

2.针对这几大类,在书中各找一道有范文的题,根据范文总结自己的模板,然后再根据这个模板把范文改编了,这样就有了完全使用自己模板的高分范文;再找其他有范文的题目,用这个模板改编至少2篇范文;

3.连着3天每天一篇大作文,完全使用自己的模板。

切记:虽然有这么多种分类,但是每个模板要保持高度的一致性(比如开头,结尾,连接词,举例用语,逻辑结构等等),否则每个都有独特的东西,到时候肯定会混乱的!不实用!模板一定熟记在心!

恩~我就是用了这样的方法在5天内真的把作文从5提高到了6.5. 其中task 1用了一整个白天准备完成;task 2用了1个白天+2个晚上准备完成。高度紧张啊!但是很有成效~~这里也附上了我自己总结的内容,大家参考下形式就好,我觉得分析、写模板、改编范文的工 作是一定要自己做才能够熟练运用的!!真的!!!咬咬牙两天就搞定了~

因为用的时间较短,所以也算有心得吧,因此在这里说一下:

听力:第一次只是把4-8题做了一遍,考了6;第二次把听力原文中不认识的单词都查了一遍,高频词背了,最关键、最有用的是第二次考试前的10天内我一直 用1.5倍速听听力,刷牙的时候当背景乐,睡觉前当催眠曲…一有空就用1.5倍速放听力,考试当天早上用1.5倍速听了半个小时,考试的时候觉得说的慢多 了!考了6.5。主要是词汇量不够,单词都拼错了,否则能考7。

阅读

因为我阅读底子不错,所以没什么好说的,雅思阅读就是关键词定位。我这里有两个经验:经验1——我总结过9分达人阅读真题的4个tasks的阅读,每一个 题几乎都自己总结了,包括在原文中的定位,技巧等等,自己感觉很有用,总结完以后T/F/NG题的错误率大大降低,阅读考了8. 经验2——考前高压训练。我一直坚持每天2个tasks就是6篇阅读的做题量,并且都限制在50分钟内,考试前一天也还是这样,高强度的训练考试的时候 60分钟做完1个task就轻松多了~~(这里也附上了我对阅读的总结,用的是最新的 的《9分达人雅思阅读真题还原及解析》,可以参考着看一下哈, 本人自创方法)

口语:

毫无准备,连机经都没来得及看,两次都是6(对于单科6总6.5的童鞋也就够了),所以这里我的经验就是——考试前找一个人(同学/朋友/一起的考生谁都 行。。。)开始说英语,说什么都行,就是不要停,至少说2个小时!!开始都是磕磕巴巴不知道说什么,说到1个小时就找到感觉了~~虽然用的词还是很傻很天 真,但是流利度绝对够了!连着说两个小时的英语你就会觉得很high,这样你考试的时候就自然多了,至少会很流利,不会怯场,不会的词也能迅速找到代 替,6分就保住了

雅思作文修改一例:现代技术对人的影响

  Modern technology has had a great influence on people's entertainment choices, making them less creative. Co you agree or disagree with this opinion?

  Modern technology has had a great influence on people's entertainment choices, making them less creative. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

  Bearing in mind the likely effects of the modern technology on entertainments on today's users are important, because it is an issue that is discussed daily nowadays by people in both the private and public sectors. However, does the modern technology benefits all aspects of human society? Some people may answer to the contrary. As far as I can see, current technology is undermining modern people's creative ability by providing individuals sorted ways of relaxation.

  The likely effects of modern technology on entertainment for people today are important, because it is an issue that is discussed daily in both the private and public sectors. However, does modern technology benefit all aspects of human society? Some people may answer in the negative. As far as I can see, modern technology undermines people's creative ability by providing individuals pre-digested forms of relaxation.

  To begin with , it has been known from the latest resources that modern people prefer to enjoy high-tech ways of recreation. More and more people from all works feel so pressuarable that they turn to modern technology which is supposed to be there providing convenient, time-saving and fresh entertainment while fewer and fewer individuals choose to play jigsaws or make some exquisite handicrafts which is the very things expand their imaginary world and make them more creative in their spare time.

  To begin with , it has been known from recent sources that modern people enjoy high-tech ways of recreation. More and more people from all walks of life feel so pressured that they turn to modern technology to provide convenient, time-saving and fresh entertainment; while fewer and fewer individuals choose to play jigsaws or make some exquisite handicrafts, the kinds of things that expand their imaginations and make them more creative in their spare time.

  Furthermore, modern people are more likely to count on current technology whether in physiological or psychological. What is meant by this is that plenty of people fully enjoy the entertaining products such as, TV, MP3 or internet games high-tech brings to them that they spend lots of time on them without doing anything else. Couch-potato syndrome is one such example. The more people rely on those modern entertaining items, the more possible that people form a negative habitual opinion that these high-tech can do everything for them, and the less likely people will be initiative and creative in their life.

  Furthermore, modern people are more likely to rely on modern technology whether for physiological or psychological reasons. What is meant by this is that many people fully enjoy the entertainment devices, such as TV, MP3 or internet games, that high technology brings to them, so that they spend lots of time on them to the detriment of everything else. The couch-potato syndrome is a result. The more that people rely on those modern entertainment devices, the more they form a negative habits, relying on all that these high-tech devices can do thing for them, and the less likely like they are to show initiative and be creative in their lives.

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