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雅思作文辅导:图表作文怎么写 最常用错雅思作文五组词:比如的混用

雅思作文辅导:图表作文怎么写

小作文:- 图表作文

1. Summarize 写作目的、最重要的信息

2. Make comparisons 归类、

控制好下面的内容:

1、 开篇:明确指出文章的写作目的

a) 随着时间,变化

b) 大小的比较

2、 结尾:结合写作目的,明确的给出图表中最为重要的信息

a) 看变化:哪些对象上升,哪些对象下降,哪些不变

b) 看比较:哪个对象是“最好王者”

3、 细节分类讨论,给出一些支持结论的证据或过程

分段模式:2+X (2代表开篇和结尾;X代表分类的结果和图形的数量)

开篇:

1) 重点要突出“写作目的”change or compare “C&C”

2) 名词照抄,动词和抽象名词替换,时间和地点不变,但要突出“指代”

下面是一篇以描述比较为主的文章范例:选材

e.g. Cambridge 8 – Test 1

The chart compares the proportions of overgrazing, over-cultivation, deforestation and others. The table compares the percentages of overgrazing, over-cultivation and deforestation in North America, Europe and Oceania during 1990 – 2000. 文章的开篇与提示句不同之处在于:你是在看过图表后产生的具体的描述。

结尾:

Overall, it is clear that overgrazing, over-cultivation and deforestation are main causes of global land degradation, and that the primary causes of land degradation in the three areas were different : North America (Over-cultivation), Europe (Deforestation), and Oceania (Overgrazing), and Europe had the most seriously affected land of the three countries.

中间段:- 分段,每段的主题句如何支持最后的结论 X= 2

第一段:第一句:最大值, while第二句:接近的值归类. However, 其余的不重要的值

The most primary cause of land degradation in the world is over-grazing, accounting for 35%, while other two main causes are over-cultivation and deforestation, occupying 28% and 30% respectively. The reminder only takes up 7%.

23% of land in Europe was degraded, which was the most serious, and 9.8% of land degradation was caused by deforestation, as well as 7.7% (over-cultivation) and 5.5% (overgrazing). 13% of land in Oceania was spoiled, and 11.3% of land spoiled was because of over-grazing, while 5% of land was degraded in North America, and 3.3% of the land degradation was subject to over-cultivation.

A complete composition

The chart compares the proportions of overgrazing, over-cultivation, deforestation and others. The table compares the percentages of overgrazing, over-cultivation and deforestation in North America, Europe and Oceania during 1990 – 2000. 文章的开篇与提示句不同之处在于:你是在看过图表后产生的具体的描述。

The most primary cause of land degradation in the world is over-grazing, accounting for 35%, while other two main causes are over-cultivation and deforestation, occupying 28% and 30% respectively. The reminder only takes up 7%.

最常用错雅思作文五组词:比如的混用


  such as与for example的混用
  我们知道,在表示举例子的时候,such as 与like是完全等同的,如:Wild flowers such as/like orchids and primroses are becoming rare.
  但是同学们对于Such as、for example 的把握还是不够准确。我们都知道,后者接句子前者接词语表示举例子。于是就有了下面的写法:
  There is a similar word in many languages, such as in French and Italian.
  这里的such as改为 for example为好,因为“in French and Italian”其实是“there is a similar word in French and Italian”的简化,所以要用 for example来引出例证。再来看几个类似的例子:
  It is possible to combine computer science with other subjects, for example physics.

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