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雅思作文技巧:虚拟语气 or

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雅思作文技巧:虚拟语气 or

雅思作文技巧:虚拟语气


  哪些雅思作文技巧可以帮助考生有效提高雅思写作的水平呢?雅思作文技巧是非常繁多的,而虚拟语气就是其中一个非常基础,同时非常加分的细节雅思写作技巧,小编也总结了一下雅思写作技巧中虚拟语气的用法,目前正在积极备战雅思作文考试的同学们不妨加以参考。
  在雅思写作中会经常用到的几个雅思写作虚拟语气句型。
  1.If * had done sth(坏事), * would never have done sth(好事).
  如果某人过去做了某事(坏事),那么他永远不可能做某事
  If Hugh Miller, after toiling all day in quarry (采石场), had devoted his evenings to rest and recreation, he would never have become a famous geologist.
  2.Sb would never have done sth(好事1) , never have done sth (好事2), if * had done sth (坏事)
  某人永远不可能做某事, 永远不可能做某事, 如果某人过去做了某件坏事
  The celebrated mathematician, Edmund Stone, would never have published a mathematical dictionary, never have found the key to science of mathematics, if he had given his spare moments to idleness.
  3.Had * done sth(坏事) , * would never have done sth (好事)
  如果某人过去做了某件坏事,而不是去做某件好事,那么他永远不可能做某事(好事)
  Had the little Scotch lad, Ferguson, allowed the busy brain to go to sleep while he tended sheep on the hillside, instead of calculating the position of the stars by a string of beads, he would never have become a famous astronomer.
  对以上几个虚拟语气的应用范文
  Group discussion Google
  If Google had ignored the importance of group discussion, this high-tech company would never have achieved today's stunning success.
  (If * had done sth, he would never have done sth)
  Google, a once obscure, ailing / fragile company, would never have achieved today's stunning success, never have conquered so big a market share, if it had ignored the importance of group discussion.
  (* would never have done sth , never have done sth , if * had done sth)
  Had Google , a once *all , obscure company , ignored the importance of group discussion ,the hi-tech tycoon would never , never have harvested today's overwhelming success . (压倒性的成功)
  以上就是小编整理的虚拟语气的雅思作文技巧总结,考生们可以根据以上给出件建议,并通过针对性的练习来逐步掌握雅思写作技巧,从而在雅思作文考试中取得更好的成绩。

雅思作文修改:money spent on art or education

题目:Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the contemporary world, art cost(costs) a large figure of money. Some people claim is necessary to invest in art. But still have some people deem that fund should spend(be spent) more on improving health and education instead of art. As far as I am concerned, the first view is overly simplistic.

Speaking myself, protecting art and diffuse it, is the precondition of advancing health and education. The first instance with respect to this is that the aggression on china in the early twenty century. Union army from eight countries used force and entry Yuan-Ming Imperial Garden where save the outstanding representation of Chinese artworks. A greatest art gold mine was destroyed at that time may due to the government of Qing Dynasty inability to strengthen their military and lock of money to maintain it exist. Before long, opium was widespread in china and contributes to negative quality of generation. Second place, education has to link to art, art is a soul of nation. There is no denying that no one country educates offspring without art. To a great extent, investment in art is a significant factor contributing to the development of person happiness and enjoyment.

这段的论据有点扯远了,而且你说的有误,圆明园不是八国联军抢的,是英法联军,总之别说,英国人干的坏事

Admittedly, advancing health and education need not only vigor but fund of government. Those facilities need to maintain and invent, medical skills is become dramatically in the modern days. But when carefully weighting in mind, we may find that improving health and education are international issues, intake from international society is advisable. By contrast, art is unique for ant other country, ignore art is an inexcusable crime because art, once gone, is difficult to restore.

Overall, my view is that spend money in art is the precondition of advancing health and education. In despite of health and education is become increasingly dramatic, but those skills and facilities can intake from international society. For art, actually can not.

整篇文章我给5.5分

论据注意要由浅入深,

第一段,可以写艺术对于完善人的性格,对于个人修养的提高都是有好处的。

第二段,上升到社会的高度,投资艺术,建博物馆啊美术馆啊等,可以传承传统文化,保持民族特色

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