让雅思作文“简洁漂亮”的三大建议 牛人总结的雅思作文评分标准

雅思考试主要是通过对考生听、说、读、写四个方面英语能力的考核，综合测评考生的英语沟通运用能力，实现“沟通为本”的考试理念。对于雅思考生来说，也有很多考试难点和政策盲区需要帮助解答。今天雅思无忧网小编准备了让雅思作文“简洁漂亮”的三大建议 牛人总结的雅思作文评分标准，希望通过文章来解决雅思考生这方面的疑难问题，敬请关注。

让雅思作文“简洁漂亮”的三大建议

　　中国烤鸭在雅思写作中，极爱用长难句，自己感觉一写长难句就会高大上，但其实不然。本文中新东方雅思网将为大家提出一些让雅思作文“简洁漂亮”的建议，供大家参考。

建议一：避免空洞的单词和词组

1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。

比如：When all things are considered, young *s of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion。

这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：

Young *s of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。

2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换

例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time。

“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now。

建议二：避免重复

1.尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。

例如下面这个例子：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size。

large对一个farm来说就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改为：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large。

更简洁的表达方式为：

My grandfather grew up on a large farm。

2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换

例如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm。

这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly，显得更为简洁：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm。

建议三：选择最恰当的语法结构

选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要，但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑因素。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则：

1.一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。

例如：The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm。

从意思上来分析，上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”，而在表达这个概念时，原句用的主语是situation，谓语动词是was，不能强调需要表达的重点概念，可以改为下面这句话：

My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm。

2.避免频繁使用“there be”结构

例如下面的句子：There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather。

可以改为：

My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day。

更简洁的句式为：

My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily。

3.把从句改为短语或单词。

例如：Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote。

简介的表达方式为：

The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university。

4.仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候，才使用被动语态。

例如：In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family。

本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather's family”，而使用了被动语态後，彷佛重心变成了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是主动语态，相对来说更简洁一些：

In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay。

5.用更为精确的一个动词来代替动词短语，

例如：My grandfather didn't have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends。

Stand around doing nothing其实可以用一个动词来表达，即loiter：

My grandfather didn't have time to loiter with his school friends。

6.有时两句话的信息经过组合完全可以用一句话来简练地表达

例如：Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too *all to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree。

两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简洁的句子：

Profits from the farm were sometimes too *all to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree。

牛人总结的雅思作文评分标准

为大家介绍一位牛人网友在复习IELTS剑桥系列时总结的雅思考试作文评分标准,总结的依据来自该系列中考官的评语，比较科学实用，供广大烤鸭们参考。

雅思考试作文评分标准Grades Standard:

1. The main argument are relevant and the writer's point of view need be clear.

2. The writer's point of view needs many ideas that deal with the actual issues and to be consistent.

3. The prompt could not be copied directly in the response and the words can not less than 250 (at look).

4. There are various range of language in the sentence.

5. The sentence cannot be only simple in all.

6. A range of structure need depend on good control of punctuation and grammar.

ps: Examiner is interested in visual example. if there are some appropriate examples to support your view, your marks will not be low.

雅思考试作文评分标准第一点总是观点问题，一般得4分的都是观点不清晰;第二点提到理由，理由必须要支持观点，理由写的混乱的话，分数肯定不高;第三点是字数问题，一般考官不会数的，差不多就ok了(这是我猜的)但是如果你有多次抄袭题目的原话的话，那他就会不厌其烦的数了，而且抄袭的部分不算，只算剩下的。这三点是大家必须做到的，否则5分都拿不到。

雅思考试作文评分标准第四是语言的组织，也就是连接词用的要恰当，看上去是个小问题，但是这点非常重要，要体现出逻辑表达次序，如果乱用，考官的逻辑思维也会混乱，导致看不懂或不理解你要说什么，不能正常往下阅读，这会让考官非常难受，你想想你让他难受，他会让你好受吗?但是他又不知道你在哪里，就算知道你在哪里也不能把k你一顿阿，就算能k你一顿，也不一定打得过你啊，要知道考官大多都是老头老太，但是这口气一定要出的呀，最后倒霉的还是你的分数(晕，撤远了)

雅思考试作文评分标准第五点句子不能全是简单句，当然简单句看上去容易，也比较容易理解，也不会错，但是在那些老奶奶老爷爷眼里就像是他们在上幼儿园的小孙子小孙女写出来的东西，只是些幼儿园水平的东西(在这里顺便讲件事，大家知道ielts的题目在美国和英联邦国家中是什么等级吗?ielts分听说读写4部分，其中阅读和写作是他们12年级的水平，口语的CueCard部分是他们幼儿园的游戏，他们没有听力，这些时我侄子告诉我的，他在美国，今年刚刚12年级，这次他回来，我给他做了剑桥的题目，他告诉我这些是他们现在这水平做的东西)可想而知，幼儿园水平的东西，分数也只能在幼儿园的水平。

雅思考试作文评分标准第六点就是句子的结构了，这点需要注意的是语法和标点，在我们看来标点并不重要，但是剑桥范文的评语中都有punctuation这词，而且和grammar并列，说明这和语法一样重要，而且也是评分的一个标准，不过，这些都是最后出现的，也就是说相对上面5条来说不怎么重要，在我国英语学习和考试中都是语法为重点，而恰恰人家并不看重它，这让我国许多语法很好的同学，有些英雄无用武之地吧!不过学好语法也不是件坏事。我说不重要只是和上面5条比哦，也别太轻敌哦，毕竟也是评分标准之一，特别在时态的应用上要注意，如果乱用时态让考官进入时间隧道出不来的话，那你就再准备1450把他解救出来吧!

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