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雅思作文结尾段:高端写法你会吗 评上半年雅思作文

雅思作文结尾段:高端写法你会吗

  一个漂亮而又简洁的雅思作文结尾段对于高分大作文来说无疑是必须的,尽管最终评分的主要依据并不是由结尾段决定的,但是结尾段的出色完成对于一篇成功的学术类大作文是不可或缺的。

  想出国留学,雅思考试是必经之路,而雅思作文更是其中的重中之重。很多同学像小马过河培训老师反映,雅思作文结尾段最难写,所以,本文中,我们就教大家如何写出一个高端大气的雅思作文结尾段。

  回顾全文+观点+展望:

  这种结尾方式比较适合于双边结构的作文,在这种写法中,我们要注意的是结尾段由三个要素组成,其中第2个要素是必须的 ,但是句子的数量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1个句子。首先我们来看一个例子:

  I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways。

  上面这个例句中,作者将自己的观点隐藏在了一个宾语从句之后,起到了一个欲扬先抑的效果。但是这种效果必须搭配一个展望未来才能起到渲染的效果。我们来对比另外一个例子:

  In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline. However, it should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible。

  大家不难发现,2个句子都使用了相似的衔接方式,即首句委婉地回顾全文,将观点的对立面用"让步"的方式表达出来,同时也是对于主体段观点的回顾。然后再是用转折阐述自己的看法和观点。最后再用一个对于未来的期望来支撑自己的观点。这种顺序安排的优点在于对于文章的主体有很好的总结,但同时观点又是非常鲜明有力的,加上对于未来的润色,使得表达更流畅。用同样的方法,我们再来看第三个例句:

  To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if all its people are educated to the maximum of their ability。

  和前2个结尾不同,第三个结尾尽管也是先回顾了全文,但是它将作者的观点和对未来的期望写在了一个条件状语从句里。如此就给出了我们在构造"展望未来"时的一个思路,即搭配条件状语从句或者介宾短语跟在观点句之后。此种结尾发展方式同样适用于分析解决型大作文的结尾段布局,比如:

  All in all, although the problem of drugs may seem impossible to eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to weaken the hold of drugs on society. The danger from drugs is too great to ignore。

评上半年雅思作文 预测下半年题目

  今年雅思作文形势并不容乐观,尤其对预测来讲更难,因为新题很多,综观上半年已考试题,简单的评论一下:

  按内容来分:科技影响、文化传统、*政策考得最多,其次是环保、教育类,此外还出现了个别其他类的题目。

  小作文已经考了3次流程图了(如果我没记错的话),我个人觉得在11、12月以及7月可能会再出现2次左右,所以我建议大家要对流程图的写法有一定的了解。

  不过话说回来,成败的关键还是在大作文,我建议大家把上述几类各练一篇,积累点分论点这样比较好。其次,不要再迷信预测了,至少作文的题目今年很难预测最好是举一反三得练。

  下半年作文一定有用的题目!

  7月开始就进入下半年的考试了,结合上半年的情况,我给大家准备了10道题目(我的口号是练习10篇搞定6分么),相信一定派的上用。对于一下题目,应先构思分论点,然后挑几篇来写。

  1.科技影响

  There are social, medical problems associated with the use of mobile phone. What form do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of the mobile phone?

  *在人们生活的若干方面都产生了一定的利弊影响。你认为呢?

  In recent years, working at home for one‘s employers has become a growing trend in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming decades. Discuss the reasons why it is popular and state your opinion about the social phenomenon.

  2.文化传统

  What can the arts tell us of the life that science cannot?

  当今世界,科技发达,但是人们还是对艺术家给予很大的评价,科技是不能代替艺术的。

  Some people consider that history is of little or no use to us. Others believe that studying history helps us to know the present. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

  3。环保

  针对当前全球的环境问题,提高燃料的价格是一个解决办法。你同意不同意。

  some think the best way to solve the world‘s environment problem is increase the cost of fuel.

  Long distance flight uses more fuel than car and brings pollution to the environment. We should discourage non-essential flight rather than limit the use of car. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  4.教育类

  Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students how to judge right and wrong and how to behave well. Some say that teachers should only teach students about academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  5.其他

  Some people say the government should not put money on arts such as music and painting. Instead, they should spend more money on construction of public facilities. What is your opinion?

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