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雅思作文结尾必须漂亮大气 雅思作文全面解析

虎头更要凤尾 雅思作文结尾必须漂亮大气

国内的孩子拼了命地准备高考,然而,出国党也并不轻松,烤鸭是他们的必经之路。每一位烤鸭人都想打遍天下无敌手,都想知道考高分的秘诀,下面我们就重点来说说,雅思考试之中,我们需要注意的一些问题。

一个漂亮而又简洁的结尾对于高分大作文来说无疑是必须的,尽管最终评分的主要依据并不是由结尾段决定的,但是结尾段的出色完成对于一篇成功的学术类大作文是不可或缺的。在本章节中,老师将带领大家领略结尾的不同高端写法。

回顾全文+观点+展望:

这种结尾方式比较适合于双边结构的作文,在这种写法中,我们要注意的是结尾段由三个要素组成,其中第2个要素是必须的 ,但是句子的数量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1个句子。首先我们来看一个例子:

I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways.

上面这个例句中,作者将自己的观点隐藏在了一个宾语从句之后,起到了一个欲扬先抑的效果。但是这种效果必须搭配一个展望未来才能起到渲染的效果。我们来对比另外一个例子:

In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline. However, it should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible.

大家不难发现,2个句子都使用了相似的衔接方式,即首句委婉地回顾全文,将观点的对立面用"让步"的方式表达出来,同时也是对于主体段观点的回顾。然后再是用转折阐述自己的看法和观点。最后再用一个对于未来的期望来支撑自己的观点。这种顺序安排的优点在于对于文章的主体有很好的总结,但同时观点又是非常鲜明有力的,加上对于未来的润色,使得表达更流畅。用同样的方法,我们再来看第三个例句:

To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if all its people are educated to the maximum of their ability.

和前2个结尾不同,第三个结尾尽管也是先回顾了全文,但是它将作者的观点和对未来的期望写在了一个条件状语从句里。如此就给出了我们在构造"展望未来"时的一个思路,即搭配条件状语从句或者介宾短语跟在观点句之后。此种结尾发展方式同样适用于分析解决型大作文的结尾段布局,比如:

All in all, although the problem of drugs may seem impossible to eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to weaken the hold of drugs on society. The danger from drugs is too great to ignore.

对于毒品对社会的危害,作者先是承认现状的无法改变,进而乐观地阐述了自己的观点即采取了切实有效的行动后可以减弱其危害。最后用毒品的危害性来对未来作展望。换句话说,在社会类分析解决型议论文中,我们在展望未来时可以考虑用强调其长远的影响作为突破口。又如:

In short, there are several things that the government can do to allow more people to finish school. However, a number of society attitudes also have to change if the country.

2007年雅思作文全面解析

作者:牛俞鑫

  不管07年是否出新题,有几类题目还是会考的,主要有以下几类:

  1.教育类

  2.科技影响类

  3.文化传统类

  4.国家政策类

  5.传媒类

  6.犯罪类

  这6大类的题目我相信一定会考,而且应该会占很大一部分!

  练习方法如下:

  1.教育类练3篇

  2.科技影响类练2篇

  3.文化传统类练2篇

  4.国家政策类练1篇

  5.传媒类练1篇

  6.犯罪类练1篇

  练习的侧重点应该是两方面: 1 、积累观点(即文章的内容或分论点); 2 、纠正语法,积累常用词汇(这点对最后的得分最重要)

  经过这几年的研究,我发现雅思考题经常是换汤不还药,也就是说,看似题目不一样,但是写的内容可以互相借鉴的,所以我挑出 10 篇很有代表性的文章让大家练一下,大家最好是灵活运用,不要死背,就算考题不一样,很多内容和词汇都可以借用的!

  1.教育类

  Schools should teach children some academic subjects which will be beneficial to their future careers. Therefore, other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

  In order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but others think it will result in loss of respect and discipline in classroom. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

  Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of * life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  2.科技影响类

  Many people think that public libraries should only provide books to readers and shouldn’t waste their limited funds on expensive high-tech media, such as computer software, DVD or videos. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

  In recent years, working at home for one’s employers has become a growing trend in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming decades. Discuss the reasons why it is popular and state your opinion about the social phenomenon.

  3.文化传统类

  The government is responsible for protecting a nation’s cultural identity. Thus, some people believe new buildings should be built in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

  It is more important for a building to serve its purpose rather than looking beautiful. Architects should not worry about buildings as works of art. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  4.国家政策类

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