如何拯救你字数不够的雅思作文 雅思作文全面解析

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如何拯救你字数不够的雅思作文？

在雅思议论文写作中，通常建议大家遵循introduction- body-conclusion(引言段-主体段-结论段)的“三步曲”。Body(主体)段落提供了论证观点的理由，是整个文章的主体，在评分中占有很大的比重。

例如9分雅思作文评分就要求：

presents a fully developed position in answer to the question with relevant, fully extended and well supported ideas

如果你问，什么叫fully extended / well supported?就是丰满的主体段。

即使是5分作文，也要求：

is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details

即同样要主体段落丰满才行。

一般来说，想要雅思作文写的好，至少需要含有两个主体段，且每个主体段都必须拥有明确的主题句即topic sentence，并有若干句supporting sentences，也就是我们常说的论据与论点。建议大家在练习议论文写作时遵循几个简单的原则，就能够迅速完成理由段，并且构建连贯和理由充分的议论文哦!

Write a topic sentence for each paragraph you plan to write. Each topic sentence should relate to your thesis statement and introduce what the paragraph will be about. If you find that the topics you want to discuss do not support the thesis statement you have written, revise your thesis statement or reconsider your topic sentences.

简单的来说，就是每一段，必!须!拥有一个明确的主题句，所有论据都围绕这一句展开，避免小段跑题。

Write ideas that support your topic sentences. The topic sentence for each paragraph tells the reader what the paragraph will be about. The ideas stated in the rest of the paragraph should all relate to the topic sentence.

支持句必须围绕主题句展开，烤鸭们一定要注意这一点，如果跑题，那么就会出现较为严重的扣分，那可真是哭都来不及啦!

例子看这里

Hobbies are important for many reasons. First, a hobby can be educational. For example, if the hobby is stamp collecting, the person can learn about the countries of the world and even some of their history. Second, engaging in a hobby can lead to meeting other people with the same interests. A person can also meet other people by going to the school. Third, a person's free time is being used in a positive way. The person has no time to be bored or get into mischief while engaged in the hobby. Finally, some hobbies can lead to a future job. A person who enjoys a hobby-related job is moresatisfied with life.

后面紧跟的First，second, third都是为了支持前面的第一句话。此外，在每一个点，又加入新的支持。比如在First句后面，又加了For example，来支持前面的观点，这样层层递进，文章就看起来格外的脉络清晰。这句中，很明显主题句就是Hobbies are important for many reasons.

但本段也并非完美无瑕哦~ A person can also meet other people by going the school"与hobby重要的原因没有关系，因此削弱了整个段落的连贯性与统一性，应该被去掉。

2007年雅思作文全面解析

作者：牛俞鑫

　　不管07年是否出新题，有几类题目还是会考的，主要有以下几类：

　　1．教育类

　　2．科技影响类

　　3．文化传统类

　　4．国家政策类

　　5．传媒类

　　6．犯罪类

　　这6大类的题目我相信一定会考，而且应该会占很大一部分！

　　练习方法如下：

　　1．教育类练3篇

　　2．科技影响类练2篇

　　3．文化传统类练2篇

　　4．国家政策类练1篇

　　5．传媒类练1篇

　　6．犯罪类练1篇

　　练习的侧重点应该是两方面： 1 、积累观点（即文章的内容或分论点）； 2 、纠正语法，积累常用词汇（这点对最后的得分最重要）

　　经过这几年的研究，我发现雅思考题经常是换汤不还药，也就是说，看似题目不一样，但是写的内容可以互相借鉴的，所以我挑出 10 篇很有代表性的文章让大家练一下，大家最好是灵活运用，不要死背，就算考题不一样，很多内容和词汇都可以借用的！

　　1．教育类

　　Schools should teach children some academic subjects which will be beneficial to their future careers. Therefore, other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　In order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but others think it will result in loss of respect and discipline in classroom. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

　　Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of * life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　2．科技影响类

　　Many people think that public libraries should only provide books to readers and shouldn’t waste their limited funds on expensive high-tech media, such as computer software, DVD or videos. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　In recent years, working at home for one’s employers has become a growing trend in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming decades. Discuss the reasons why it is popular and state your opinion about the social phenomenon.

　　3．文化传统类

　　The government is responsible for protecting a nation’s cultural identity. Thus, some people believe new buildings should be built in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　It is more important for a building to serve its purpose rather than looking beautiful. Architects should not worry about buildings as works of art. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　4．国家政策类

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