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何为高分雅思作文 最常用错的雅思作文五组词

何为高分雅思作文 看考官批作文

  请看下面这个小作文的开头段,看似行文流水,实则欲哭无泪。

  As can be seen from the table chart, it gives us the percentage of national consumer experience by category in 2002 in five different countries.谈及套句,小作文中“As can be seen from…”曾被列为小作文必备佳句,而孰不知此句虽好,但native speaker 常把它放在主体段落开头句。若论行文习惯,实在勉强。再者,“table chart”必会让考官在批卷的疲劳中会心一笑。但是烤鸭们,不知啊,你让他笑,他却让你人比黄花瘦,尽管他是那样的爱你。此短语翻译成中文叫“表格图”,考生自是觉得挺有中国风的感觉。但考官会认为是“这table就是表格,也就是图的一种,还后面要是再加一chart,再来一图。实为black sheep 一族”啊!南部陈更要翻译成“表格图图”?实在是具有喜感啊!再论“us”一词,感觉倒是亲民派系, 考官考生一家人啊。但是,雅思写作,半学术文体,这词总有点较为随意。所以,宁为被动,隐去施动者,换成it can be seen ,或是it represents that 等句,或许会更好点。考生最无辜的地方就是下面的这个percentage。我们都知道,衣服表格不可能只有全图一个数据,又怎会遗忘名词单复数的问题呢?最后那个“in 2002 in five different countries”,感觉起来好似是信息满满,不知道是否也是信心满满?语法老师告诉我们:当句子中同时有地点状语和时间状语时,一般要把地点状语放在时间状语之前 。要知道,不走寻常路,那是考官的作风。考生要是也这样做,哭泣大于微笑。   雅思作文这样批,你懂的……---系列二   People have, in rercent years, shown concern on the dire consequences of global warming and air pollution. Some people suggest that we should limit are travel(travelling) instead of car use. It seems to me that the objection against air travel is based on incorrect facts and stereotypes.(The)Vehicle is an integral segment of urban industrial civilization, mirroring contemporary life, in its best and unrest aspects.   Just as machinery is integral to industrialization, air is central to world economy.(有逻辑关系吗?)Air travels make it possible for people to move around the world freely and quickly. Today, the tips can be completed in a matter of hours. One can attend a meeting in Pairs and dinner in New York the same day. There is a growing recognition that air travels have several advantages, while(连接词使用有误,改成meanwhile)it can(补上主语) ensures(删掉s) the growth of modern business such as international touri*, transportation and express delivery ,etc. Therefore, limiting air travel itself is a grave mistake ,that (非限定从句引导词改成which)would be a severe blow to these industries and may even damage world economy.   It’s true that one long-distance flight consumes more fuel and causes even more pollution than a car journey. But air trips have more outweight than car journey in the long journey (什么意思?)and the numbers of passengers. However, cars also can release gases that pollution the air, and cause great damage human health. Giving up air travels for(应改成instead of) car journeys(什么意思?) hoping there will be less pollution is certainly a fruitless act.   According to the above *ysis, we can observe that limiting air travels cannot solve the environmental problems. We should aim at developing cleaner fuels an more efficient engines that will allow us to enjoy travelling without putting the environment in danger   终极点评:结构安排较好,5.5基本保证。但细节错误过多,尤其是衔接手段较为机械。

最常用错的雅思作文五组词

雅思小作文因为比较模式化,相对来说用错词的情况也少一些。考生们在常见错误方面应注意:在谈及价位时我们应该用高低而非大小贵贱来表达,即high/low

price 而非big/*all price 或者expensive/cheap price; great value而不是big value; their


  living condition is poor而非bad等等。其实,小作文中比较集中的错误在“比较与对比”搞不清楚,所以出现 ‘compare’与
  ‘contrast’ 的使用错误,这里我们详细说一下。 一、compare与contrast的误用 我们先从两者的定义入手来看两者的区别。
  Compare的定义为:to examine people or things to see how they are similar or
  different. Contrast的定义为:to compare two or more things to show the difference
  between them. 由定义不难看出前者侧重于找到两个或多个事物的异同,而后者则侧重于它们的不同。 看个例句: It is interesting to
  compare their situations to ours./It is interesting to contrast their situations
  to ours. 前一句翻译为:对比一下我们的情况与他们的情况会很有趣。 后一句的翻译为:我们的情况与他们的情况有很大的不同,这很有趣。
  再看一个引自OXFORD ADBANCED LEARNER’S DICTIONARY的例子: There is an obvious contrast
  between the culture of East and West. The company lost million in contrast to
  a profit of .2 million a year earlier. When you look at their new system, ours
  seems very old-fashioned by contrast. 不难发现,Compare 翻译为“
  与。。。相比”而contrast可译为“明显不同的是。。。”,切记这种翻译方式就不会用错彼此了。 二、介词使用错误 1、普通介词的误用
  一般表现为固定搭配错误,如常把 provide * with sth用成provide * sth; be satisfied with用成be satisfied for等等,虽然这样的错误看似无伤大雅,但在考官眼里就是影响顺畅阅读的,当然会影响最终成绩。解决的办法简单而古老:把常见的固定搭配牢记于心,问题自然就解决了。
  2、 “to”作为介词的误用 “to”最常见的用法是以动词不定式符号的形式出现的,所以同学们也已经习惯了 “to do”的固定搭配。对于一些如walk to me, to the left等介词to表方向等常见用法一般也不会出现错误。但是对于与动词搭配的介词to就会经常犯错: 如: More and more

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