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雅思作文技巧:虚拟语气 雅思作文高端写法:你能猜到这结尾吗

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雅思作文技巧:虚拟语气 雅思作文高端写法:你能猜到这结尾吗

雅思作文技巧:虚拟语气


  哪些雅思作文技巧可以帮助考生有效提高雅思写作的水平呢?雅思作文技巧是非常繁多的,而虚拟语气就是其中一个非常基础,同时非常加分的细节雅思写作技巧,小编也总结了一下雅思写作技巧中虚拟语气的用法,目前正在积极备战雅思作文考试的同学们不妨加以参考。
  在雅思写作中会经常用到的几个雅思写作虚拟语气句型。
  1.If * had done sth(坏事), * would never have done sth(好事).
  如果某人过去做了某事(坏事),那么他永远不可能做某事
  If Hugh Miller, after toiling all day in quarry (采石场), had devoted his evenings to rest and recreation, he would never have become a famous geologist.
  2.Sb would never have done sth(好事1) , never have done sth (好事2), if * had done sth (坏事)
  某人永远不可能做某事, 永远不可能做某事, 如果某人过去做了某件坏事
  The celebrated mathematician, Edmund Stone, would never have published a mathematical dictionary, never have found the key to science of mathematics, if he had given his spare moments to idleness.
  3.Had * done sth(坏事) , * would never have done sth (好事)
  如果某人过去做了某件坏事,而不是去做某件好事,那么他永远不可能做某事(好事)
  Had the little Scotch lad, Ferguson, allowed the busy brain to go to sleep while he tended sheep on the hillside, instead of calculating the position of the stars by a string of beads, he would never have become a famous astronomer.
  对以上几个虚拟语气的应用范文
  Group discussion Google
  If Google had ignored the importance of group discussion, this high-tech company would never have achieved today's stunning success.
  (If * had done sth, he would never have done sth)
  Google, a once obscure, ailing / fragile company, would never have achieved today's stunning success, never have conquered so big a market share, if it had ignored the importance of group discussion.
  (* would never have done sth , never have done sth , if * had done sth)
  Had Google , a once *all , obscure company , ignored the importance of group discussion ,the hi-tech tycoon would never , never have harvested today's overwhelming success . (压倒性的成功)
  以上就是小编整理的虚拟语气的雅思作文技巧总结,考生们可以根据以上给出件建议,并通过针对性的练习来逐步掌握雅思写作技巧,从而在雅思作文考试中取得更好的成绩。

雅思作文高端写法:你能猜到这结尾吗?

一个漂亮而又简洁的结尾对于高分大作文来说无疑是必须的,尽管最终评分的主要依据并不是由结尾段决定的,但是结尾段的出色完成对于一篇成功的学术类大作文是不可或缺的。在本章节中,老师将带领大家领略结尾的不同高端写法。

  一。回顾全文+观点+展望:

  这种结尾方式比较适合于双边结构的作文,在这种写法中,我们要注意的是结尾段由三个要素组成,其中第2个要素是必须的 ,但是句子的数量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1个句子。首先我们来看一个例子:

  I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways。

  上面这个例句中,作者将自己的观点隐藏在了一个宾语从句之后,起到了一个欲扬先抑的效果。但是这种效果必须搭配一个展望未来才能起到渲染的效果。我们来对比另外一个例子:

  In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline. However, it should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible。

  大家不难发现,2个句子都使用了相似的衔接方式,即首句委婉地回顾全文,将观点的对立面用"让步"的方式表达出来,同时也是对于主体段观点的回顾。然后再是用转折阐述自己的看法和观点。最后再用一个对于未来的期望来支撑自己的观点。这种顺序安排的优点在于对于文章的主体有很好的总结,但同时观点又是非常鲜明有力的,加上对于未来的润色,使得表达更流畅。用同样的方法,我们再来看第三个例句:

  To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if all its people are educated to the maximum of their ability。

  和前2个结尾不同,第三个结尾尽管也是先回顾了全文,但是它将作者的观点和对未来的期望写在了一个条件状语从句里。如此就给出了我们在构造"展望未来"时的一个思路,即搭配条件状语从句或者介宾短语跟在观点句之后。此种结尾发展方式同样适用于分析解决型大作文的结尾段布局,比如:

  All in all, although the problem of drugs may seem impossible to eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to weaken the hold of drugs on society. The danger from drugs is too great to ignore。

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