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如何拯救你字数不够的雅思作文 雅思作文技巧:虚拟语气

如何拯救你字数不够的雅思作文?

在雅思议论文写作中,通常建议大家遵循introduction- body-conclusion(引言段-主体段-结论段)的“三步曲”。Body(主体)段落提供了论证观点的理由,是整个文章的主体,在评分中占有很大的比重。

例如9分雅思作文评分就要求:

presents a fully developed position in answer to the question with relevant, fully extended and well supported ideas

如果你问,什么叫fully extended / well supported?就是丰满的主体段。

即使是5分作文,也要求:

is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details

即同样要主体段落丰满才行。

一般来说,想要雅思作文写的好,至少需要含有两个主体段,且每个主体段都必须拥有明确的主题句即topic sentence,并有若干句supporting sentences,也就是我们常说的论据与论点。建议大家在练习议论文写作时遵循几个简单的原则,就能够迅速完成理由段,并且构建连贯和理由充分的议论文哦!

Write a topic sentence for each paragraph you plan to write. Each topic sentence should relate to your thesis statement and introduce what the paragraph will be about. If you find that the topics you want to discuss do not support the thesis statement you have written, revise your thesis statement or reconsider your topic sentences.

简单的来说,就是每一段,必!须!拥有一个明确的主题句,所有论据都围绕这一句展开,避免小段跑题。

Write ideas that support your topic sentences. The topic sentence for each paragraph tells the reader what the paragraph will be about. The ideas stated in the rest of the paragraph should all relate to the topic sentence.

支持句必须围绕主题句展开,烤鸭们一定要注意这一点,如果跑题,那么就会出现较为严重的扣分,那可真是哭都来不及啦!

例子看这里

Hobbies are important for many reasons. First, a hobby can be educational. For example, if the hobby is stamp collecting, the person can learn about the countries of the world and even some of their history. Second, engaging in a hobby can lead to meeting other people with the same interests. A person can also meet other people by going to the school. Third, a person's free time is being used in a positive way. The person has no time to be bored or get into mischief while engaged in the hobby. Finally, some hobbies can lead to a future job. A person who enjoys a hobby-related job is moresatisfied with life.

后面紧跟的First,second, third都是为了支持前面的第一句话。此外,在每一个点,又加入新的支持。比如在First句后面,又加了For example,来支持前面的观点,这样层层递进,文章就看起来格外的脉络清晰。这句中,很明显主题句就是Hobbies are important for many reasons.

但本段也并非完美无瑕哦~ A person can also meet other people by going the school"与hobby重要的原因没有关系,因此削弱了整个段落的连贯性与统一性,应该被去掉。

雅思作文技巧:虚拟语气


  哪些雅思作文技巧可以帮助考生有效提高雅思写作的水平呢?雅思作文技巧是非常繁多的,而虚拟语气就是其中一个非常基础,同时非常加分的细节雅思写作技巧,小编也总结了一下雅思写作技巧中虚拟语气的用法,目前正在积极备战雅思作文考试的同学们不妨加以参考。
  在雅思写作中会经常用到的几个雅思写作虚拟语气句型。
  1.If * had done sth(坏事), * would never have done sth(好事).
  如果某人过去做了某事(坏事),那么他永远不可能做某事
  If Hugh Miller, after toiling all day in quarry (采石场), had devoted his evenings to rest and recreation, he would never have become a famous geologist.
  2.Sb would never have done sth(好事1) , never have done sth (好事2), if * had done sth (坏事)
  某人永远不可能做某事, 永远不可能做某事, 如果某人过去做了某件坏事
  The celebrated mathematician, Edmund Stone, would never have published a mathematical dictionary, never have found the key to science of mathematics, if he had given his spare moments to idleness.
  3.Had * done sth(坏事) , * would never have done sth (好事)
  如果某人过去做了某件坏事,而不是去做某件好事,那么他永远不可能做某事(好事)
  Had the little Scotch lad, Ferguson, allowed the busy brain to go to sleep while he tended sheep on the hillside, instead of calculating the position of the stars by a string of beads, he would never have become a famous astronomer.
  对以上几个虚拟语气的应用范文
  Group discussion Google
  If Google had ignored the importance of group discussion, this high-tech company would never have achieved today's stunning success.
  (If * had done sth, he would never have done sth)
  Google, a once obscure, ailing / fragile company, would never have achieved today's stunning success, never have conquered so big a market share, if it had ignored the importance of group discussion.
  (* would never have done sth , never have done sth , if * had done sth)
  Had Google , a once *all , obscure company , ignored the importance of group discussion ,the hi-tech tycoon would never , never have harvested today's overwhelming success . (压倒性的成功)
  以上就是小编整理的虚拟语气的雅思作文技巧总结,考生们可以根据以上给出件建议,并通过针对性的练习来逐步掌握雅思写作技巧,从而在雅思作文考试中取得更好的成绩。

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