名师支招：写好雅思作文的语言准备过程 Ken老师点评:雅思作文学生习作(1)

雅思考试主要是通过对考生听、说、读、写四个方面英语能力的考核，综合测评考生的英语沟通运用能力，实现“沟通为本”的考试理念。对于雅思考生来说，也有很多考试难点和政策盲区需要帮助解答。今天雅思无忧网小编准备了名师支招：写好雅思作文的语言准备过程 Ken老师点评:雅思作文学生习作(1)，希望通过文章来解决雅思考生这方面的疑难问题，敬请关注。

名师支招：写好雅思作文的语言准备过程

雅思考试首先是一个语言能力的考试，因此，在雅思作文的评分标准里面，语言永远都是最重要的一项。我们不用过分纠结于雅思官方评分标准里面对语言晦涩的描述，请大家想一想雅思考试的目的是什么？除开G类而言，是测试考生是否具备在英语(论坛)国家的高等学校里面学习的能力，也就是在英语的学术环境里面生存的能力。试想，如果在雅思作文考试里面答非所问、错误百出、词不达意，怎么可能在以严谨、严格著称的英语学术体系里面生存呢？考官自然而然就会给这样的作文以低分，因为他认为这个考生没有或者欠缺在英语学术体系里面生存的基本能力。

心中了然这个雅思考试的基本目的，对我们写好雅思作文是很有帮助的，它能让我们在准备雅思考试的过程中做到有的放矢，少做无用功。现在各种雅思作文考试的辅导资料浩如烟海，各种培训机构多如牛毛，但只要仔细打量，就会发现其中龙蛇混杂、良莠不齐。很多辅导资料都很强调总结雅思作文的常用句式、常用词汇甚至常用的段落模板，这些工作固然重要，但永远不要忘记所有这些都是为了让我们的雅思作文符合英文学术写作的标准和要求。如果不是这样，一味纠缠于一些表面的词句段，那无异于照猫画虎、舍本求末了，万望各位考生注意。

那怎么才能让我们的雅思作文符合英文学术写作的标准和要求呢？首先大家应该了解一下什么是真正的英文学术语言。正式的英文学术语言首要的一个特征就是正式性和严肃性，具体体现为不用简写、不用口语、不用个人语气、不直接引用别人的原话或对话。道理很简单，学术文章不是小说，小说为了生动，给人一种身临其境的感觉，经常使用口语话、个人化的语言，也经常直接引用人物之间的对话。而学术文章则要求客观、严谨、条理清楚、逻辑清晰，没有或者极少个人的感*彩。举例来说，我们在口语或者小说中经常使用词的缩写形式或简易形式，比如you're, there's等等，但在雅思作文中我们就不能用这些简写形式，而应该用完整形式you are, there is；又比如口语中经常把冰箱叫做fridge, 雅思作文中我们就应该用refrigerator不用fridge。另外，在论述的时候最好不要直接引用别人的话：如"......", says 某某某，而应该用According to 某某某，然后再用自己的语言简述他的观点，这样显得很专业。当然，你如果用了这些简写或者口语化的语言也不能说你错了，考官也能理解你的意思，但会极大影响考官对你作文的整体印象和评分。

Ken老师点评:雅思作文学生习作(1)

题目：Some people believe the fittest and strongest individual and team achieve the great success in the sports. Others believe success depends on their mental attitudes. Discuss on both sides. What is your opinion?

Sports, no matter what their scales are, are the combination of intelligent and psychological factors and physical power of team members. To pursue success in sports, these factors are all indispensable and interactive.
(Comments: 1.(Don’t repeat your mistakes!))

Some people may argue that the only determinant for winning a sport is the physical strength of the team members. Namely, the stronger the individuals are, the higher possibilities the team will succeed in a competition event. We have to admit that the majority of sports require team members to have fit and powerful bodies. However, we should also notice that competition with other teams is not fighting with them. It is hard to image that a group of strongest apes win a game against a team of higher intelligent creatures.

( Comments: 2.(Pay close heed to the fact that you should use the noun form to function as the subject !) (Object clause is a good choice, and the non-predicate structure is also acceptable, yet never confuse them!))

Intelligent and psychological factors, therefore, play another part of important role in sports. Provided that a team is equipped with the strongest team members, it is still less likely for them to succeed in one game if its members are pessimistic and lack of strategies in competing with other teams. One famous case which can illustrate the importance of mental attitude and intelligent factors is that the Chinese football team’s successful entrance in the World Cup. The motto of that team’s coach is that attitude determinates everything. With the guidance of their coach, Chinese football players finally won the entrance competition with the support of positive attitude and appropriate strategies.

(Comments: 3. (Excellent! Very good application of exemplification!)

(The original slogan of the Chinese football team is “Attitude is everything!”) What you used here may seem a little Chinglish.)

Intelligent and mental power and the physical strength of team members are mutually influencing one another. The advantage of physical condition may probably add confidence to team members and inspire their best psychological state. On the other hand, the optimistic and positive attitudes are most likely to stimulate the best potential of individuals and bring them encouragement and ultimately lead to success. It can therefore be arguably concluded that mental attitude and physical condition are both significant in pursuing a team’s victory.

Very excellent as a whole!

Just keep up the good work and do the same in IELTS exam!

Pay close attention to details!

Grades: 7

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