雅思作文修改：网络代替学校 .6.28雅思作文预测

雅思考试主要是通过对考生听、说、读、写四个方面英语能力的考核，综合测评考生的英语沟通运用能力，实现“沟通为本”的考试理念。对于雅思考生来说，也有很多考试难点和政策盲区需要帮助解答。今天雅思无忧网小编准备了雅思作文修改：网络代替学校 .6.28雅思作文预测，希望通过文章来解决雅思考生这方面的疑难问题，敬请关注。

雅思作文修改：网络代替学校

很多同学发来四段式的作文给我，但是真正能写好四段式的没有几个，下面这篇的错误比较典型，给大家参考。

题目如下：schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through Internet, and they can study just as well at home.What extent do you agree or disagree?

Scientific developments have brought us many benefits, among which the internet must be the most spectacular one. In the near future, it might take the place of schools so that it is convenient for children to obtain knowledge.

我很高兴地看到你可以把上课时讲的很多句子和单词应用在这篇四段式文章中，但是我划横线的句子表现出了你一定的倾向性，你可以把这句改为（there has long been a discussion about the opinion that whether the internet could take the place of schools.）这样可以做到客观的引入话题，而不表明观点。

With time going by, Internet has become an encyclopedia in some degree. It seems that there are an increasing number of children are fund of getting information from the Internet. Some of them are in a great need of gaining information while others just surf it as a hobby. As is known to all that encyclopedia is large enough to satisfy those little children and of course the knowledge in textbooks is included. In that case, there is no need to employ teachers to teach children. As a result children can study just as well at home and get a good grade.

However, there are certainly demerits in studying at home with the Internet. People who make the webpages can make mistakes and some knowledge is completely wrong. As a child, it is not an easy job to distinguish the information. Unlike at home, children are able to obtain knowledge in a systematic way. Besides, children who study at home are more withdrawn than those who study at schools. What is more, children don’t require teachers and that means people who now are teachers will lose their jobs. It may cause the dissipation of human resources and their families are in great trouble of making a living.

上面一段有两个问题：

1.负面的问题我觉得分析的不够，错误应该只是一个小的方面，更重要的应该是：没有人引导，孩子的学习效率会比较低下。

2.我读了划横线的句子后，感觉你的观点应该是支持网络替代学校，因为你用了，certainly这个让步词，但是你在下面一段却表明了跟我的猜测相反的观点，前后不一致，这个是致命的错误。

My view is that schools are still necessary in the future. That is the best way for children to not only get their knowledge in a systematic way but also develop their interpersonal skills. Internet is, in the long run , just a tool to widen their horizons.

如果我打分的话，Band 5

2008.6.28雅思作文预测

一级预测：*决策类 (Highly Possible)

入选理由：英国上次(6.14)考的就是*决策类话题，由于考题会在不同考区轮换使用，因此近期“轮换”到中国大陆考区的可能性还是比较大的，毕竟该类话题一来本来就是雅思作文最常考的两大话题之一，二来上一次考试中国大陆考区考的是青少年教育类话题，这次不太可能重复同类话题(5月到6月青少年教育类已经考了N多次了......)。

推荐练习真题：Some people believe that the government should not spend too much money on outer space exploration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

二级预测: 意识形态类 （抽象话题类） (Possible)

入选理由：很简单，该类话题很久没考了。

推荐练习真题： Some people believe that people moving abroad should try to adapt themselves to the new culture while some people think there is no need to do so. What is your opinion?

三级预测: Report (分析建议类) (Maybe......)

入选理由：6.28的考试将是2008年上半年最后一次雅思考试，根据往年规律，report一般一年考4次左右，今年目前为止仅考了1次，上半年有可能再考一次！

推荐练习真题: Today, many children are forced by their parents to study all kinds of courses in an early age. What are the reasons? What effects do you think the practice would bring about to the children?

图表作文重点关注：表格题(Table)

最后还是祝28号考试的同学们好运，希望大家考完了别忘了到这里来“汇报”一下作文的英文原题以便于我对未来可能考的题目能作出更加准确的预测！

本文摘自新东方俞伟国博客

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