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三条让你的雅思作文简洁的建议 A类(学术类)雅思作文题集锦

三条让你的雅思作文简洁的建议


  雅思作文简洁的建议一: 避免空洞的单词和词组

  1. 一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息,完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子:

  When all things are considered, young *s of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.

  这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为:

  Young *s of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

  2. 有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换,例如:

  Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

  “due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简化为下面的表达方式:

  Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.

  雅思作文简洁的建议二: 避免重复

  1. 尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。

  2. 有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换

  雅思作文简洁的建议建议三:选择最恰当的语法结构

  选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要,但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑因素。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则:

  1. 一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。

  2. 避免频繁使用“there be”结构,

  3. 把从句改为短语或单词。

  4. 仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候,才使用被动语态。

  5. 用更为精确的一个动词来代替动词短语,例如下面这句话:

  My grandfather didn't have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends.

  Stand around doing nothing其实可以用一个动词来表达,即loiter:

  My grandfather didn't have time to loiter with his school friends.

  有时两句话的信息经过组合完全可以用一句话来简练地表达,例如:

  Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too *all to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree.

  两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简洁的句子:

  Profits from the farm were sometimes too *all to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree.

A类(学术类)雅思作文题集锦

1.有人认为对待动物应该如宠物一般,有人认为动物是食物和衣服的主要来源,请讨论

Some people think that the animals should be treated as pets, others think that animals are resources of food and clothing. What is your opinion?
  
2.现代社会电视广告在人们的生活中十分普及,人们需要的也*,不需要的也*,尤其是青少年受到的影响特别深,有些人认为要限制广告,你的看法?
  
With the development of market economy advertisements have become a dominant feature in television industry descript the rich information brought by TV, there still exits strong critici* against TV advertisements. Write on article *yzing the passive and negative effects of TV advertisements.
  
3.人类登月进行探索已有30多年历史,有人认为类似科研活动浪费金钱时间,你的看法如何?
  
Some people believe that government spends too much money on space research while there are still a lot of problems on the earth. Do you agree or disagree?
  
4.有些人认为*不应该把大量的资金用于艺术建设,因为对于国家来说有更重要的事情要解决,你的看法?
  
It is wrong that our government pays more money to the artist projects, for instance, there are more and more paintings and sculptures appearing at the public places, because there are more important things to do. What is your opinion?
 
5.贫穷国家现在已经认识到卫生,教育,贸易对国家发展的重要性,许多人认为发达国家应该对这些贫穷国家予以支持。你的观点?
  
Some people think that the developed countries should fund international aid to poor countries to help these developing countries to develop domestic health, education and trade. What is your opinion?
  
6.现代生活中,许多人认为现在的工作压力比以前大了,闲暇时间更少,你的看法如何?

Many people think that work nowadays is more stressful and less leisurely than in the past, how about you opinion?
  
7.现代社会青少年犯罪问题(三个方面:吸毒,酗酒,自杀)
 
Young drug abuse is a serious problem nowadays in many countries, what are the reasons for this and what can be done to combat it? (drug 毒品药丸,alcohol and tobacco,香烟和酒精,* 自杀)
  
8.许多人对新千年很乐观,认为这是一个机会让我们的世界发生一些变化,你是否同意这种说法,你希望看到世界有何变化?
  
Some people think that the new Millennium is the opportunity while others think it is danger. What do you think about it and what do you expect to happen in the new Millennium.
  
9.发展中国家是应该致力于发展本国的科技研究还是发展人文教育上?你的看法?

Should developing countries concentrate on Improving industrial skills and modern technology or should they promote education first?

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