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雅思英语作文加分 求一篇雅思的英语作文

求一篇雅思的英语作文

Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?

The improvement of the life level due to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their education and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of education and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.

Health care and education, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the duty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on education and healthcare should be made the duty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by individuals.

Government free provision of education and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with education and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the duty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of education and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.

Government’s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly due to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to reduce the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.

Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, individuals’ sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.

To sum up, government should provide free education and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better educated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.

这是我在雅思救星上看到的一篇雅思作文范文,相信对你有用,你也可以去看看其它的范文。

雅思英语作文喜欢的季节 高分范文

雅思英语作文喜欢的季节
Title:MyFavoriteSeason
Therearefourseasonsinayear,eachseasonhasitsuniquebeautyandcharacteristics.Amongthem,myfavoriteseasonisautumn.
AutumnisusuallyinSeptembertoNovember.Thetemperatureisneithertoocoldnortoohot,averagingaround15-20degreesCelsius.Thefirstthingthatcomestomindwhenautumncomesisthefallingleaves.Theleavesonthetreesgraduallyturnyellowandthenfalltotheground,creatingagoldenlandscape.Thisisaseasonwherenature'spaletteshowcasesit*ostcolorfulside.
Anotheraspectthatmakesautumnspecialistheharvestseason.Harvestingofcropssuchasrice,wheat,andvegetablestakesplaceduringthistime,symbolizingthebountyofnatureand农民的hardworkanddedication.Ifinditquiteinterestingtoseehowpeopleofdifferentprofessionscometogethertoreaptherewardsoftheirlabor.
Autumnisalsoaseasonof宁静andclarity(晴朗).Theskiesareusuallyclearwiththesunshiningbrightly,givingeveryoneasenseofpeaceandcontentment.Itisaseasonwhereonecanenjoythebeautifulsceneryoutsidewhilefeelingthecrispautumnair.Theclearskiesandbeautifulscenerymakeautumnaperfectseasonforphotographyandoutdooractivities.
Asanenthusiastofoutdoorsactivities,Ifindautumntobetheperfectseasonforexploringnature.Theweatherispleasantforlongwalks,andthechangingleavesprovideafeastfortheeyes.Hikinginthemountainsduringautumnisanunforgettableexperience,astheviewsaresimplybreathtaking.
Inconclusion,myfavoriteseasonisautumnduetoit*eautifulscenery,harvestseason,andpeacefulatmosphere.Itisaseasonthatoffersusanarrayofactivitiestoenjoywhileprovidinguswithasenseofcontentmentandonenesswithnature.

考到雅思四个7分告诉我的一个道理

为了备战明年的高考,堂弟发了两篇英语作文想让我给改改。因为知道我曾经拿下过雅思平均7.5分,每科7分以上的好成绩,还想让我给他讲讲当时备考的心得。于是,尘封的记忆又打开来,重新回想起当初两个月内,三次冲刺雅思的经历。

在澳洲,根据其移民政策,如果雅思四门都是7分的话,是可以给移民加分的。为了一毕业,就可以马上申请办绿卡移民,从大学毕业前的最后一个学期时,我开始备考雅思。对于雅思,因为听力和写作是选择题,评分是客观的,我以前也学习了很多这方面的应考技巧,所以是很有把握这两门可以过7分的。 对于写作和口语,因为是考官主观打分,有时会存在一定的争议,也是大多考生的弱项, 所以一开始我就把精力主要放在这两门。

第一次冲刺雅思时,因许久没考过了,就抱着一种试试的心态, 也想找一找考试的感觉。当时并没有使劲的复习,因为还有大学的作业和考试要准备。大约正是因为放松无所谓的心态,第一次成绩出来时,让我惊喜不已。听力和阅读果然是我的强项,考了两个8分,就连口语也考了7分,唯独写作在7分以下是6.5分,平均7.5分。

考试成绩出来以后,我就认为写作这次没能过去,可能是判卷老师审的太严,说不定下一次,若是遇上我熟悉的写作话题,便能一次性通过。抱着这种侥幸的心态,我又马上报考了下一次考试。可惜这次幸运之神并没有降临,不仅我的写作依然是6.5分,就连口语也下了7分(6.5分的成绩)。

拿到第二次成绩时,沮丧和不甘充斥着我的内心,但并未反思自己的学习态度。因为从小我养成的习惯是,宁愿好好琢磨学习方法,不愿真下努力去做太多的练习题。妈妈看到我当时的状态,也深知我‘磨刀十年,砍柴一天’的本性,不与我多废话就发了一个典故让我看。

典故讲的是一个*油翁的故事,平凡无奇的一个*油翁,却能将油从铜钱孔里穿过注到葫芦里,连铜钱都没湿,问他是如何做到的,他回答道:“无他,唯手熟尔”(没什么,只是熟能生巧罢了)。

当时看完‘无他,唯手熟尔’这句话,把我堵的说不出任何辩解的话。 没错,写作没能考到7分,就是我练的太少,手生,也没别的借口。这句话激发了我的斗志,誓要把写作征服考过7分。

于是,我开始认认真真的制定了复习写作的计划:

1. 每天必须要练5篇的大小作文,考前能写上个100篇。必须有数量,才能从量变到质变。

2. 练习时,要按真实考试的来,除了计时以外,我还打印了雅思写作的答卷纸,用来熟悉卷面。手写,不用电脑打,增强手感。

3. 下笔写作文前,必先构思,3分钟给小作文,5分钟给大作文,保证卷面开写以后能工整整洁。最后还剩5分钟时,就要写完,留出时间读一遍,检查语法错误,进行最后的修正。

4. 按时写完作文只是基础,为了能够提高自己的写作水平,再把作文打在word文档里,进行二次修改。之前有请人帮我修改过文章,可是不管怎样,都是人家按自己现有的水平,在文章上进行修改,对我水平的提高并没有太大的帮助。只有自己挑出自己的毛病,还能提出修改的建议,才能有效。

5. 总结不同类型的文章格式和话题。比如,小作文的话,有线图,饼图,流程图,柱状图,表格图和地图的格式。大作文的话,有经济类,文化类,学习类等等的话题。每一种类型都有各自的特点,做完一类的练习,就总结出可以套用的观点。

如此实打实的练了大半个月的时间,迎来了我的第三次考试。谢天谢地,这次我终于顺利的通过了(听力8,阅读7.5,口语7.5,写作7,平均7.5)。

堂弟啊,你姐我也偷过懒走过捷径,想凭着运气通过考试。但不是每次都能如愿的。没有通不过去的考试,只有不愿付出相应努力的自己。 你若想高考达成所愿,姐就送你一句话—无他,唯手熟尔。

虎小咪一问:从学习考试中,你悟到过什么道理吗?(欢迎大家在文末留言,分享自己的经历!)

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