2021雅思写作task2高分范文：关于儿童广告该禁吗?

大作文范文：

People today are too often bombarded with various advertisements on television, in newspapers or on the running buses or subways, a large proportion of which are children targeted. Some people claim that they should be prohibited because of the possible negative influence they might generate. However, I tend to have a different viewpoint.

今天的人们经常在电视、报纸、公共汽车或地铁上被各种各样的广告围绕，其中很大一部分广告是针对儿童的。一些人认为，儿童广告应该被禁止，因为他们可能会产生负面影响。然而，我倾向于有不同的观点。

Some people may point out that too much exposure to advertisings imposes too much stress on children as well as their parents. The advertisers usually have a deep insight into children's psychology and behavior which are taken advantage of in their advertisings to make their products, whether a toy, a snack or some other goods, more appealing to the young minds. As a result, the innocent young are very likely to fall prey to the predators and ask their parents to buy whatever is advertised, regardless of the price and the function.

有些人可能会指出，过多地暴露在广告中会给孩子和他们的父母带来太多的压力。广告客户通常对孩子的心理和行为有深入的了解，他们利用自己的广告来*自己的产品，无论是玩具、零食还是其他商品，对年轻人的吸引力更大。因此，无辜的年轻人很有可能成为掠食者的牺牲品，并要求他们的父母购*任何广告，不管价格和功能如何。

However, advertisers themselves hardly agree with these arguments, claiming that the advertisements are full of useful information. This is true to a certain extent. In some cases, parents tend to choose the right quality products according to what a commercial introduces, especially after careful comparison. Nevertheless, in some others, quite the reverse is true. That is to say that the information in a commercial is far from helpful, but rather harmful, since almost all kinds of advertisings exaggerate their merits but conceal their demerits.

然而，广告商们自己也不同意这些观点，他们认为广告中充满了有用的信息。这在一定程度上是正确的。在某些情况下，父母倾向于根据商业的介绍选择合适的产品，尤其是在仔细比较之后。然而，在其他一些国家，情况恰恰相反。也就是说，广告中的信息远不是有用的，而是有害的，因为几乎所有的广告都夸大了它们的优点，但却掩盖了它们的缺点。

Overall, I believe that advertisings marketed towards children should be strictly examined and controlled by the related authorities because children are the disadvantaged group of people and prone to any tricks and deceits. But it is too much to put a ban on them.

总的来说，我认为针对儿童的广告应该受到相关部门的严格审查和控制，因为儿童是弱势群体，容易受到任何欺骗。但是，对他们实施禁令有点过分。