2021雅思写作task2高分范文：孩子课外活动的影响

写作题目：

Some people think watching TV every day is bad for children. Others think it is good for developing children as they grow up. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

写作题目讲解：

第一段：看电视是孩子们很重要的课余活动，有些孩子甚至对电视成瘾。

第二段：看电视太多的消极面，对身体健康不利。减少和同龄人以及家人的互动与交流。对智力发展不利，有些电视内容不适合小孩子等素材。

第三段：适量有选择的看电视有益儿童发展，增加知识，和探索世界的兴趣。丰富课余生活，和父母或同龄人一起看有助于更好的亲子或朋友互动等素材。

第四段：适量地选择适合孩子的电视节目，并且尽量和父母或同龄人一同看电视有助于孩子的健康发展，否则电视将对孩子产生消极影响。

写作范文：

Watching TV has always been an important part of after school life for children, and some of them even become TV addicts. Therefore some people advocate ‘no TV for children’.

看电视一直是孩子们课余生活的重要组成部分，他们中的一些甚至成了电视迷。因此，有些人主张“不为孩子们看电视”。

Of course this is understandable. Firstly, children sitting too much time in front of a screen tend to have poor eyesight and weak body due to lack of physical exercise. They can also be lost in the virtual world and be insensitive to people around them, including their parents, and this is detrimental to their family relationship and their emotional development. Another concern is about their mental development which needs various types of interactive activities, but obviously excessive TV viewing cannot meet such requirement. The worst part can be some programs which are not proper for children to watch. Too many advertisements and news focusing on emergency and disasters on the screen are also a disadvantageous point for immature people who are prone to be influenced negatively.

当然，这是可以理解的。首先，由于缺乏体育锻炼，坐在屏幕前的孩子往往视力差，身体虚弱。他们也可能迷失在虚拟世界中，对周围的人，包括他们的父母不敏感，这不利于他们的家庭关系和情感发展。另一个问题是他们的心理发展，这需要各种类型的互动活动，但显然过多的电视观看不能满足这样的要求。最糟糕的部分可能是一些不适合儿童观看的节目。对于那些容易受到消极影响的不成熟人来说，屏幕上过多的关注紧急情况和灾难的广告和新闻也是不利的。

However watching TV in moderation with proper parental supervision can be good for children. There are plenty of educational programs which can expand children’s knowledge and spark their interest in exploring the world where they may not have the opportunity to visit in real life, such as the nature and wild life. TV is not only an educational source, but is also a recreational activity. It can help enrich their after class activities. For example, children are always excited to watch cartoons and they would experience the adventure together with the characters in the show. The positive effects would be enlarged if children are able to share their TV time with their parents or peers, because they would have topics in common and more communication can be followed.

然而，适当的家长监督，适度地看电视对孩子是有益的。有很多教育项目，可以扩大儿童的知识，激发他们的兴趣探索世界，他们可能没有机会在现实生活中访问，如自然和野生生命。电视不仅是一种教育资源，也是一种娱乐活动。它可以帮助丰富他们的课外活动。例如，孩子们总是很兴奋地看卡通片，他们会和剧中的角色一起经历冒险。如果孩子们能够与父母或同龄人分享他们的电视时间，积极的影响将会扩大，因为他们会有共同的话题和更多的交流可以遵循。

In general, I’d like to conclude that whether TV is good or bad is determined by how parents manage it. If parents limit TV hours and designate some educational and interesting programs and they keep their children accompanied, healthy viewing habit would be established and positive effects would be maximized. Otherwise, watching TV can be a worrying situation.

总的来说，我想断定电视是好是坏是由父母如何管理的。如果父母限制看电视的时间，指定一些教育性和趣味性的节目，并陪同他们的孩子，就会养成健康的观看习惯，并最大限度地发挥积极作用。否则，看电视可能是令人担忧的情况。