雅思写作关于学习时间过长的利与弊范文

写作题目：The most important thing of people's life is his or her work. Without a satisfying career, the life is meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

写作题目讲解：

此题目为教育类话题，体裁为议论文下属的利弊分析类，要分别陈述将大部分时间花在学习上对社会和孩子自身的影响。

写作范文：

With the increasing proportion of employed workers, whether or not one’s career is his or her whole has become a widely debated topic. While some believe that job is the most crucial element of our life, others maintain that there are many other essential things which are meaningful to us. Given that life is colourful and non-inevitable relationship between success of career and the meaning of life, I strongly disagree that there will be nothing left if we failed to reach the peak of career.

随着就业人数的增加，一个人的职业生涯是否是他或她的全部生活已经成为一个广泛争论的话题。有些人认为工作是我们生活中最重要的因素，而另一些人则认为还有许多其他对我们有意义事情。鉴于生活是丰富多彩的，事业的成功与生活的意义之间是不可避免的关系，我不同意如果我们不能达到事业的顶峰，就不会留下任何东西。

For a start, that many other aspects in life can actually bring fond memories to us. Having good relationship with family members and friends is a flawless illustration. It is not uncommon that many elderly couples live in *all and cozy flats, who didn’t really succeed in terms of their careers. However, just because of their pure and long-lasted relationship over the last few decades, they are satisfied and often feel that they are very lucky to meet each other. Similarly, raising a child can also boost parents’ sense of satisfaction and they are more likely to have a meaningful life. It is evident that there are still many factors to determine one’s meaning of life other than career.

首先，生活中的许多其他方面实际上能给我们带来美好的回忆。与家人和朋友保持良好关系是一个完美的例证。许多老年夫妇生活在小而舒适的公寓里，这并不少见，他们的职业生涯并没有真正成功。然而，仅仅因为他们在过去几十年里纯洁而持久的关系，他们感到满意，并且经常感到他们非常幸运地遇见彼此。同样，抚养孩子也能提高父母的满足感，他们更有可能有一个有意义的生活。显然，除了事业之外，还有很多因素来决定一个人的人生意义。

Secondly and more importantly, it is illogical to link the extent of success to the worth of life. Imagine a thirty-year old chief executive officer, who whole-heartedly spent everything on his business. He strove a lot and unconcerned with his health at present just because he longed for his delightful life after retirement. However, since his intensive workload and unhealthy lifestyle, he was diagnosed with cancer before entirement. How meaning will you rate of this man’s life? In this case, I would contend that his life should have been more splendid if he spent more time on different aspects, even though he might not succeed in his career. No wonder Bible has that, “What does it profit a man, if he gains the whole world and forfeits his life?”

其次，更重要的是，把成功的程度与生命的价值联系起来是不合逻辑的。想象一下一个三十岁的首席执行官，他全心全意地把所有的事情都花在自己的事业上。他现在非常关心自己的健康，因为他渴望退休后的快乐生活。然而，由于他繁重的工作量和不健康的生活方式，他被确诊为癌症之前。你对这个人的生活有何意义?在这种情况下，我认为，如果他多花点时间在各个方面，即使他的事业可能不会成功，他的生活也会更加精彩。难怪《圣经》中有这样一句话：“人若赚得全世界，赔上自己的生命，有什么益处呢?

Having discussed that job is only a part of life and it does not necessarily make one’s life be more meaningful, I firmly disagree that job is everything of life. If all people were more open-minded about their jobs and paid more attention on other stuff in their life, I am confident that they would have more enjoyable experiences which are likely to make their life more interesting and meaningful.

在讨论过工作只是生活的一部分，并不一定使人的生活更有意义的时候，我坚决不同意工作是生活的全部。如果所有人都对工作更加开放，对生活中的其他事情更加关注，我相信他们会有更多的愉快的经历，这些经历可能会使他们的生活更有趣和有意义。

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