雅思小作文解析及范文：三个国家从事各个产业人数对比柱状图

类型

柱形图

题目

The charts below show the distribution of employment in agriculture, industry and services in three countries in 1980 and the projections of distribution in 2020.

下图是1980年三国农业、工业和服务业就业分布情况，以及2020年的分布预测。

范文解析

解析

柱状图描述的是三个国家中从事农业，工业和服务业的人数比例的不同。首先要注意的这个图中应该时态的选择，特别是将来时态的表达方式，同时在描述的时候可以简单的分为三个行业进行描述：农业，工业和服务业。按照5段的结构进行描述比较不会混乱，同时要着重的突出变化的描述，使用相关的衔接词汇进行前后的对比。

高分表达

How many SVO

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Agriculture-oriented

A and B, in both of which SVO.

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The 1980-2020 period

With n. doing (独立主格结构)

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范文

The bar charts compare how many workers were and will be employed in agriculture, industry, and services in three different countries in 1980 and in 2020.

这些柱状图比较了1980年和2020年三个不同国家的农业、工业和服务业中过去和将来有多少工人。

Seeing agriculture as the focus of economic development,Country B has seen a significant decrease within these four decades .In 1980, as many as around 70% workers were farmers in country B , far higher than that those in country A(just under 20%)and country C(only approximately 10% ) yet this figure will decline to only 40% in 2020 but still higher than that of Country A and Country C, in both of which fewer people will chose developing agriculture as their career.

看到农业作为经济发展的重点,B国已经明显降低在这些四十年。1980年,多达70%的工人都是农民在B国,远高于那些在国家(不到20%)和C(只有大约10%)然而,在2020年,这个数字将下降到只有40%,但仍高于国家和国家C,在这两个更少的人会选择发展农业作为自己的职业。

In Country A and Country B, the 1980-2020 period however saw an 20% growth in service industry from around 20% and 40% to almost 40% and 60% respectively, with more people working in services in Country C than in Country A. By contrast, 40% or so workers did and will land a job in service industry in both years.

在A和B国的国家,然而看到了1980 - 2020年期间增长20%在服务业几乎从20%和40%分别为40%和60%,与更多的人工作在服务国家C比A .相比之下,40%左右的工人做的,将在两年内找到工作在服务行业。

Industry is expected to be less important in 2020 than in 1980 in all three countries as the figures all decreased slightly. But it is noticeable that more workers are employed in this field in Country A and B ( roughly over30% )than in Country A and country C( less than 15%).

由于上述三个国家的工业数据均略有下降，预计2020年工业的重要性将低于1980年。但值得注意的是，A国和B国在这一领域雇用的工人(大约超过30%)比A国和C国(不到15%)多。

Overall, it is estimated that Country B will still be agriculture-oriented while Country C will be committed to enhancing services in 2020.

总体而言，预计B国仍将以农业为主，而C国将致力于在2020年加强服务。

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