雅思大作文范文：性去军队和警察等部门工作的权利

Task 2

类型

社会类

题目

Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

范文解析

本题讨论的是，女性是否和男性拥有同样的权利去军队和国家警察等部门就职。题目类型是议论文的双边观点类题目，可以采用4段式作文结构。

注：题目说的是“同等权利”并非“同等职务/角色”，写作时要注意区分

文章结构

P1：引入话题+亮明观点;

P2：论证题目第二个观点(为什么女性不适合服务于军队);

P3：论证题目第一个观点(为什么女性也应有同样的权利服务于军队);

P4：总结全文：重申中心论点。

高分话题表达

performing law enforcement and defending the country 执法保卫国家

the recruitment of women 雇佣女性

are inferior to 不如…./ 弱于….

physical strength and endurance 体力与耐力

be flustered 慌乱

gender characteristics 性别特征

communication security 通讯安全

Air Force 空军

long-term scientific and systematical training 长期系统且科学的培训

fight on the battlefield 战场上肉搏厮杀

高分结构

Although some people think…. 让步状语从句

If a women's army fought with…. 虚拟语气

When facing an emergency, 非谓语动词做状语位于句首

because of 原因状语

sth discussed above 非谓语动词做定语

to judge whether….. 动宾就够的宾语从句

范文

In many national right departments like police and army, both contemporary and ancient, the number of males clearly exceeds that of females. Although some people think that women are not suitable for such kind of work physically and psychologically, I believe that women are equally capable of performing law enforcement and defending the country.

在当代和古代的许多国家权力部门，如警察和军队，男性的数量明显超过了女性。虽然有些人认为女性在生理和心理上都不适合做这样的工作，但我认为女性同样有能力执法和保卫国家。

Some people against the recruitment of women to the military mainly consider the following factors. First, women are generally inferior to men in physical characteristics such as physical strength and endurance. Some famous wars, such as the Pacific War and the battle of Stalingrad, are seen that men were fighting in the frontier of the war. If a women's army fought with a men's army, then the latter would gain much probability to win the former. Second, women may also be weaker than men in terms of psychological endurance. When facing an emergency, women may be flustered rather than calm, missing out the first chance to think quickly about a rescue plan.

一些反对征召妇女参军的人主要考虑以下因素。首先，女性在体力和耐力等身体特征上普遍不如男性。一些著名的战争，如太平洋战争和斯大林格勒战役，可以看到人们在战争的前线作战。如果一支女军和一支男军交战，那么男军就有很大的可能赢得女军的胜利。其次，女性的心理承受力也可能弱于男性。当遇到紧急情况时，女性可能会慌乱而不是冷静，失去第一次快速思考救援计划的机会。

However, women should have the same rights as men to serve in the military. To begin with, the roles in the army are not just the soldiers with strong muscles and strength. In reality, because of their careful and patient gender characteristics, women have advantages over male soldiers in areas such as command and control, communication security, medical and health care. Furthermore, the number of female pilots in the Air Force is gradually increasing, and their higher army rank also reaches the Senior Colonel. It clearly shows that psychological and endurance weaknesses discussed above can be successfully overcome through long-term scientific and systematical training.

然而，女性应该有和男性一样的权利在军队服役。首先，军队里的角色不仅仅是有强壮肌肉和力量的士兵。在现实生活中，由于女性细致耐心的性别特征，在指挥控制、通信安全、医疗保健等领域，女性比男性士兵具有优势。此外，空军女飞行员的人数也在逐渐增加，她们的军衔也在不断提高，达到了大校的级别。这清楚地表明，通过长期的科学和系统的训练，可以成功地克服上述心理和耐力的弱点。

In conclusion, female soldiers are not as proficient as male soldiers in physical fitness, so it is not suitable for them to directly fight on the battlefield. Nevertheless, other roles also belong to the defense army. Therefore, it is incorrect and unfair to judge whether a person is suitable for the military only by gender. Women should have the equal right as men to enter the military but serve different sectors.

综上所述，女兵在体能方面不如男兵熟练，不适合直接在战场上作战。然而，其他角色也属于国防军。因此，仅仅根据性别来判断一个人是否适合参军是不正确和不公平的。妇女应享有与男子平等的参军权利，但应服务于不同的部门。

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