雅思 高分作文范文解读

中国人所写的雅思作文有结构但是却语言不够地道;，而外国人写的文章十分地道，但却又不符合雅思的标准，所以市面上总找不到好的雅思例文。如今老师要为大家收集整理的是 范文解读。

雅思 高分作文范文解读一：

Children who grow up in families which are short

of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of * life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some feel that the children of low income families are better equipped to deal with difficulties posed by the‘real world’when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these difficulties . The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident, but in fact require closer examination.

点评：1+ 1 模式，即后面一句是主题句。在本篇雅思作文高分范文的这一段中的主题句稍微有一些特殊，它真的否定了前面所提及的到的观点，从而表达出了自己的观点，另外还引出了下文。特别是在后面半句，感觉是在抛砖引玉。

雅思 高分作文范文解读二：

The popular wisdom is that children of poorer families learn early on the value of a buck, having had everything provided for them in their youth and oftentimes erroneously expecting the same situation in *hood. They are believed to be prone to overspending and financial irresponsibility. This belief,。

点评： 1 +3 模式，开始一句是主题句。从本篇雅思作文高分范文的这一段的内容能够看出，这是个让步段(相当于是分析自己并不赞成的观点)。尽管4段论的作文的主体段都是两面讨论，但本人依然是喜欢这样的写作，相当于是主体段的观点还是有关键性的，将让步段放在前面，后面一句话引出下一段，这样过渡很自然，而且自己的观点也比较明确。