雅思小作文范文

以下是其中一个题目;

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2021.

范文：

The pie charts compare visitors’ responses to a survey about customer service at the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and in 2021.

It is clear that overall customer satisfaction increased considerably from 2005 to 2021. While most hotel guests rated customer service as satisfactory or poor in 2005, a clear majority described the hotel’s service as good or excellent in 2021.

Looking at the positive responses first, in 2005 only 5% of the hotel’s visitors rated its customer service as excellent, but this figure rose to 28% in 2021. Furthermore, while only 14% of guests described customer service in the hotel as good in 2005, almost three times as many people gave this rating five years later.

With regard to negative feedback, the proportion of guests who considered the hotel’s customer service to be poor fell from 21% in 2005 to only 12% in 2021. Similarly, the proportion of people who thought customer service was very poor dropped from 15% to only 4% over the 5-year period. Finally, a fall in the number of ‘satisfactory’ ratings in 2021 reflects the fact that more people gave positive responses to the survey in that year.

小作文(A类)经验：

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在一篇文章里尽量不要使用重复的词，

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另一个地方被deline取代

论文写作更多的是关于信息分类和以简洁准确的语言表达这些信息的能力;

前一点尤为重要。如果您能够很好地对信息进行分类，则可以很容易地将其简明扼要地表达出来。

如果您有很多小文本，那么信息可能不够充分，导致重复和模糊(可能太多细节并不重要)。

每个人都知道根据图表挑选重要信息：

将一些信息放在一节中

将一些其他信息放在另一段中

进一步的信息在句子，更详细的归纳中进行了总结;

需要分析信息，并且可以以简洁明了的方式在句子中描述可以放在一起的信息。