雅思写作范文解析：犯罪与法律

今天写作规划师于君星老师为雅思考生们带来 范文解析：犯罪与法律 ，希望能给雅思考生们带来帮助。

By punishing murderers with death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

审题：
一、本话题属于犯罪类，同意与否的类型。写作中，考生需要进行适当的对比，得出在惩罚杀人犯方面，坐牢比死刑好还是不好的结论。

二、核心词汇：death penalty在适当语境中可以换成：be sentenced/condemned to death, capital punishment; commit murder在写作中可以换成commit homicide, kill *.等。

三、观点确定：同意life in prison比death penalty好

四、布局谋篇

让步段（death penalty的作用）	反驳段（death penalty不好，而life in prison更好）
l  serve as a comfort for those victimised ones to the largest extent l  deter potential criminals from committing offences	l  have no prerogative to deprive *. of their lives for whatever reasons l  be likely to create a savage social environment, thus boosting crime rates l  better explore human nature

五、 具体范文：
段：
S1：It has long been a convention that murderers are sentenced to death for what they have done towards victims（背景句）.
S2：However, considering that by executing convicted murderers, society is also guilty of committing homicide, I support the idea that convicted murderers should be sent into prison（个人观点：在惩罚杀人犯方面，赞同坐牢比死刑好）.
让步段：
S1：It is an inarguable fact that death penalty could serve as a most exhilarating comfort for those victimised ones（主旨句）.
S2：It is a seemingly most effective measure for the society to uphold justice in that the offenders get what they deserve at the utmost price that they could pay. （支持句）
S3：This also deters potential criminals from committing severe offences. （递进句）
S4：Would-be offenders, at the thought of possible punishment when caught, would feel panicked and thus give up their evil idea.（因果论证）

反驳段：
S1：However, death penalty seems plausible when in face of the following arguments. （主旨句）
S2：As stated in Declaration of Independence, everyone has an inalienable right of life. （分论点一：举例论证）
S3：That is to say, the society does not have the prerogative to deprive anybody of their lives for whatever reasons. （解释说明法论证）
S4：Worse still, capital punishment tends to breed a savage society where it may arouse an unwritten notion within people that cruelty could deal with cruelty and where crimes may prevail. （分论点二）
S5：What deserves further pointing out is that compared with death penalty, imprisonment could better explore human nature in that it allows the jailed wrong-doers time to reflect what they have done to the victims and to the society and permits their family or friends to visit them at regular intervals. （分论点三，因果论证法）
S6：Besides, when serving a sentence, inmates can also receive skill training so that they could turn over a new leaf after being reintroduced to the society. （递进论证）

结尾段：
S1：Therefore, death penalty should not be employed as a solution to murder, but imprisonment could as it protects human right of life, creates a lenient social atmosphere and acts as a better way to reduce crime figures. （总结全文，得出结论）

以上就是为雅思考生们带来的 雅思写作范文解析：犯罪与法律 ，希望能给雅思考生们带来帮助。