8月29号雅思大作文范文

8月29日的雅思写作大作文考题

Scientists believe computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people think the development has a positive impact, others think it is negative. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
科学们相信电脑已经比人类更聪明。一些人认为这样的进步是有积作用的，另一些人却不这么认为。说说你的看法

雅思范文：

段：社会背景+正反向观点+自己观点
Along with the highly-developed science and technology especially for Internet popularizing, computer invented by human seems to more intelligent than human in plentiful fields. However, some individuals deem that the impact brought about by computer will be potentially unfavorable. Others, nevertheless, including me, tend to deem that the computer bringing about the energetic motivation is prominent, given all-round improvement of efficiency of operations and improvement of quality of life.

二段： 外因+例证
To begin with, the positive impacts brought about by utilizing the intelligence of computer give rise to the all-round improvement of efficiency of operations. For example, both for corporations and *all businesses, computer has already been an indispensable part of office. Employees utilizing the computer can send emails to communicate with each other, compile the relevant work statements and develop applied software to replace the original work that demands plentiful labors, etc. Secondly, conducting teleconference and remote transaction by the means of a growing number of enterprises utilizing computer can greatly save relevant financial resources, material resources and manpower to promote the production efficiency improve further. From this point, the intelligence of computer plays the incomparable role in promoting the improvement of productivity.

三段： 内因+例证
In addition, the active influences brought about by applying computer intelligence can improve the quality of life of human. In current society, it is essential to cater for the needs of such a heavy population at the higher pace with best quality. The computer intelligence popularizing makes it possible to cater for the need of quantity and quality of products required in daily life. Besides, computer provides the unprecedented platforms and opportunities for people to obtain various resources and information that they are required with. Lastly, utilizing the computer promotes the emotional intercommunication between people, without territorial restrictions and time constraints.

四段： 让步段： 另一观点合理性+对此观点反驳
Admittedly, the computer utilizing will increasingly replace certain jobs that have been done by human, besides, it can also cripple the subjective initiative of human to form the situations of vicious spiral of over-depending on computers. However, almost all of computer doing the relevant jobs that should have been done by humans are humdrum, repeatability and even dangerousness, what is more, computer utilizing can make it possible to stimulate human themselves imagination and creativity to make computers be in better service of human .

五段： 结论段：
On balance, after summarizing the outlined perspective above, I am convinced that the computer utilizing and popularizing can contribute to the comprehensive improvement of social productivity and quality of life of human. Meanwhile, utilizing computers by human should be more advisable to avoid the situation generated by applying it inappropriately.