雅思写作复习资料之charity organization

复习资料再现：

Some people think that charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own country. But others believe that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

题目解析 ：

这是一篇关于charity organization的文章，先分析题目。题目的后一句话是关键，分析一下这句话就包含了两个信息点。个是你要谈谈两种观点（discuss both view），二个是说说你自己的观点（give your opinion）。两种观点分别是上文提到的一些人认为，慈善机构应该只帮助自己的人民（Some people think that charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own country），还有一种观点就是一些人认为应该帮助需要帮助的人，不论他们身处何地（others believe that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live）.

美句欣赏 ：

When people suffer some natural disasters and are confronted with difficulties, they may expect the aid from others, especially charity organizations.
这句话很适合作为整篇文章的开头，因为这句话很自然地引出了话题--charity organizations。
There is no denying that it is more effective for charity organizations to give aid to local people. However, how to
ensure fairness among different peoples is the priority for charities.
本句适合做为一二两种观点之间的转换，起到了很好的承上启下的作用。这句话既对种观点做了很好的总结，还顺利过渡到了二种观点，值得大模仿。
In conclusion, charity organization should give aid to people who are in great need without considering their social background, their nationality and something irrelevant.
本句运用到了In conclusion，很明显作者暗示文章要在这个地方结束了。像In conclusion这类词就很适合作为结尾用词，既能很好的总结上文所说的东西，还是很好的提示词。

知识拓展--著名的慈善机构

The International Red Cross （际红十字会)
The Rockefeller Foundation (RF) （洛克菲勒基金会）
Doctors Without Borders （无界医生）
The Wildlife Conservation Society(WCS)野生动物计划护组织
International Union for Conservation of Nature and Natural Resources（IUCN0（世界自然计划护联盟）
International Fund for Animal Welfare(IFAW0)（际爱护动物基金会）
World Wide Fund For Nature（WWF）（世界自然基金会）