雅思大作文范文：教孩子合作的最好方式是团队运动吗

大作文题目为：

题目：

The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

教孩子合作的最好方式是团队运动吗?

范文：

There is too much debate about whether children should be learned to be more competitive or cooperative members of society. In my opinion, both behaviours are important and cooperation is more important than competition.

关于孩子应该学会成为社会上更有竞争力的人还是更愿意合作的人，存在着太多的争论。在我看来，这两种行为都很重要，合作比竞争更重要。

On one hand, as we live in the very competitive society, we need to teach our children the sense of competition in a positive way. The most obvious advantage to encourage competition among children is that it makes them more creative and open minded and opens the doors for better future opportunities for them. For illustration, children work hard in the study because they compete with other clas*ates to receive high marks, this will help them to get a very good job in the future. Moreover, they become more independent and rely on themselves because they know that nobody else will be there to do their duties.

一方面，由于我们生活在一个竞争激烈的社会，我们需要以积极的方式教育我们的孩子竞争意识。鼓励儿童之间的竞争最明显的优势是，它使他们更有创造力和更开放的思想，并为他们未来更好的机会打开大门。举例来说，孩子们在学习中努力学习，因为他们与其他同学竞争获得高分，这将帮助他们在未来得到一份很好的工作。此外，他们变得更加独立和依赖自己，因为他们知道没有人会在那里履行他们的职责。

On the other hand, I believe that cooperation is mandatory to be encouraged for many reasons. Firstly, cooperation helps children to learn from each other. For example, when I was at school team, I learned how to play table tennis with my friends and we learn a lot of skills from each other and when we play in the final round with other school teams, we get a very good score in the final. Secondly, cooperation teaches children the skills linked to sharing, as a result, they become a kind member of society. Finally, cooperation is the key component for better personality as well as prevent from individuality.

另一方面，我认为，出于许多原因，必须鼓励合作。首先，合作帮助孩子们互相学习。例如，当我在校队的时候，我学会了如何与我的朋友打乒乓球，我们互相学习了很多技能，当我们在最后一轮与其他校队，我们得到了一个很好的分数。其次，合作教会孩子与分享相关的技能，因此，他们成为社会的一员。最后，合作是更好的个性和防止个性的关键组成部分。

To sum up, both cooperation and competition have their own advantages. However, I tend to think that cooperation should be encouraged more in children.

总之，合作和竞争都有各自的优势。然而，我倾向于认为应该鼓励孩子们更多的合作。