雅思大作文范文：教育公平

大作文题目

Some people think that it is too difficult for poor people or people from rural areas to go to university. So that the universities should make it especially easy to them. Do you agree or disagree?

大作文范文解析

本题讨论的话题是穷人或是来自农村的学生很难上大学，所以大学应该对他们降低入学标准。该问题属于单边讨论-选择同意或不同意。

大作文文章结构

P1：引入话题+亮明观点(不同意);

P2：这种做法有失公平,只有公平竞争才能保证大学教育的优质。

P3：学生很可能因为受到特殊待遇而不努力学习。

P4:让步段 (counter-argument)—大学资源有限，无法保证每个人都能够接受大学教育。穷人确实因为资源有限无法接收到良好的教育而错失很多机会。

P5：总结全文。

大作文范文

It is a common sense that students from rural communities have less access to higher education. Under such cases, some suggest that the problem should be solved by guaranteeing more chances for disadvantaged students through lowering standards for enrolling them into universities. From my perspective, I am not in favour of the above statement.

农村社区的学生接受高等教育的机会较少，这是一种常识。在这种情况下，一些人提出，通过降低入学标准，为弱势学生提供更多的机会，从而解决这个问题。从我的角度来看，我不赞成上述声明。

To start with, it is unfair for their counterparts who are from urban areas or wealthy background since they have to take the same college entrance examinations or interviews under the same asses*ent rubric. Consequently, the results turn out to be unreliable and will wind up being meaningless. The privilege is likely to result in the over‐reliance on their impoverished barckground.

首先，对于来自城市地区或富有背景的人来说，这是不公平的，因为他们必须在同样的评估报告下接受同样的大学入学考试或面试。结果是，结果是不可靠的，最终会变得毫无意义。这种特权很可能会导致对他们贫困的土地的过度依赖。

Worse yet, if university education opportunities are easily offered to poor students, they tend to take it for granted. In fact, as many poor students usually endeavour to exert their academic capacities for university scholarship and bursary, their academic performances will be affected when their goals are easily achieved, which could limit their academic achievement.