雅思培训类作文范文 雅思g类大作文范文

下面以剑桥模拟题第五套Test two Task one 为例，看看小作文的写作内容。
The first bar chart compares the percentage of reasons for study according to age of students, while the second one indicates the percentage of employer support by age group in terms of time off and help with fees.
As can be seen clearly, there is a gradual decrease with age in study for career, decreasing from as high as 80%, the top, under 26 to short of 20% of those over 49. In stark contrast, the percentage of students studying for interest increases steadily/ significantly from 10% for the youngest to 70%, the peak, for over 49 group, over three times of that of study for career. It is noticeable that the two motivations draw even at 40% for 40-49 year olds.
It is apparent that the youngest age group under 26 receives the most support from their employers, at approximately 60%. However, this sponsoring reduces *oothly to the bottom at roughly 30% of the middle age 30-39, before ascending remarkably to 41% again for those over 49.
In conclusion, it is likely that young people mainly study for career so they get the more support from their employers. （189 words）

从上面可以看出，第一段通常是直接点题，改写题目就可以了。主体通常分为2-3段，主要是数据的描述和比较，如果是两个图的话，一图一段就可以了；如果是单图的话，需要按照比较的层次进行分段。最后一段对图表进行总结或总的概述就可以了。

雅思小作文雅思写作小作文干货：必写特征数据及小作文常用词
提到雅思小作文数据题，很多同学都会不由自主的挠头：“最讨厌数字了，”“我数学不好”，“哪个该写，哪个不该写呢”等等都会成为考生的常见问题。不仅如此，由于考生词汇量的缺乏，小作文数据类词汇也是他们很头疼的事。今天这篇文章会将上面的问题一网打尽，让雅思考生的小作文写作不再难。
备考时，面对饼图、柱图、线图等各式各样的数据，学生很容易忙乱，再加上考试时间短（20分钟），更怕写超了（或写不完）。那么，什么样的数据该写呢， 请注意，如果图中出现以下数据，就一定要“交代“。
在静态表格图中，极值，等值，倍数关系是必写的，其中极值包括最大值和最小值。在动态图例如折线图，我们必须要写的数值包括：起点，终点及转折点，其中转折点你只需介绍非常明显的转折点即可，否则由于小作文考试时间短，很有可能写不完。在其他动态图如柱图饼图等，请同学们注意，变化趋势是必写的特征数据，当然也是因为时间的关系，只需介绍明显的趋势即可。对于其他数据，只要在时间允许的情况下尽量多介绍就好。
谈到了趋势，我们肯定要用到上升，下降等等一系列词汇。那么，这些词在英文中到底该怎么表达呢。接下来我为大家进行了整理，而且都是一些简单又经典的词汇。请注意：每组最多背3个就足够。
一、动词，（括号里为过去时）
1. 表上升：go up (went up) / increase (increased) / grow (grew) / rise (rose)
2. 表下降：decline（declined）/fall(fell)/ drop (dropped)/ decrease (decreased)
3. 表波动的动词：fluctuate (fluctuated)
4. 表稳定于某一水平（的短语）：remain stable at/ remain steady at
5.表示经历了某种变化：see (saw)/ witness (witnessed) / experience (experienced)
6. 表示到达最高点（的短语）：peak at/ reach its peak at
7. 表示到达最低点（的短语）：reach its lowest point at/ fall to its lowest point at
8. 达到/位于：reach/stand at
9. 表占多少份额（的动词）： account for (accounted for) /represent (represented) /make up (made up)/constitute (constituted)
10. 表对将来数字的预测(以被动出现)：is expected / is predicted / is projected
11. 变成原来两倍或三倍：double/increase twofold, triple
二、形容词和副词，括号里为副词
1. 表急剧的形容词：sharp (sharply) /rapid (rapidly) /dramatic (dramatically)
2. 表持续的形容词：consistent(consistently)
3. 表显著：significant(significantly) / considerable (considerably)
4. 表很小幅度：slight (slightly)
5. 表大约：about / around/ approximately
6. 分别： respectively
经过了上面的整理，同学们看完后是否就没那么恐惧了呢？小作文写作真的不像大家想象得那么难。接下来就是行动的时间了，小作文和大作文一样，一定要多写多练，实践检验理论嘛。
接下来我想说下学生在大作文写作上的问题。中国考生普遍在写作上摒弃不了中国思维，从而写出的文章会有些不太符合外国文章的习惯，这些都很正常，用了十几二十几年的语言已经在我们的头脑中定型，想一下改过来也没那么容易。例如一个学生想表达为了使人们变得更加健康，我们需要改善一些饮食习惯，比如说不吃夜宵，要吃早饭等等，那么他翻译过来的时候就说“don’t eat food at night, and must have breakfast,”这里就不太符合英语的表达习惯，首先，祈使句是不可以用在写作里，而且更地道的表达应该是we should avoid having food at night，所以，就需要同学们在学习中多积累，并逐渐摒弃中文思维。
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论据分析雅思写作真题
阅读真题和雅思写作不得不说的关系：论据篇。
Topic：TV
is an essential part of leisure activities in most families. However,
some parents decide not to have a TV set in their homes, in order that
their children will devote enough time to invention and creation. Do you
agree or disagree with this attitude?
开头段：介绍文章背景，随着科学技术的发展，电视对人们的影响越来越大。
As
science and technology accelerates, television, as a powerful
invention, is becoming incredibly popular in people's daily life. People
can be informed of the current affairs and appreciate the affluent
programs at home. It seems to me that television will not whittle
children's creativity as has been exaggerated.
主体段第一段：开始论述电视对小孩创造力的好处1，电视让小孩子们在家就能了解到世界上发生的事情，新的科技发展，这些都会激发孩子的创造力，给他们带来灵感。
To
begin with, television is an effective means to make children
acquainted with the latest news and enlightens them on the latest
scientific advancement. Television reveals the recent development of
some researches, such as the new computing technology, clone technology
and genetic breakthroughs, which can inspire the imagination of children
and motivate them to conduct relevant experiments, making new findings
and breakthroughs in their familiar fields.

主体段第二段：论述电视对小孩创造力的好处2，一些冒险片可以培养小孩子的创造力，地理历史片通常是很有启发性的，可以扩大小孩子的知识面，丰富人生的经历。

Moreover,
along with the emergence of information technology, the knowledge
presented in textbooks cannot cater for children's curiosity any longer.
Programs like adventures can cultivate children's creativity and the
ability to tackle difficulty. Some scientific, detective and documental
programs, like Discovery and National Geographic, are so enlightening
and fascinating that even little children can be absorbed in. Other
well-chosen programs can initiate teenagers' aspiration to know about
the nature and stimulate their interests in science and technology.
主体段第三段：论述看电视对孩子创造力带来的坏处，可能会让孩子习惯被动接受信息，而不是自己学会发现。而且有的电视节目要不然就是理解起来太复杂，要不然就是不够有趣，因此看电视并不是一个好的开发创造力的方法。
There
is suspicion in some parents' minds that TV might retard their
children's creative ability or restrain kids' imagination because TV
viewers tend to receive information in a passive way instead of
discovering things with their own hands. Although people in the TV
industry have made great efforts to develop various programs, the
outcome is not satisfactory: either the program is too profound to be
understood or the topic is not interesting to attract TV audiences.
Thus, watching TV is hardly a good way to inspire children's creativity.
In many cases, it can draw attention away from their studies and spoil
their school education.
主体段第四段：还有一些别的方法也可以用来*创造力，比如写作，想象和原型描述也可以激发新的想法。
There
are some other ways to stimulate children's creativity, such as
writing, visualizing and prototyping, which can boost the flow of new
ideas. Something as simple as writing deepens every individual's
engagement. This is why all those competitions on breakfast cereal
packets encourage us to write in saying good comments. The very act of
writing makes us more likely to believe it.（稍作修改，用在这里做论据）
主体段第五段：权威并不是抑制创新，但实际上却经常如此。错误的领导方式会导致团队成员倾向于选择不承担本应属于他们的责任。
Authority
does not have to inhibit innovation but it often does. The wrong kind
of parenting will lead to the regrettable tendency of children to opt
out of team responsibilities that are properly theirs.（稍作修改，用在这里做论据）
结尾段：总结上文，表达自己的观点，电视并不会对小孩的创造力有不利的影响。
In
a word, it is my strong belief that television will not impair
children's creativity as is asserted. Nevertheless, the government and
the whole society should exert to eliminate the unhealthy contents on TV
and ensure the children with a favorable growing environment.

1.设计开头和结尾

关于作文的开头和结尾，中国古人早就有“凤头豹尾”一说，也就是开头和结尾是文章的重点。特别是开头。如果你不能在故事的开始就吸引考官，那他们就很难有耐心把整篇文章读完。所以投入更多的时间去考虑怎么写好开头，考官一旦对你开头感兴趣，他们会想知道得更多。写好开头后，再设计一个精彩的结尾，这会让考官对你的文章印象深刻。

2.训练书写能力

有些同学的英语字体龙飞凤舞，根本看不清楚到底写了什么，这就大大影响了作文的分数。因为考官也是人，没有耐心去仔细阅读这些“天书”。因此，我们要求学生养成良好的书写习惯，把字写得清楚、规范、工整。另外，在考试中，也不可随便涂写，造成卷面不整洁，阅读不便，之所以考试委员会选择铅笔答卷，就是不希望大家乱涂乱改。

3.阅读优秀作品

古人云：读书破万卷，下笔如有神。从中我们可以清楚地看出读与写之间的“暧昧”关系。中国学生为什么在雅思写作上难得高分呢?很重要的一个原因就是读的原版英语太少太少了。但凡优秀的作家都是从阅读别人的佳作开始，接着开始模仿，最后超越他们，形成自己的风格。所以我们的学生也应该从阅读优秀文章开始，抱着“他山之石，可以攻玉”的态度，把有用的表达方式，观点，框架等摘记下来，一字一句一段一篇地突破，模仿消化吸收，真正形成自己的风格。

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在雅思考试中，我们作文想取得高分的话，我们平时要多看范文下面是为大家整理的关于雅思g类大作文范文的相关资料，希望帮到大家。
雅思g类大作文范文一：
均衡营养是健康生活的关键
Althoughabalanceddietisimportant,thereareotherfactorswhichcontributetoahealthylife.Peopleinsomeculturesdonoteatabalanceddiet,butuselimitedfoodsources.Inaddition,lackofstresscouldwellbeasimportantasdiet.
Oneculturerelatedreasonconcernsenvironmentalorclimaticconditions.TheInuit,intheArcticCircle,liveinharshsurroundingsandtheirmajorsourceoffoodformanymonthsoftheyearisfish.Nutritionistsinindustrializedcountrieswouldnotconsidertheirdietbalancedorevenhealthy,yetInuitpeoplehaveflourishedinfoodfromtheseaforcenturies.Anotherculturalreasonisreligionbased.ManyHindusarevegetarian*ecauseoftheirreligion.Again,manydieticiansclaimthatvegetariani*isunbalancedbecausehumansneedprotein,especiallyfromanimals.Hindus,however,seemtobequitehealthy,sufferingnoilleffectsfromthelackofanimalprotein.
Themajorreasonfordisagreeingwiththebalanceddietargument,however,istodowithstress.Eventhoughpeopleinthepastdidnotalwayshaveabalanceddiet,somethingexistingonlyonpotatoesandbread,theylivedhealthylive*ecausethereafflictsurbanresidentstoday.Secondly,thereisalargepercentageofcontemporarypeoplewhodotheirjobs,thenrelaxinfrontoftheTV,andquiteofteneatjunkfood.Butseemhealthyenough.Theymaybespareddiseasebytheirrelativelystressfreelives.
Inconclusion,althoughitisundeniablethatabalanceddietisofsomeimportancetohealth,therearenodoubtmorefactorsthatmaygetinvolvedinaffectingpeople’shealthintermsoflivingenvironment,climateandstressinthem.
雅思g类大作文范文二：
教学能力
SampleEssay
>Beinganeffectiveteacherisabouthavingknowledgefromtrainingandexperiencefrompractice.Whileteachingcapabilitiescanbedevelopedwithexperience,itisalsoimportantthatyoushouldlearnprofessionalskillsthroughspecialtraininginthefirstplace.Ingeneral,schoolchildrenareexpectedtobenefitfromthoseteacherswhohaveenoughpre-jobtrainingaswellason-jobpractice.
Ontheonehand,somepeoplesaythatanexcellentteacheroughttobeformallytrained.Basedonthisview,tobesuccessfulintheteachingcareer,itisnecessarytogothroughaseriesoftrainingsessionsforobtainingsufficientknowledgerelatedtoteachingstrategyandpsychologythatleadtoasatisfactoryjob.Forexample,themakingofateacherisnotveryunlikethemakingofalawyer.Justasaqualifiedlawyershouldrequireagreatdealofinformationaboutlaws,soshouldaqualifiedteacherknowmuchaboutteachingmethods.Thatistosay,trainingcanmakeadifferenceintheteachingwork.ThisisprobablywhyinmanycountriesexistarangeofTeachers'CollegesorNormalUniversities.
Ontheotherhand,other*elievethatagreatteacheri*ornratherthantrained,asifbeingindependentofexperience.Accordingtothisopinion,eventhoughpre-jobtrainingisusefultosomeextent,whatmattersseemstobethatkindofpassionwhichissimilartonaturalexperience.Somuchso,teachingcapabilitiesarenotonlypoweredbycareerpassionbutalsogrowalongwithexperience.Hence,theremaybenoabsoluteneedtoacquiresufficientteachingtechnique*eforehand.Inshort,youcaneitherdowithordowithouttrainingtobecomeanoutstandingteacher.
Onthewhole,itisdebatablewhetheryouthinkthatagoodteachershouldacquireenoughtrainingorthatteachingcapabilitescanbedevelopedwithexperience.Thereisnoeasyanswertothisquestion.Theanswerdependsonwhoyouask,ofcourse.
雅思g类大作文范文三：
重犯出狱
Settingdangerouscriminalsfreeisnotunlikeputtingthesocietytothrowdicewithsecuritybecausethisgameisexactlythecasewiththere-introductionofcriminalsinsocietyinthesensethatgoodluckandbadluckaremixedwithresultsremainingtobeseen.Chancesarehabitualevil-doers,oncesetfreefromjail,continuetopresentaconstantthreattothesecurityofcommunities.Unlesssomecriticalrulesofthegamearechangedinreverse,there-introductionsystemcannotbejustified.
Forwantofanotherword,"revolving"isanadjectivethatmaybeusedtodescribeaprisondoor.Thedoorkeepsturningaroundtoletcriminalsinandout.Moreoftenthannot,criminalsaresetfree,caughtagain,freeagain,backtojailagain,soonoutagain,onlytobecaughtagain,andthenfreeagain.Mostcriminalsaresaidtohavebecomeimmunetocorrectionmeasuresaspunishmentsfortheircrimes.Alternatively,convictedcriminalsarenowinjail,andlaterroaminginsociety.Suchaviciouscyclemakesneithereconomicsensenorsocialsense.Intheend,thesocietyturnsouttobeasureloser.
Trueenough,keepingcriminalslongerinprison*eanshighercosts.Assuch,thisisaneconomiclossforthesociety.Fromanoppositepointofview,lettingthemoutmeansthesocietyislikelytopayanotherprice:security.Onbalance,ifmoneyisnottheissue,dangerouscriminalshadbetterbekeptwheretheybelongforalongerperiodoftime.Inthepresenceofrisingcrimeratesinsociety,thewisdomissafetyfirst.
It'stimetoreviewthere-introductionsystemwhiletheprisondooris"revolving."Ascrimesandpunishmentsareoutofsteps,thereleave*uchroomfordoubtaboutthegamebeingplayedinfavorofcriminalsratherthanofthesociety.Admittingthatallmenarecreatedequal,nothingcanjustifyseriouscrimesnotbeingpunishedseverely.
雅思g类大作文范文四：
晚生孩子
Parentingmaybeaslateaspossible,butnotlater.Researchshowsthatbytheageof30,awoman'schancesofconceivingbegintodwindle.Thereareadvantagestohavingchildrenyoung,althoughthesedayslifeisrarelythatsimple.Theargumentisthat,ifpeoplewantchildrenatall,iti*ettertostartasearlyaspossibleforthedevelopmentofthefamilyandthecountry.
Goodorbad,lateparentingisanewfashion.Despitecasesrelatedtounwantedteenagepregnancies,manypeoplechoosetobecomeparentslaterinlife.Thissocialmainstreamisparticularlyobviousamongpeopleofthemiddleclassinmostdevelopedcountries.Itisclearenoughthatmanywomenareputtingoffbabiesforcareerandfinancialreasons.Besides,ifpeopleareplanningaone-childortwo-childfamily,thereisindeednosuchahurrytobe'inthefamilyway'likethoseold-fashionedwomenacoupleofgenerationsago.Nowonderthatpeopleprefertowaituntiltheythinktheyare'ready'tobecomeparents,nomatterhowlateitmightbeorwhatcouldhappenasaresult.
Relatively,theconsequencesaremorenegativethanpositive,notjustforthefamilybutalsoforthecountry.Generallyspeaking,lateparenthoodwouldmeanasurplusofoldpeopleandnotenoughworkers.Thisislikelytostymiethecountry'seconomy.Incontrast,moreteenagemotherswouldmeanapopulation--economic--boom.Basedonthispresumption,womenshouldfinishhavingtheirfamilieswhentheyareyounger(than30)andthenhavemoreyearsofemploymentaheadofthem.Asexpected,theirchildrenwouldalsosoonercomeintothelaborforceandaddtothenationaleconomicgrowth.
Insum,thereseemtobealarmbellsonlateparentingbecausethiscouldbenefitneitherthedevelopmentofthefamilynorthesocietyintheeconomiccontext.Whilethedecisiontobecomeparentslaterinlifeispersonal,evenrealistic;thetimeforawomantogetpregnantiscertainlynot'forever'.Inparenting,itisonethingthatmodernpeopledonotdesirehavingonetoomany,butitisquiteanothertobetoolatetobecomeparentsforatleastonce.
以上就是雅思g类大作文范文的内容，希望对大家有所帮助哦。