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如何进行雅思作文检查 4月3日雅思作文范文

如何进行雅思作文检查


  雅思作文写完后,就需要进行检查,但从实际情况来看,很多考生对于雅思写作检查注意事项并不是非常了解,为此小编特收集整理如何进行雅思作文检查相关介绍,分享给大家,希望对大家有所帮助,文中观点仅供参考。
  1.是否使用了正确的语法结构,比方说,动词时态一致、主谓一致、用词准确、词性(尤其是名词、动词、形容词)、名词单复数、冠词错误和介词错误。
  2.句式是否有变化 (如各种从句的使用、分词结构等 )
  3.使用了一定的词汇量 ( 如用同义词或词组来避免过多的重复)
  4.标点、拼写没有错误。
  5.在每段的主题句中都表明了这个段落的中心思想,所有扩展句都紧扣主题。
  6.使用了过渡性词语,因而句子之间和段落之间都有逻辑性和条理性。
  7.每一段话都得到充分的展开。
  8.提供了足够的细节、例子或论据。
  9.明确的观点。
  10.每一段话都紧扣文章的主题。
  1、3、4、6为考试时检查的重点,最先检查首段,和每段的首末句。
  以上就是雅思作文检查的相关介绍,除了最为基本的单词,语法,句型变化外,我们还需要注意文章本身的逻辑性以及完整性,最后祝大家都能考出好成绩。

4月3日雅思作文范文

发贴:北语雅思

这是个很古老的题目的翻版。1999年有过这样一个题目:

Contrary to people's belief, international touri* does not promote understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree?

范文:

Every year, hundreds of millions of people move around to see a different part of the world. It is natural to assume that tourists who have seen other countries have a better knowledge of the people. That assumption also leads to the conclusion that international touri* promotes understanding between nations. How true is this? Let us examine what tourists do in a different country.
First, before going abroad, tourists are often told by their travel agents of the possible hazards which sometimes include local people. They are given example of extreme cases where victims are always the travelers. Then, when they arrive, they are immediately taken to their hotels in big coaches. They flood places where local people don't go. Their shopping, meals, entertainment all take place in secluded areas. They wear a bubble all the way. Apart from speaking to the guide and a few shop assistants, tourists rarely talk to the local people. To make it even worse, they meet pickpockets, they are ripped off by dishonest traders. Furthermore, very few local people bother to talk to them out of a genuine interest in the guests' country, people and culture. Therefore, when asked how much they know about the local people, their answer is "very little".
If someone really wants to understand a different culture, he has to learn its language, stay there for at least a few month without wearing a bubble, learn how to curse and swear, bargain with a vegetable vendor and then he can say that he understands the people.(258 words)
简评:
这是一个已在西方得到广泛讨论的题目,普遍被接受的答案是旅游起不到促进民族、文化之间的交流与理解。
不同文化所推崇的东西也不同,这里有一个political correctness的问题。
要注意西方的时尚,如裘皮大衣、红木家具就不为青年人所推崇,参加旅游团也是退休的老头、老太太们的事。我们所追求的内容,如私人轿车、(旅行团式的)出国旅游在一些西方人看来有点“傻”。一些雅思考官就是这样的人。他们理应只评判我们的语言,但内容上能与他们的思想合拍岂不更好?
注意第二段中 first, then, to make it even worse, furthermore 的用法。

摘自《IELTS应试指南》,北京语言大学出版社,2000年10月出版,作者:陈卫东

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