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Topic：TV
is an essential part of leisure activities in most families. However,
some parents decide not to have a TV set in their homes, in order that
their children will devote enough time to invention and creation. Do you
agree or disagree with this attitude?
开头段：介绍文章背景，随着科学技术的发展，电视对人们的影响越来越大。
As
science and technology accelerates, television, as a powerful
invention, is becoming incredibly popular in people's daily life. People
can be informed of the current affairs and appreciate the affluent
programs at home. It seems to me that television will not whittle
children's creativity as has been exaggerated.
主体段第一段：开始论述电视对小孩创造力的好处1，电视让小孩子们在家就能了解到世界上发生的事情，新的科技发展，这些都会激发孩子的创造力，给他们带来灵感。
To
begin with, television is an effective means to make children
acquainted with the latest news and enlightens them on the latest
scientific advancement. Television reveals the recent development of
some researches, such as the new computing technology, clone technology
and genetic breakthroughs, which can inspire the imagination of children
and motivate them to conduct relevant experiments, making new findings
and breakthroughs in their familiar fields.

主体段第二段：论述电视对小孩创造力的好处2，一些冒险片可以培养小孩子的创造力，地理历史片通常是很有启发性的，可以扩大小孩子的知识面，丰富人生的经历。

Moreover,
along with the emergence of information technology, the knowledge
presented in textbooks cannot cater for children's curiosity any longer.
Programs like adventures can cultivate children's creativity and the
ability to tackle difficulty. Some scientific, detective and documental
programs, like Discovery and National Geographic, are so enlightening
and fascinating that even little children can be absorbed in. Other
well-chosen programs can initiate teenagers' aspiration to know about
the nature and stimulate their interests in science and technology.
主体段第三段：论述看电视对孩子创造力带来的坏处，可能会让孩子习惯被动接受信息，而不是自己学会发现。而且有的电视节目要不然就是理解起来太复杂，要不然就是不够有趣，因此看电视并不是一个好的开发创造力的方法。
There
is suspicion in some parents' minds that TV might retard their
children's creative ability or restrain kids' imagination because TV
viewers tend to receive information in a passive way instead of
discovering things with their own hands. Although people in the TV
industry have made great efforts to develop various programs, the
outcome is not satisfactory: either the program is too profound to be
understood or the topic is not interesting to attract TV audiences.
Thus, watching TV is hardly a good way to inspire children's creativity.
In many cases, it can draw attention away from their studies and spoil
their school education.
主体段第四段：还有一些别的方法也可以用来*创造力，比如写作，想象和原型描述也可以激发新的想法。
There
are some other ways to stimulate children's creativity, such as
writing, visualizing and prototyping, which can boost the flow of new
ideas. Something as simple as writing deepens every individual's
engagement. This is why all those competitions on breakfast cereal
packets encourage us to write in saying good comments. The very act of
writing makes us more likely to believe it.（稍作修改，用在这里做论据）
主体段第五段：权威并不是抑制创新，但实际上却经常如此。错误的领导方式会导致团队成员倾向于选择不承担本应属于他们的责任。
Authority
does not have to inhibit innovation but it often does. The wrong kind
of parenting will lead to the regrettable tendency of children to opt
out of team responsibilities that are properly theirs.（稍作修改，用在这里做论据）
结尾段：总结上文，表达自己的观点，电视并不会对小孩的创造力有不利的影响。
In
a word, it is my strong belief that television will not impair
children's creativity as is asserted. Nevertheless, the government and
the whole society should exert to eliminate the unhealthy contents on TV
and ensure the children with a favorable growing environment.

1. 题目中遇到生词怎么办?

总体来说，雅思写作题目中的词汇属于基础词汇，基本不会涉及到高难度词语。但是，如果在考试中偶尔碰到不认识的词该怎么处理呢?

首先，如果题目background information出现两个对比观点，如果一方观点中有词汇不认识，可通过另一个观点推出该词的大致意思。例如：Some people think students should go to boarding schools instead of living at home. Do you agree or disagree? 此题中，比方说有同学不认识boarding school，那么可以通过live at home推测出其意思，因为，这两者是对立关系，所以，学生住在家里的对立面应该是住在学校里，由此推测boarding school应该是指寄宿学校。

此外，有些生词后面会给出具体的例子，那么我们可以根据例子来推测该词的意思。比方说，In many countries, fossil fuels such as coal, natural gas and crude oil are the main source of energy while in some other countries, the use of alternative sources of energy such as wind power and solar energy is increasingly encouraged. To what extent do you think this is a positive development? 很多同学都不认识这个题目中的fossil fuel和alternative sources两个词，但是我们可以发现，这两个词后面都跟了具体的例子，通过分析例子，我们发现他们分别有共性，一种是传统能源而另一种则是清洁能源，故此，推断出这两个词的意思。

但是，如果实在推测不出生词的意思，那么只有避开生词部分，转而讨论另一方面，比如boarding school VS living at home这个话题，如果考生不熟悉boarding school，那大可以转向讨论学生住在家里的好处。

2. 注意题目中细节信息

There are an increasing number of juvenile delinquents. What are the causes of this phenomenon? How can we solve this problem? 这是很典型的犯罪类题目，很多烤鸭们看到这个题目很兴奋，因为大部分培训老师都会在课堂上讲到这类犯罪类话题。但是，这个题目还是会有不低的偏题率。首先，由于审题不细致，juvenile(青少年)这个词容易被忽略，因此，写作对象便被扩大成整个社会的犯罪。此外，increasing这个词也很重要，题目中提问的是“为什么会有越来越多的青少年犯罪”，体现了一个犯罪率上升的趋势，而不是单纯的“为什么会有犯罪”。所以，审题时应当注意一些细节信息的表达。

There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones? 注意题目中的第一问——这些问题是什么，应当分别从social、medical和technical三个角度分析*使用带来的问题。但是，很多考生却错误地整体分析*带来的消极影响，忽略了三个方面的分析。