北京培训雅思作文范文题目 5月到9月的雅思A类作文题目

我这里有这样的一篇雅思大作文范文，哈哈，给分吧，楼主~

雅思作文高分范文：教育和医疗是*承担还是个人承担？

这是一篇7分的雅思作文高分范文，其中有许多的高分句型以及运用的恰到好处的词组、词汇，文章的题目是：教育和医疗是*承担还是个人承担？现将译文及范文分享给大家，希望对备考雅思的朋友能够有所帮助。

译文：

由于经济的发展，生活水平的提升促使人们更多地关注精神生活，以及教育和医疗，但是由谁来支付教育和医疗费用已经成为热门话题。

医疗和教育这两个社会生活的基本部分一直是公众关注的焦点。有人认为这两方面的服务费用应该由*来支付，公众免费享有；而有其他人认为这个费用应该有公众自己承担。对我来说，一般的教育和医疗的费用应该有*承担而对于一些特殊的需求而产生的费用由个人自己承担。

*对公众提供免费的教育和医疗能够体现他们服务于公众的本职责任。公众履行了向国家纳税的义务，就有权利享受来自*的回报服务，包括教育和医疗这两方面。在促进社会发展中的责任角色，*通过保证教育和医疗的权利，鼓励公众为社会做更多的贡献。

*在这两方面的投资对于确保社会平等具有好处。由于免费，每个公民都可以充分利用这些社会服务，而不需要担心由于自己缺乏如社会地位社和人际关系等的社会会资源而受到不公平的对待。而且，这对于减少贫富之间的不同有所帮助，至少在这两方面的权利中，可以创造更加和谐的社会氛围。

不可否认，如果公民足够的富有，或是当他们需要某些方面的特殊服务是，或是当*缺乏预算资金时，个人分担一些费用似乎也是合理的。但是，极少数的特殊需求不能代表公众的一般共同需求，而且预算不足不能免除*的职责。

总之，*应该给公众提供免费的教育和医疗。仅当人们接受了更好的教育以及拥有更健康的体魄是，社会氛围才能更加和谐，社会发展才能更有动力。本文源自雅思作文救星，转载请注明出处。

范文：

Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?

The improvement of the life level due to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their education and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of education and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.

Health care and education, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the duty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on education and healthcare should be made the duty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by individuals.

Government free provision of education and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with education and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the duty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of education and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.

Government’s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly due to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to reduce the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.

Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, individuals’ sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.

To sum up, government should provide free education and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better educated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.

With the extremely rapid development of the society, increasing young people choose to accept the higher education(此处要点明what is increasing.并且开门见山，指明上大学，而不是higher education,因为国外的higher education不只有university.建议改为：the number of young people choose to enter the university has increased in order to enhance their competitiveness. )

Yet, it is indisputable that the tuition (FEEs) is (are) really high, and some family(families) cannot afford it, because of which, personally, I insist that it should be a duty of the government to pay the course fees. In my essay, I will talk(discuss) about this topic on twofold.

First of all, it benefits individuals a lot to pay the tuition by the governments.(我认为这里应该是条件句：it benefits individuals a lot if the government pays the tuition fee.如果只说*交学费benefits individuals a lot的话，会让人感觉太泛泛。这个中心句涉及的东西太广，建议你说，例如，Tuition fees pay by government could decrease the burden faced by a family.然后围绕这个小范围展开讨论。) (AS)We all know(known), studying is not an easy job to every person, and the one who want to have some achievements in the academic areas must pay a great of efforts. There is no reason to require the students, who are trying their best to get a good result in their study, to earn(PAY?) the large sum(amount) of money for their further (university)education. In order to encourage this kind of students to continue to work hard to(and) gain more professional skills to make sure they can lead (to) high quantity lives after their(把THEIR去掉） graduated, it is a vital and effective option for the governments to pay for their tuition （fees, 下同）.

More importantly, it （点明what is not only for...)is not only for personal benefit, but also for governments. Owning to the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology, modern societies need much more high-tech talents. That is a quite useful method to drive more young person to pursuit the higher education, and (the same time可以去掉） to give them the belief that they should put their shoulder to the wheel to return the society.

To sum up, paying the cursers is a symbol of society progress. It gives people dwelling in the society a kind of belonging, and makes individuals become more unity. Therefore, I reaffirm that the tuition should be paid by governments.（最后一段看的不是很懂，希望楼主改进）

总体来讲，楼主写的这篇文章架构是清晰的，只是有时过多追求高难度的超长句子和偏难的词汇。只是想说，雅思作文并不需要太多这样的句子和词汇。因为我们要拿的不是9分，而是要注重句子的fluent.当有一个中心句时，后面的话一定要围绕中心句展开。中心句要高度概括后面要说的话，也要做到后面每一句话都不离开前面的中心句。

下面是一篇范文，是从悉尼科技大学出版的图书里面摘抄的，希望楼主体会一下这篇文章的感觉。

题目，it is very important that children should study hard at school, time spent playing sports is tme wasted. Do you agree.

We could argue that children go to school to study so that they may become fully productive *s and good citizens. We should ask whether playing sport helps chilren to become better people. If so, sport is not a waste of time.

No sensible person will deny that it is important that students study hard. The school day is broken up so that students can attend classes in different subjects in order to learn what areas they are most likely to enjoy and succeed at in later life. It is very important that the schools offer a wide range of subjects to cater to all the students in their care. After all, the school is preparing the students for life and for the workforce.

However, it is also true that students need more than the knowledge of a subject. They need to know how to work in groups to achieve a mutual goal, how to work as a team. Where better to learn those skills than on the sports field? Any of the team sports involve coordination with other players, understanding and adopting a team mentality. These skills are too useful to be ignored.

Furthermore, it is important that people be healthy, and good health is not so easily achieved in a sedentary society. Sport gets students outside and gives them good reason to run about, thus countering hours spent sitting still.

So although school studies are undeniably important, we should regard time spent playing sport as time we spent.

1）2008.1.10（旧题回放）
Some people think children’s spending time on TV, video and PC games is good, while others think it is bad. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
（2）2008.1.12（旧题回放）
Some people think that criminals should be given longer terms in prison, so as to reduce the crime rate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
（3）2008.1.19（新题初现）
Old generations often hold some traditional ideas on the correct way of life, thinking and behavior. However, some people think that it is not helpful for the young generations to prepare for modern life in the future. What’s your opinion?
（4）1.26（新题初现）
Unemployment is getting increasingly serious in many countries. Some people think students only need to get primary education, while others think secondary education is necessary. What’s your opinion?
（5）2008.2.2（语义升格）
Some people think people can exploit animals for any purpose they need, while others do not think so. What is your opinion?
（6）2008.2.14（语义降格）
An increasing number of people choose to live in big cities. What problems will this bring about? Should the government encourage people to live in *all towns?
（7）2008.2.16（新题初现）
An American film actor once said ,“Tomorrow is important and precious. ”Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree or disagree?
（8）2008.2.23（语义升格）
Some people think imported food exerts positive impacts on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
（9）2008.3.1（新题初现）
Schools offer a wide range of courses such as physical education, music, economics, philosophy, math, English，geography, physics and history. Among all these subjects, which one do you think is the most important and which one is the least important?
（10）2008.3.8（新题初现）
The number of cars keeps increasing, so road systems should be expanded. Some people think the government should pay for it, while others think the car owners should pay for it. What’s your opinion?
（11）2008.3.13（新题初现）
People should look after their health as a duty to the society they live in rather than personal benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
(12)2008.3.29（新题初现）
Some people think government should ensure the healthy lifestyle. of people, but others argue that it should be decided by individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
(13)2008.4.5（旧题回放）
Aircraft uses more fuel than cars and produces more pollution. Some people suggest the non-essential use of aircraft like international travel should be discouraged. Do you agree or disagree?
(14)2008.4.12（语义升格）
More working people are busy with work and have no enough time to spend with their family and friends. Why does this happen? What are the effects on family life and society as a whole?
(15)2008.4.19（新题初现）
Figures show that some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of the population who are aged 15 or younger. What do you think are the current and future effects of this may be for those countries?
(16)2008.4. 24（语义升格）
Teachers used to convey information, but now with wide resources of information, there is no role for teachers to play in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?
(17)2008.5.10（旧题回放）
Some children can learn efficiently by watching TV. Therefore, they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
(18)2008.5.22（旧题回放）
Some people think that schools should concentrate on academic classes, because they are helpful for future career. But they think music and sports classes are not useful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
(19)2008.5.31（新题初现）
Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think the success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
(20)2008.6.5（旧题回放）
Some people think that university students should specialize in one subject, while others think universities should encourage students to learn a rang of subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
(21)2008.6.14（语义升格）
Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
(22)2008.6.21（新题初现）
Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do, but others think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems well by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
(23)2008.6.28(语义降格)
With technology speeding up, more and more young people begin to use mobile phones and the Internet, but old people have little chance to be exposed to them. What ways could mobile phone and the Internet be useful to old people? How do old people be encouraged to use this new technology?
(24)2008.7.5 (语义降格)
Some people think students should learn more practical courses like computer, but others think they should learn more about theoretical courses like geography and mathematics. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
（25）2008.7.12（新题初现）
Some people support development of agriculture, like factory farming and scientific creation of fruits and vegetables, while others oppose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
（26）2008.7.24（新题初现）
Some people think that in the modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other，while others say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
分析：Independent: 1. Sophisticated science and technology renders it possible to perform. daily tasks like shopping, banking, all by ourselves. 举例扩展甚至可以使用tele-commuting and tele-educatioin 2.Concept of people has changes, which means family ties or bond is weaker now. Seldom can we see four generations living under the same roof. Meanwhile, boom of nursing homes proves this too.
Dependent: Globalization is an unavoidable trend.联想世界是不是相互依赖的更多了呢？扩展的话大家可以用cultural, economic and even environmental cooperation.
(27) 2008.7.26（同类合并)
Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefit is in the world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
(28) 2008.8.09
task1 : a column chart, about some countries' numbers per 1000 people of using mobile phones and personal computers.
task2 : government encourages industrial and business move out of the large city and into the regional areas , do you think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
(29)2008.8.16
Some people think the media should not report details of crimes to the public.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
(30)2008.8.31
Some people think that international travel makes them prejudiced rather than broad-minded. Give the reasons why people fail to benefit from such travel and how to improve the understanding of countries you visit.
分析：该题目的话题为international travel, 应重点放在“游客未能从国际旅游中变得思想更为开放和宽容，而是增加的对当地旅游国的进一步的偏见”来论述。同时必须给出解决国与国互相理解的解决方案。可以说，全文应围绕“international travel" "prejuced " "not broad- minded", "fail to benefit""how to improve understanding"这几个关键词展开论述。如果在文章有过多的篇幅在论述“international travel"给人们带来的好处的话，文章就很难上7分了。其实该题隐含的话题是'cultural conflict" 和“cultural communication" 即是是'cultural conflict"导致“fail to benefit from international travel" 和如何在国际旅游中采取有效措施来促进“cultural communication" 由于目前的写作考题， 尤其是A 类写作考题在题目中给出很多信息关键词，并且规定的写作范围越来越狭窄，从而让很多考生载在写作审题这一关，也让背诵了大量的范文的“烤鸭”失去了用武之地。而类似的话题在05/03/05的考题中也有体现。 Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local customs and behaviours. Others think the host coutry should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 该题在措词上就更加明确了。" visitors to other countries" "local customs and behaviours" " host country" " welcome cultural difference" 这些关键词，使得大部分考生知道如何“下手”，同时， "Discuss both views and give your opinion." 的指令，也让考生怎么写都不会有太大的失误。
(31)2008.9.6
Once children start school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
(32)2008.9.13
People all know it is important to protect the environment, but they make no effort to protect it. Why? How to protect the environment?
(33)2008.9.18
criminals are imprisoned,many argue think that education and job training should repalce the former to deal with criminals.To what extent do you agree?
这可是我自己收集的08年大作文哦！还有老师分析的思路！！

论据分析雅思写作真题
阅读真题和雅思写作不得不说的关系：论据篇。
Topic：TV
is an essential part of leisure activities in most families. However,
some parents decide not to have a TV set in their homes, in order that
their children will devote enough time to invention and creation. Do you
agree or disagree with this attitude?
开头段：介绍文章背景，随着科学技术的发展，电视对人们的影响越来越大。
As
science and technology accelerates, television, as a powerful
invention, is becoming incredibly popular in people's daily life. People
can be informed of the current affairs and appreciate the affluent
programs at home. It seems to me that television will not whittle
children's creativity as has been exaggerated.
主体段第一段：开始论述电视对小孩创造力的好处1，电视让小孩子们在家就能了解到世界上发生的事情，新的科技发展，这些都会激发孩子的创造力，给他们带来灵感。
To
begin with, television is an effective means to make children
acquainted with the latest news and enlightens them on the latest
scientific advancement. Television reveals the recent development of
some researches, such as the new computing technology, clone technology
and genetic breakthroughs, which can inspire the imagination of children
and motivate them to conduct relevant experiments, making new findings
and breakthroughs in their familiar fields.

主体段第二段：论述电视对小孩创造力的好处2，一些冒险片可以培养小孩子的创造力，地理历史片通常是很有启发性的，可以扩大小孩子的知识面，丰富人生的经历。

Moreover,
along with the emergence of information technology, the knowledge
presented in textbooks cannot cater for children's curiosity any longer.
Programs like adventures can cultivate children's creativity and the
ability to tackle difficulty. Some scientific, detective and documental
programs, like Discovery and National Geographic, are so enlightening
and fascinating that even little children can be absorbed in. Other
well-chosen programs can initiate teenagers' aspiration to know about
the nature and stimulate their interests in science and technology.
主体段第三段：论述看电视对孩子创造力带来的坏处，可能会让孩子习惯被动接受信息，而不是自己学会发现。而且有的电视节目要不然就是理解起来太复杂，要不然就是不够有趣，因此看电视并不是一个好的开发创造力的方法。
There
is suspicion in some parents' minds that TV might retard their
children's creative ability or restrain kids' imagination because TV
viewers tend to receive information in a passive way instead of
discovering things with their own hands. Although people in the TV
industry have made great efforts to develop various programs, the
outcome is not satisfactory: either the program is too profound to be
understood or the topic is not interesting to attract TV audiences.
Thus, watching TV is hardly a good way to inspire children's creativity.
In many cases, it can draw attention away from their studies and spoil
their school education.
主体段第四段：还有一些别的方法也可以用来*创造力，比如写作，想象和原型描述也可以激发新的想法。
There
are some other ways to stimulate children's creativity, such as
writing, visualizing and prototyping, which can boost the flow of new
ideas. Something as simple as writing deepens every individual's
engagement. This is why all those competitions on breakfast cereal
packets encourage us to write in saying good comments. The very act of
writing makes us more likely to believe it.（稍作修改，用在这里做论据）
主体段第五段：权威并不是抑制创新，但实际上却经常如此。错误的领导方式会导致团队成员倾向于选择不承担本应属于他们的责任。
Authority
does not have to inhibit innovation but it often does. The wrong kind
of parenting will lead to the regrettable tendency of children to opt
out of team responsibilities that are properly theirs.（稍作修改，用在这里做论据）
结尾段：总结上文，表达自己的观点，电视并不会对小孩的创造力有不利的影响。
In
a word, it is my strong belief that television will not impair
children's creativity as is asserted. Nevertheless, the government and
the whole society should exert to eliminate the unhealthy contents on TV
and ensure the children with a favorable growing environment.