美国老师的雅思作文范文赏析

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美国老师的雅思作文范文赏析

题目：

Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of * life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

参考范文：

Some feel that the children of low income families are better equipped to deal with difficulties posed by the “real world” when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these difficulties.The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident,but in fact require closer examination.

The popular wisdom is that children of poorer families learn early on the value of a buck ,and are thus naturally better suited to stretching money when times get tough in *hood. Inversely, the children of wealthy families,thoseborn with a silver spoon in their mouths,are believed to be completely ignorant of the tentimes erroneously expecting the same situation in *hood.They are believed to be prone to overspending and financial irresponsibility. This belief,though logical,overlooks one key point which is,of course,education.

The basis of this argument is,of course,knowing the value of money ,and the idea that children of the poor know this,and those of the wealthy do not.Who though,is in a better position to teach their children the value of money,someone skilled in earning and keeping it,the wealthy parent,or someone who can not seem to acquire it,the poor parent? Both wealthy and poor children are equally likely to acquire an education in money,whether it is formal,or in the school of hard knocks. Conversely, both children are as likely to ignore this education.

A poor child may believe that one can get along,if not as easily,without wealthy.A wealthy child may be well trained by a parent steeped in the knowledge of money management,the key to developing this skill is education.

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1。试卷发下后，请花半分钟的时间来浏览作文的题目，这里包括议论文在内。
2。此后，请看第一部分的题目，明确以下几点
1）属于什么题型的图表，是一个曲线图，一个饼图，一表格，一个流程图还是一个物体以及其他类型的图表
2） 是一幅图还是两幅或者是以上的图
3）时间、字数以及其他的要求
3。用5分钟的时间分析并形成以下的内容
1）注意不同类型图表的技巧（包括时态、语态、关键描述词语与句型）
2）划出并分析题目中的关键内容，分析图表中的关键特征点（依据各种图表的特点来决定）
3）考虑结构（开头引言，描述特征，可能总结）注意以下
开头不能与文章已经给出的东西一样，用自己语言表达；
描述关键以及有代表性的点或者是趋势；
在语法与句法正确的基础上，力求用不同的句型组合（如简单句，复合句，定语/表语/宾语/非谓语从句），用近意词语；
正确表达文章所给信息；
在可能的情况下做简单的总结；
不要发表有个人或者是评论性的句子；
标点符号，单词的拼写应该正确；
4。书写的时候注意流利与工整，采用现代式的书写格式
5。留有时间检查，保持卷面的整洁

技巧性套句（仅供参考）
开头句型(用简单的句子给出尽可能多的信息WHEN，WHAT，WHERE，有特色。)
一般有两种，一种是主动一种是被动。
1)The chart/graph/table/diagram/process (show,reveal,illustrate,demonstrate,depict,describe,indicate)
2)According to/As can be seen from/As shown in/It is clear/apparent from/It can be seen from
结尾句型（如果没有可以充分说的，可以不用结尾。结尾不要节外生枝。最好不要出现很明显有结尾特征的词语“in conclusion”）
中间关键句型————☆要注意认真审查题目，弄清楚要描述的数据究竟代表什么，单位是什么，用什么方式表达。
OBJECT （描述物体）
注意点：要明确以一定的顺序来写。从左到右或者是从上到下，从内到外（根据物体自己的特点）等等。把题目中给出的部件详细描述。（如202的自行车）
句型：介绍功能 The illustration is of a _______ which is designed to (do something)
↓
说明构成部分 A ______ is made up of /consists of/comprises How many ?A number of parts/sections
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