专家总结雅思作文高分必备要素 美国老师的雅思作文范文赏析

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专家总结雅思作文高分必备要素

专家总结雅思作文高分必备要素1.结构。

作文结构是最简单的，10分钟搞定，根本不需要想太多。经常被学生问道:这样写可不可以，那样写可不可以。其实雅思对结构的要求中规中矩，即大作文一般都是写4-5段，第一段表达观点，正文段从不同角度来论证，最后一段重申观点。

　　专家总结雅思作文高分必备要素2.内容。

　　更多的同学是在内容上遇到了障碍。很多人在思索有没有什么高深的论点，有没有什么新颖的观点可以使自己更加突出。其实，雅思考试就那么点时间，要在短时间内构思出来那么些东西对大多数同学来说是不太现实的。所以雅思写作的内容主要体现在两个字:充实！specifically,就是正文段每个分论点后面都要有一定的展开，至少能够构思2-3个分论点来证明自己的观点。

　　专家总结雅思作文高分必备要素3.语言。

　　这是很多同学盲目自信的地方或者自卑的地方。用最简单的语言来说:5-6分就是看语言的正确性；7-8分就是看语言的多样性（当然是建立在正确性的基础之上的）。其实提高写作之所以难就是难在短时间内语言上很难有一个质的飞跃！

美国老师的雅思作文范文赏析

题目：

Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of * life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

参考范文：

Some feel that the children of low income families are better equipped to deal with difficulties posed by the “real world” when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these difficulties.The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident,but in fact require closer examination.

The popular wisdom is that children of poorer families learn early on the value of a buck ,and are thus naturally better suited to stretching money when times get tough in *hood. Inversely, the children of wealthy families,thoseborn with a silver spoon in their mouths,are believed to be completely ignorant of the tentimes erroneously expecting the same situation in *hood.They are believed to be prone to overspending and financial irresponsibility. This belief,though logical,overlooks one key point which is,of course,education.

The basis of this argument is,of course,knowing the value of money ,and the idea that children of the poor know this,and those of the wealthy do not.Who though,is in a better position to teach their children the value of money,someone skilled in earning and keeping it,the wealthy parent,or someone who can not seem to acquire it,the poor parent? Both wealthy and poor children are equally likely to acquire an education in money,whether it is formal,or in the school of hard knocks. Conversely, both children are as likely to ignore this education.

A poor child may believe that one can get along,if not as easily,without wealthy.A wealthy child may be well trained by a parent steeped in the knowledge of money management,the key to developing this skill is education.

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