雅思作文一大重要秘诀：结尾必须写的大气漂亮 4月3日雅思作文范文

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雅思作文一大重要秘诀：结尾必须写的大气漂亮

国内的孩子拼了命地准备高考，然而，出国党也并不轻松，烤鸭是他们的必经之路。每一位烤鸭人都想打遍天下无敌手，都想知道考高分的秘诀，下面我们就重点来说说，雅思考试之中，我们需要注意的一些问题。

一个漂亮而又简洁的结尾对于高分大作文来说无疑是必须的，尽管最终评分的主要依据并不是由结尾段决定的，但是结尾段的出色完成对于一篇成功的学术类大作文是不可或缺的。在本章节中，老师将带领大家领略结尾的不同高端写法。

回顾全文+观点+展望：

这种结尾方式比较适合于双边结构的作文，在这种写法中，我们要注意的是结尾段由三个要素组成，其中第2个要素是必须的 ，但是句子的数量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1个句子。首先我们来看一个例子：

I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways.

上面这个例句中，作者将自己的观点隐藏在了一个宾语从句之后，起到了一个欲扬先抑的效果。但是这种效果必须搭配一个展望未来才能起到渲染的效果。我们来对比另外一个例子：

In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline. However, it should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible.

大家不难发现，2个句子都使用了相似的衔接方式，即首句委婉地回顾全文，将观点的对立面用"让步"的方式表达出来，同时也是对于主体段观点的回顾。然后再是用转折阐述自己的看法和观点。最后再用一个对于未来的期望来支撑自己的观点。这种顺序安排的优点在于对于文章的主体有很好的总结，但同时观点又是非常鲜明有力的，加上对于未来的润色，使得表达更流畅。用同样的方法，我们再来看第三个例句：

To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if all its people are educated to the maximum of their ability.

和前2个结尾不同，第三个结尾尽管也是先回顾了全文，但是它将作者的观点和对未来的期望写在了一个条件状语从句里。如此就给出了我们在构造"展望未来"时的一个思路，即搭配条件状语从句或者介宾短语跟在观点句之后。此种结尾发展方式同样适用于分析解决型大作文的结尾段布局，比如：

All in all, although the problem of drugs may seem impossible to eliminate, there are concrete steps that can be taken to weaken the hold of drugs on society. The danger from drugs is too great to ignore.

对于毒品对社会的危害，作者先是承认现状的无法改变，进而乐观地阐述了自己的观点即采取了切实有效的行动后可以减弱其危害。最后用毒品的危害性来对未来作展望。换句话说，在社会类分析解决型议论文中，我们在展望未来时可以考虑用强调其长远的影响作为突破口。又如：

In short, there are several things that the government can do to allow more people to finish school. However, a number of society attitudes also have to change if the country.

4月3日雅思作文范文

发贴：北语雅思

这是个很古老的题目的翻版。1999年有过这样一个题目：

Contrary to people's belief, international touri* does not promote understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree?

范文：

Every year, hundreds of millions of people move around to see a different part of the world. It is natural to assume that tourists who have seen other countries have a better knowledge of the people. That assumption also leads to the conclusion that international touri* promotes understanding between nations. How true is this? Let us examine what tourists do in a different country.
First, before going abroad, tourists are often told by their travel agents of the possible hazards which sometimes include local people. They are given example of extreme cases where victims are always the travelers. Then, when they arrive, they are immediately taken to their hotels in big coaches. They flood places where local people don't go. Their shopping, meals, entertainment all take place in secluded areas. They wear a bubble all the way. Apart from speaking to the guide and a few shop assistants, tourists rarely talk to the local people. To make it even worse, they meet pickpockets, they are ripped off by dishonest traders. Furthermore, very few local people bother to talk to them out of a genuine interest in the guests' country, people and culture. Therefore, when asked how much they know about the local people, their answer is "very little".
If someone really wants to understand a different culture, he has to learn its language, stay there for at least a few month without wearing a bubble, learn how to curse and swear, bargain with a vegetable vendor and then he can say that he understands the people.（258 words）
简评：
这是一个已在西方得到广泛讨论的题目，普遍被接受的答案是旅游起不到促进民族、文化之间的交流与理解。
不同文化所推崇的东西也不同，这里有一个political correctness的问题。
要注意西方的时尚，如裘皮大衣、红木家具就不为青年人所推崇，参加旅游团也是退休的老头、老太太们的事。我们所追求的内容，如私人轿车、(旅行团式的)出国旅游在一些西方人看来有点“傻”。一些雅思考官就是这样的人。他们理应只评判我们的语言，但内容上能与他们的思想合拍岂不更好？
注意第二段中 first, then, to make it even worse, furthermore 的用法。

摘自《IELTS应试指南》，北京语言大学出版社，2000年10月出版，作者：陈卫东

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