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雅思作文常见题型 4月3日雅思作文范文

雅思作文常见题型 表格题磨练解析

表格题也是雅思作文中的常见题型,反复重现,磨练好表格题的作文技巧相当重要,筒子们来通过下面这篇范文,好好揣摩吧。

2008年6月5日

You should spend 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows the cost of water in five Australian cities in 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

City Usage charge per kilolitre

(up to 125kl) Usage charge per kilolitre

(over 125kl) Water bill per household

Adelaide $0.42 $1.0 $310

Bri*ane $0.78 $0.78 $312

Melbourne $0.84 $0.84 $253

Perth $0.42 $1.5 $332

Sydney $0.98 $0.98 $319

Sample Answer:

The figure gives the information about how the water cost in five cities of Australia Year 2004 is compared. (这不仅仅是单纯的对题目文字的改写,更重要的是暗示考官“我已经充分读懂了题目,下面要把表格阐述的尽善尽美。”)

Specifically,(这是一个信号,标志着整篇文章采取“总分”的形式。考官很容易理解你的思路,并且站在你的角度去考虑问题) in 2004, water bill each household, the least of all items, (不要小看这个插入语,它可以让你的句式更为活泼,逻辑更为严谨,增加强调的意味,体现出你的语言水平)was 253 dollars in Melbourne, where the usage charge per kiloliter was 0.84 dollars, whether the total of water use was up to 125 kiloliter or over. The similar pattern was found in usage charge per kiloliter in Sydney and Bri*ane, 0.98 dollars and 0.78 dollars respectively.(我还想向考生推荐这个词。在众多的数字和表格项面前,纵然你能够始终保持清醒,但是你不能保证你啰嗦的描述让考官一直把你的文章看完。用一下这个词,众多的数字可以放在一起,用一个简洁的句型一目了然。) By contrast,(它的意思是“对照、对比”。后面的内容与前面的内容具有相同的量级,但是具有不同的方向。) that of Adelaide, 0.42 dollars, was the same as that of Perth when the total is no more than 125 kiloliters, but once the total was beyond the limit, both increased to 1.0 and 1.5 dollars individually. The water bill per family in Perth, the top, was 332 dollars, but that in other three cities was nearly 310 dollars.

All in all, in many parts of Australia the water charge per kiloliter depends on the total of water use, while the pattern is not in Bri*ane, Melbourne and Sydney. And there is a big difference in (这是一个总结,与开头相呼应告诉考官你的英文功底是扎实的,不会写虎头蛇尾的文章)water cost per family in the five cities.

4月3日雅思作文范文

发贴:北语雅思

这是个很古老的题目的翻版。1999年有过这样一个题目:

Contrary to people's belief, international touri* does not promote understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree?

范文:

Every year, hundreds of millions of people move around to see a different part of the world. It is natural to assume that tourists who have seen other countries have a better knowledge of the people. That assumption also leads to the conclusion that international touri* promotes understanding between nations. How true is this? Let us examine what tourists do in a different country.
First, before going abroad, tourists are often told by their travel agents of the possible hazards which sometimes include local people. They are given example of extreme cases where victims are always the travelers. Then, when they arrive, they are immediately taken to their hotels in big coaches. They flood places where local people don't go. Their shopping, meals, entertainment all take place in secluded areas. They wear a bubble all the way. Apart from speaking to the guide and a few shop assistants, tourists rarely talk to the local people. To make it even worse, they meet pickpockets, they are ripped off by dishonest traders. Furthermore, very few local people bother to talk to them out of a genuine interest in the guests' country, people and culture. Therefore, when asked how much they know about the local people, their answer is "very little".
If someone really wants to understand a different culture, he has to learn its language, stay there for at least a few month without wearing a bubble, learn how to curse and swear, bargain with a vegetable vendor and then he can say that he understands the people.(258 words)
简评:
这是一个已在西方得到广泛讨论的题目,普遍被接受的答案是旅游起不到促进民族、文化之间的交流与理解。
不同文化所推崇的东西也不同,这里有一个political correctness的问题。
要注意西方的时尚,如裘皮大衣、红木家具就不为青年人所推崇,参加旅游团也是退休的老头、老太太们的事。我们所追求的内容,如私人轿车、(旅行团式的)出国旅游在一些西方人看来有点“傻”。一些雅思考官就是这样的人。他们理应只评判我们的语言,但内容上能与他们的思想合拍岂不更好?
注意第二段中 first, then, to make it even worse, furthermore 的用法。

摘自《IELTS应试指南》,北京语言大学出版社,2000年10月出版,作者:陈卫东

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