雅思口语范文 a shop 求雅思口语Part2:Shopping center范文,以及Part3可...

escribe a shop or shopping center. You should say:
Where it is?
What it sells?
How often you go there, and why?

Thank you for the opportunity to speak to you. I am sure you will find my talk interesting and informative.
1.
a) The High Mall shopping center is well known in the city of Shenyang.
b) If you have been here for some time, you have probably been there.
2.
a) It is situated at 217 Long Street, opposite the public library.
b) When traveling from Government Square, you should take bus no. 242, and it will take you there.
3.
a) It is what is called a ‘one-stop’ shopping mall.
b) It means I am able to do most of my shopping in one center at the same time.
There are several reasons as for why I would like to talk specifically about the “High Mall”. Allow me to explain by mentioning some of them briefly.
4.
a) The High Mall contains a wide variety of shops and stores.
b) For example, there is a large department store that sells almost anything, a Mac Donald’s outlet, a jeweler, and so on.
5.
a) It has a good security system, so I always feel save there.
b) For instance there are many security officers on duty, looking out for robbers and so on.
6.
a) Secondly, it is a nice place to kill some time in the evenings or on weekends.
b) One can spend hours browsing through the shops, or sit in a restaurant, have something to drink, and watch the crowds.
Those are some thoughts on my favorite shopping center.
part 3
why are there a lot of big stores?
what are the main differences between *all stores and big stores when you go shopping?
do you think *all stores will disappear in the future?
what do you think is the best way to advertise?
what are the differences between men and women when they go shopping?
what do you think of on-line shopping?
what do you think of the use of credit card?

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你备橘好，我是世纪雅思学生，我问我们老师，仿尘团一下是我的老师给回答的：
In present-day society, plastic containers and utensils are extensively used in big cities and the countryside alike. They are so common-place and I would hazard the guess that each one of us has seen, at one time or another, the unsightly scene of plastic bags swirling in the wind. These plastic shopping bags, chopsticks, to-go boxes and mineral-water bottles, to name but a few, when not properly disposed of, create a colossal amount of non-biodegradable refuse. Therefore, some people argue that we have embarked upon a “兄谨throw-away” era when plastic rubbish is largely dumped indiscriminately and irresponsibly (this act is often labeled “white pollution” on account of the color of plastic wastes). Personally, I wholeheartedly support their view.
There are numerous reasons for this worrisome phenomenon coming into being. To begin with, at present the bulk of people who shop and/or eat out regularly are still poorly-informed, uninformed or misinformed about the pernicious influence that non-biodegradable pollutants exert on the ecosystem, which is the main culprit in the global-scale mishandling of the plastic wastes. The chief component of such trash is polythene, which cannot decompose on landfill sites over the process of the next hundreds of years if no major scientific breakthrough comes along in polythene treatment. Thus, such trash must be dealt with collectively rather than be scattered like tumbleweeds. Secondly, the proliferation of plastic shopping bags and eating ware is largely fuelled by the surging, headlong consumeri*. Plastic containers and utensils are lighter in weight, cheaper (often free of charge) in price and water-proof in performance. These superior properties make them preferable to their paper and cloth counterparts in customers’ eyes; and as consumer satisfaction reigns supreme in contemporary society, compared with superb portability, affordability and utility, how to dispose of them is the last thing the customers are concerned about. Additionally, plastic bags, wrap and containers are also commercially feasible since they are cheaper to manufacture, ship and store. These mercenary considerations also have prompted the good old cloth or paper bags to be supplanted by plastic bags but over the phasing-out process, few stores and restaurants advocate or encourage the use of environmentally-benign disposal of plastic trash, hence the whole slew of non-biodegradable garbage and environmental hazards ensue.
Given the scale and severity of “white pollution”, we must take immediate steps to address this scourge. In the first place, we must do our utmost to enhance people’s awareness of how persistent and devastating non-biodegradable trash can be to our environment and our posterity’s. Secondly, retail stores and dining establishments should spare no effort in encouraging their customers to reuse plastic packing items. Furthermore, indiscriminate and irresponsible dumping of household garbage or personal junk should be outlawed by the legislature and heavy fines or even jail terms must be imposed on those compulsive litterbugs who fail to get their act together. Then, on the part of the biochemical researchers and technologists, scientific research must be launched here and now in pursuit of effectual ways to convert non-biodegradable refuse to biodegradable refuse. Last but not least, the government must not shirk its obligations in mobilizing scientific resources and rallying popular support in the crusade against “white pollution”. Neither should pay just lip service to relevant research and campaigns if no enough funding can be obtained otherwise. Additionally, I am convinced a customer tax levied by the government on the use of plastic bags will also help to curb this massive “white pollution”.
The havoc non-biodegradable refuse can wreak on the ecosystem is beyond our imagination. It can eventually devastate soil, water and the aquatic and terrestrial biota. We must start combating this environmental catastrophe before the ecosystem irretrievably breaks down under the reign of the minute plastic debris.

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雅思作文的满分是9分，所以5分只能算是一个及格分数吧！那么达到这个分数难不难呢？下面就和的我一起来看看雅思作文5分如何达到？

Task2：

Nowadays， there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and  what extent do you agree or disagree？

如今，媒体报道的趋势更侧重于报道社会问题和突发事件，而忽视社会的积极发展。一些人认为这对于个人和社会都是有害的。你是否同意这种观点？

改前解析：大首

这是一篇媒体话题类大作文，题目类型为Opinion Question 观点型。

题目特点：一般此类问题问你是否赞同题目所表述的观点，赞同不赞同或者一部分赞同，都需要给出具体的原因和解释。

具体的构思流程，Vicky在往期推送：中已经提到，童鞋们可以再复习一遍哦！

下面我们来看一篇考鸭的范滑脊文，

滚让数擦亮你的眼睛来找茬吧！

考生范文：

The current phenomenon of media overly focus on reporting issues and emergencies rather than positive developmentshave turned the spotlight on whether it is a positive or negative  me，this could be beneficial for individuals but might be harmful to society as a whole.

Receiving accurate information of emergencies and problems could give individuals warnings. For instance， informuion including environmental problems such as air pollution is vital to pass on to the public through media. Without such information， people might keep polluting the environment until there is no solution and the world would become unlivable. Besides ， delivering important emergency warnings in time could save people＇s lives. For example，in China，  thousands of people evacuated in time before the flood came in June 1998 merely because tv and radios broadcasted the emergency warning the night before the flooding. Therefore， delivering information regards to issues and emergencies is beneficial to individuals.

However，media＇s overly focus on pmblems and emergencies could lead to panic and chaos in society. There is a board consensus that public panic could result in unnecessary catastrophic chaos in society. Take the incident in Wuxi China as an example. In July 2021， a reporter in a local TV station reported a story about how the local factory has polluted the water source by pouring toxic chemicals into the river. Overnight， all the bottled water in the supermarkets was cleared out by local residents. Some people， misled by the media and filled with fears， even started a fight with the others in a shop over a bottle of water. That incident led to twenty-five *s and one child injured. Later the government issued a statement indicating that the amount of chemicals poured in the river was so *all that it could not cause any serious health damage to human bodies. Accordingly， it is the media which spreading rumors about emergencies and problems that could harm the society.

In a nutshell，delivering reports which focus on problems and emergencies could be advantageous to individuals， nevertheless， it could also be harmful to society as a whole.

你能找出几处错误？

你给这篇作文打几分？

下面来看看Vicky如何精改，

同学们不仅要注意识别丢分点，

还要学习和积累其中的高分表达哦！

精改范文：

第一段：

The current phenomenon of media overly ❶focusfocusing on reporting issues and emergencies rather than positive developments ❷ have hasturned the spotlight onwhether it is a positive or negative trend.主观点❸To me In my opinion，this could be beneficial for individuals but might be harmful to society as a whole.

错误：

❶动词形式使用错误，真正的谓语动词为 turned，此处应使用动名词形式。

❷该句的主语为the phenomenon，谓语动词应使用单数形式，改为has；

❸ To me 属于非正式的口语化用语，应改为正式性语言In my opinion；

亮点：turned the spotlight on 把焦点集中在......

重新改述了题目并明确给出了自己的观点。

第二段：

论点1Receiving accurate information ❶ofabout emergencies and problems could ❷givehelp warnindividuals and enable them to prepare ings. For instance，information ❸ includingregardingenvironmental problems such as air pollution is vital to pass on to the public through ❹the media. Without such information， people might keep polluting the environment until there is no solution and the world ❺ would becomebecomes unlivable.论点2❻Besides，In addition，delivering important emergency warnings in time could save people＇s  example，in China， thousands of people ❼ wereevacuated（v. 疏散；撤出）in timebefore theaflood camehitin June 1998 merely because ❽ tvtelevisions and radios broadcasted the emergency warning the night before the efore，delivering information ❾withregard toissues and emergencies is beneficialto individuals.

错误：

❶ about用在这里更恰当。

❷ 原句过于笼统，改动后的信息更加具体和完整。

❸ 根据句意，regarding更为合适；

❹ the media特指的是一个*名词，包括电视、报纸、其他传播信息的形式，应该使用冠词the；

❺ 时态要前后统一，这句前面用的是there is 为一般现在时，所以后面应该保持时态一致。

❻ besides 属于非正式用语，不适合用于学术写作中，应该为in addition；

❼ 根据句意，应该是“人被疏散”，所以增加be动词were；因为具体指的是1998年的一次洪水，所以用不定冠词a； 洪水等自然灾难来袭，用hit比较地道；

❽ 首先TV应该大写，其次在正式写作中，不应使用缩略简称等形式，应该使用书面语；

❾ with regard to 为固定搭配，adv.关于；至于；

亮点：考生在这段的论述结构值得各位考鸭学习。

整段围绕开头段的主观点展开，阐述了两个分论点并以具体例子加以证明，最后再次强调了自己的观点。

第三段：

论点1However，the media＇s ❶overly focusover-focus on pmblems and emergencies could lead to panic and chaos in e is a ❷boardbroad consensusthat public panic could result in ❸unnecessary catastrophic chaos in societypeople being injured or even  the incident in Wuxi，China，as an  July 2021， a reporter in a local TV station reported a story about how ❹ thealocal factory ❺hashadpolluted the water source by pouring toxic chemicals into the river. Overnight，all the bottled water in the supermarkets was cleared out by local residents（精彩句子） people， misled by the media and filled with fears，even started a fight ❻with the othersin a shop over a bottle of water. ❼ThatThisincident led to ❽twenty-five25 *s and one child ❾ being injured. Later，the government issued a statement indicating that the amount of chemicals poured in the river was so *all that it could not cause any serious health damage to human bodies. ➓ Accordingly，it is the media whichspreading rumors about emergencies and problems thatcould harm thesociety.

错误：

❶ 前面为名词所有格＇s形式，后面应为名词性成分，而overly focus为动词形式，所以应改为over-focus；

❷ 词语混淆错误，很多考生都容易将一些形近词误用，再次提醒大家写作时务必要注意区别，拼写准确；broad consensus 是常用搭配，表示＂广泛共识＂的意思。

❸ 这一句与前面的句子太相似，语意重复，应该使用多样化的表达，进行同义替换；另外catastrophic chaos有“词语堆砌”之感，不是native speaker常用的地道表达，应改成具体生动的信息。

❹ 因为并没有特指某一家工厂，而且当地不仅一家工厂，所以是泛指，应使用不定冠词a；

❺ 该句是指过去的报道，根据句意应该使用过去完成时。

❻ with the others在这里没有必要，可去掉；

❼ that不太正式，并且在英语中一般常使用指示代词this来描述所说的事件，更加客观；

❽表示1-10的数字时，应该用对应的英语单词one-ten；表示11以上的数字直接用*数字即可；

❾ being injured表示受伤这种状态；

➓ which在这里是多余的；另外这里并没有具体指一个社会，应该去掉定冠词the；

亮点：考生的观点比较全面，在之前的主体段中给出了自己的主要观点，同时在这段中也阐述了“不实报道会带来的问题”，并以生动的例子加以证明。段落中还有一些精彩句子值得模仿学习哦！

第四段：

In ❶a nutshellconclusion，delivering reports ❷whichthat focus on problems and emergencies could beadvantageousto individuals❸；nevertheless，it could also be harmful to society as a whole.

错误：

❶ 这是一个非正式短语，在学术写作中尽量避免使用习语和一些陈词滥调的表达。

❷ 关于which和that，非特殊条件下，中国学生一般习惯互换，但其实两者之间还是有使用差别的，用which时，表示你说的情况适用于你谈论的所有事物；而用that时，只适用于你说的一些事物；

举个栗子，

All Dalmatians（n. 斑点狗），whichhave spots， are good pets.

这个句子中，我们知道斑点狗都有斑点，这里用which表达适用于所说的事物；并且whichhave spots和主语用逗号隔开；

Dogsthathave spots are good pets.

这个句子就是特指有斑点的狗，所有用that表示部分情况，且与主语间没有逗号。

作文中，delivering reports 后面所说的情况是部分类型的报道，因此应使用that。

❸ 两种观点间应用分号隔开。

亮点：总结段很简洁并且全面，还使用了一些高分词汇。

Vicky点评：

亮点：

该考生的文章结构和对写作任务的处理还算恰当，大部分例子中的过渡性短语比较准确，清晰地表明了不同观点间的关系；

个别句子的表达也很出色，用到一些高分词汇，已经用绿色标注，大家可以借鉴学习。

主要问题是：

1.存在语法和词汇错误，包括时态、冠词、介词、谓语动词单复数、词语混淆等，

2.一些非正式用语错误，包括缩写、简称、俗语等，各位小伙伴在平时的写作练习中一定要注意检查纠错，切莫让这些小问题积少成多，导致严重扣分！

我是3.31号考的。考试之前找了这个看了，考到了关于health和family的问题。我隔壁考场有人考到了电影和书籍方面的问题。我觉得这个还是挺准的，推荐你看看。希望对你有所帮助阿！！

2021年3月-4月雅思口纳运岁语最新调整(二)
1．Part 1 Lauguage
How many languages can you speak?
Do you think it's important to know more than one languag?
What is the most difficult part about studying a foreign language?
How long have you been learning English?
Would you say it'悄枯s a difficult language to learn?
What do you think is the fastest way to learn a language?
2．Part 2 Describe an interesting culture of another country
3．Books Part 1 What kinds of books do you like to read? Are you reading any books at the moment?
Part2 Describe a book you like to reread．
You should say:
what book it was
what the book was about
why you read it
what you learned from this book
and explain why you would like to read it again．
4．Part 2 Describe a subject that you studied that you thought was interesting．
You should say:
what the subject was
what your teacher was like
how long you studied this subject
and explain why you thought it was interesting．
Part 3
1．what is the most popular subject in high school in China? why
2．Do Chinese high school students decide to go to the universities themselves?
3．Are some technology used in high school classes? advantages and disadvantages．
2021年3月-4月雅思口语最新调整(一)
1．Personal Present Situation
Part 1/3 Are you a student or do you have a job?
a)study What kind of school do you attend? What do you like most about your studies? What is your major? Is that a very popular subject to study in your country?Is your subject very challenging (or difficult) to study? What do you do when you have a difficulty with your studies? Why did you choose ．．．as your major? What'洞睁s more important when studying - the student or teacher?
Part 2 Describe a positive change that you have made to your life．
You should say:
what the change was
when it happened
where it happened
and explain how you have benefited from this change
2．Personal Present Situation
b)working What kind of job would you prefer after graduation?
What are your job prospects?
What do you do for a living?
How do you feel at first day of your work?Is first impression important at workplace?
Part 2 Describe a job that you know about that makes the world a better place．
You should say:
what job this is
how you know about this job
what types of people do this job (or, can do this job)
and explain why you think this job makes the world a better place．
Part 2 Describe a job you like to try/an ideal job
Part 3 Do you know others who also do this job?
What should school teach to help students find jobs?
In your opinion, what kind of employees do employers hope?
Do you think it is easy or difficult to find jobs?
What is the difficulty in finding jobs?
What should employees have to find jobs?
Do you think high salary is important?
What about the Chinese working condition?
3．Describe a person who taught you some useful skill
who he was ?What skill he or she taught you? 3．How did he or she teach you?Why do you think this skill is useful?
Describe a (useful) skill you recently learned (for example, driving a car or cooking)．
You should say:
what the skill is/was where you learned it
how you learned it and explain how you think this skill will be useful in the future．
4．Part 2 Describe a person who did something kind to you
Part2 Describe a person who you helped
Who you helped? Why you wanted to help him ?How did you help him?What was his reaction and feelings towards you?
5．Travel
Part 1 Do you like traveling? How do you usually travel? Where have you traveled to lately? What kind of places do you like to visit?
part2 Describe another country You would love to visit
Which country would you like to visit?why do you want to visit this country?What attracts you most in this country?
Part 2 Describe an interesting place you would like to visit
Where is this place
What is it like
Why you like to visit
And how interesting it is
Part 2 Describe a travel/journey you like to go to with your friend / Part 2 Describe a journey/ long travel you made
who you would like to travel with
where you would go
how you would go there
and explain why you would like to make this trip．
or explain why you would choose to travel with this person．
6．Part 2 Describe a good student you studied with/you know
Part 3 What are the gualities of a good student?
7．Part 2 Describe a helpful website you visited
2021年2月-3月口语最新调整(二)
Part 2 Describe an occasion others congratulate you
part3 How do people in China congratulate each other?
part2 Describe an experice you receive money as gift(eg money given by parents)
who gave you the money?Why did he/she give the money? How did you spend the money?
part3 What are the different attitudes towards money between *s and chidren? Are happiness related to money?why?
2021年2月-3月口语最新调整(一)
1．Part 2 Describe a leader who you admire (for example, in sport, business or politics)
You should say:
who this person is ?
How he or she became a leader?
what this person did (has done) that you admire?
part3 What are the abilities of a good leader?
2．Part 2 Describe a shop that you know．
You should say:
where it is? what it sells?what it looks like?
and explain what you like or dislike about this shop
3．Part 2 Describe an outdoor activity
What activity is that?
Where do you do it?
How often do you do it?
Why do you like this activity?
4．Part 2 Descrribe the oldest person you know
Who he or she is?
How you got to know him or her?
What is/are his /her/their present situation?
What is your feelings towards him/her/them?
Describe an old person
Part 3 How often do you invite the old person?
what's the role of old person in the family?
how children treat with old person?
Describe an old person who you like to talk to．
You should say:
who this person is
how you know them what you usually talk about
and explain why you like to talk to him or her．
5．Part 2 Describe a historical building/an interesting old(traditioanl) building in your country?
Where is it located?
What is it used for?
Explain why you think it is the most interesting?
Part 3 What are people's attitudes to old building today and that of our later generation? Should we protect them? Why?
What role do you think the old and modern buildings play in the society?
Should old buildings be di*antled/removed?