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显然写作不是雅思最难的单项，应该排在口语之后。这也是中国国情决定的。中国考生重精听精读，轻写作口语，这是显而易见的。

其实听说读写中只有写作是非native speaker可以超过local的一项，且是唯一的一项。这一点慎小嶷老师早已提过，这里我就不再多说。

雅思写作评分标准如下：

TR(TaskResponse任务完成情况)

这是评分标准中的第一项,具体体现在是否满足AIE上。A指Argument,即要有辩论;I指Idea,即论点;E指Evidence,即论据。

CC(Coherence&Cohension连贯和衔接)

连贯和衔接分为意连和形连两方毕绝面。所谓意连,指一个段落必须围绕一个主题句展开,前后在语意上达到统一和完整。体现在具体的雅思写作过程中时,我们要学会判断哪些观点和例证相符合。对于形连,它的主要表现形式是段落之间和段落内部的连接词。在写作过程中,我们要恰当使用表示承接和转折的连接词(如To Begin With, In Addition, However等)以及句子之间的指示词(This,It等)。

LR(LexicalResources词汇资源)

这一点虽然各种英语作文考试中都会涉及到,但雅思教会我们并不是尽可能使用大词,而是使用恰当的词表达确切的涵义。而且文章内部的语体、风格也要一致。这一过程中我们不但要掌握常用词的同义词,还要辨析其不同的适用语境,同时也要学会用自己的话进行转述。

比如对于题目要求的陈述,传统上学生习惯于将原题抄写一遍,对付汉语作文也不例外,但雅思规定抄原题不算字数。

GR&A(GrammaticalRange&Accuracy语法范围和精确度)

这又有别春数扮于传统的为了使用复杂句子而去使用的写作思路。因为除了要会用,还要用得准确和恰当。我们在准备雅思的过程中,不仅要学会如何造句,还要学会每一种句子所适合的语境、语篇。

当然，还有很多细枝末节的东西我这里就不写了。剑桥雅思系列里面有详细的解释。

你所谓的“中国首篇雅思作文”实际上已经没有参考价值了。毕竟今日雅思考试的难度不是N年前可以相比的。而且现在仅仅语法错误一项就可以让你的写作分数惨不忍睹。因为在评分标准中的第四条明确提到了“不仅要学会如何造句,还要学会每一种句子所适合的语境、语篇”。

考官的作文通常是剑桥雅思真题系列后面的范文，可以说是一个满分或者是接近满分的标准。而且考官都是接受过统一培训的，但是个人风格又不同，所以你说的“衡量其他作文”这种说法是不存在的。因为他们必须按照上述四点评分标准来对考生的作文进行评分。扒灶

雅思写作拿9分难度相当高这点我承认。但是就算听力和阅读，能拿9分的人也是需要相当高的人品值才能做到。只能说，对于大多数英语学习者来说，雅思单项在8分以上都是可遇不可求的事。但是你要是说最难的单项，必然还是口语了。

雅思考试为综合能力考试，非应试教育考试，所以不存在满分的情况。雅思考试没有过与不过的银滑标准,这主要取决与你所申请的院校及专业对你雅思分数的要求。如果你所申请的院校及专业录取分数线较高,相应的,你需要取得的雅思成绩就越高。如果是出国留学的话，一般有7-8分就可以了。

提高雅思成绩方法：

1、 阅读和听力：

阅读烂搏迅要注意平时积累，注意语境和语义的表达。听力方面一定要让自己对不同地区国家的口音有了解，至少要熟悉一下包括英国，美国，澳饥此大利亚和新西兰在内的口音。如果平时从来没听过或者对这些口音不熟悉，在考场上一慌可能会错过很多重要信息。

2、写作：

小作文考查你对信息的总结概括的能力，如果写太长，把他图表里的每一个信息都描述出来了，那这个能力就没有被展示给考官，也就不能得高分。大作文要注意行文逻辑与连贯，文章段与段之间，段内句与句之间的逻辑结构清晰，递进，承上启下和转折关系分明。

3、口语：

口语考察表达，所以要让考官认为你有足够的能力做长篇大论，并且不会因为语言能力的限制不能足够地表达你自己的观点。

雅思考生们在练习雅思大 作文 的时候，不仅仅要掌握各类技巧以及一些用词，还应该看看满分作文，寻找到自己的差距，加以改进。以下便是我整理的雅思写作animal testing 范文 及素材。

雅思写作满分范文animal testing

一、题目

Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

二、分析

题目大意是指，如今动物做实验已经在研究新药或者测试产品安全性等方面被广泛含睁首使用。有些人认为这样的实验应该被禁止，因为让动物承受这样的痛苦从道德层面来说是不正确的，但是有些人则早茄是认为它们给人类带来了很大的帮助。讨论这两个观点，并且给出你自己的观点。这道题目的要求是谈数“Discuss”，即需要对于两方面的观点都要进行讨论分析，缺一不可。考生需要做的，是对于用动物做实验这一行为的利弊分析，通过列举比较，得出一个比较具有说服力的结论。

三、范文

It is true that medicines and other products are routinely tested on animals before they are cleared for human use. While I tend towards the viewpoint that animal testing is morally wrong, I would have to support a limited amount of animal experimentation for the development of medicines.

第一段介绍背景，引出话题，说明用动物来测试药物或者其他产品的可使用性是十分常见的现象。尽管这样的做法在道德上是错误的，但的确一些有限的动物实验有助于医药的发展。

On the one hand, there are clear ethical arguments against animal experimentation. To use a common example of this practice, laboratory mice may be given an illness so that the effectiveness of a new drug can be measured. Opponents of such research argue that humans have no right to subject animals to this kind of trauma, and that the lives of all creatures should be respected. They believe that the benefits to humans do not justify the suffering caused, and that scientists should use alternative methods of research.

第二段说明动物实验的缺点，说明人们没有权力去这样对待动物，他们也是生命，应该得到尊重。

On the other hand, reliable alternatives to animal experimentation may not always be available. Supporters of the use of animals in medical research believe that a certain amount of suffering on the part of mice or rats can be justified if human lives are saved. They argue that opponents of such research might feel differently if a member of their own families needed a medical treatment that had been developed through the use of animal experimentation. Personally, I agree with the banning of animal testing for non-medical products, but I feel that it may be a necessary evil where new drugs and medical procedures are concerned.

第三段说明目前还没有什么 方法 去代替动物实验，尤其是在医药方面。

In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be wrong to ban testing on animals for vital medical research until equally effective alternatives have been developed.

最后 总结 全文，重申立场

雅思Simon考官9分大作文wild animals范文

题目：

Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

重点词汇

Wild animals野兽

no place出版处不明，无地址，地址不详

21st century21世纪

protecting防护; 保护( protect的现在分词 ); 投保; 关税保护

a waste of浪费…

resources来源; 勇气; 才智; 谋略; 有助于实现目标的东西; 资源( resource的名词复数 ); 物力; 办法

extent程度; 长度; 广大地域; 扣押

do you你愿意吗

agree同意，赞同; 一致，符合; 商定，约定; 意见相合; 适宜; 同意，承认; 使和谐一致; 认为正确无误

disagree不同意; 不一致; 不适合; 不符

范文：

Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals

because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with this point of view.

In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no place in the 21st century. I do not believe that planet Earth exists only for the benefit of humans, and there is nothing special

about this particular century that means that we suddenly have the right to allow or encourage the extinction of any species. Furthermore, there is no compelling reason why we should let animals die out. We do not need to exploit or destroy every last square metre of land in order to feed or accommodate the world’s population. There is plenty of room for us to exist side by side with wild animals, and this should be our aim.

I also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources. It is usually the protection of natural habitats that ensures the survival of wild animals, and most scientists agree that these habitats are also crucial for human survival. For example, rainforests produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the Earth’s climate. If we destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet would far outweigh the costs of conservation. By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth.

In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and I

believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.

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雅思口语话题Animal题目及范文

Describe a time when you saw an interesting animal.

You should say:

- what animal it was

- where you saw it

- what happened when you saw it

and explain why you thought it was interesting.

Part 3

Zoos

Do you think zoos are good or bad?

Do you think it's cruel to keep wild animals in zoos?

Why do you think so many cities have zoos?

In your opinion, what features should a good zoo have?

Do you think zoos might disappear in the future?

What future developments do you think we will see concerning zoos?

The Protection of Wild Animals

Why do you think wild animals should be protected?

In what ways does human activity result in the extinction (or near extinction) of some animal species?

At present, many animals are already facing extinction. How do you think average citizens could (help) protect wild animals?

Why do you think films or books for children so often include animals?

范文

I found there was a bat nest in my balcony recently, and one night I happened to see they flew across the patio under our apartment and hover in the sky. I was shocked, because it was dark outside but they knew exactly where to go without mistakes. Moreover, they went out only at night.

I thought bats are interesting not because they can fly in the dark since I know they are nocturnal animals. I always think the ability which aids bats fly and prey capture is their unusual eye-sight, like another nocturnal animal, owls. But the truth is because of their echolocation. Bat echolocation is a perceptual system where ultrasonic sounds are emitted specifically to produce echoes. By comparing the outgoing pulse with the returning echoes the brain and auditory nervous system can produce detailed images of the bat's surroundings. This allows bats to detect, localize and even classify their prey in complete darkness.

雅思写作关于动物保护的词汇总结

1. vivisection 活体解剖

2. perform. experiments on animals 在动物身上做试验

3. test animals 用于实验的动物

4. be subjected to experiments 被迫接受试验

5. animal rights 动物权利

6. clinical research 临床研究

7. cruel 残忍的

8. extremist 极端主义者

9. medical research 医学研究

10. origin of species 物种起源

11. alternative method 替代的方法

12. biological diversity 生物多样性

13. natural balance 自然平衡

14. equilibrium of ecosystem 生态平衡

15. coexistence 共存

16. endangered animals 濒危动物

17. diversity of species 物种多样性

18. shameless 令人羞愧的

19. barbaric 野蛮的

20. live and let live 活着就是与万物共存

21. meaningless 没有意义的

22. dominant species 优势物种

23. laboratory 实验室

24. vaccine 疫苗

25. infringement 践踏

26. right to live 生存权

27. torture 折磨

28. anti-science 反科学的

29. life-threatening diseases 危及生命的疾病

30. scientific gains 科学成果

31. an ever-lasting theme 一个永恒的主题

32. evolution 进化

33. computer simulation 电脑模拟

34. groundless 没有理由的

35. humane 人道的

36. medical technology 医疗技术

37. anatomy 解剖

38. equal 公平的

39. unreliable 不可信赖的

40. valid 有效的、正当的

雅思写作大作文animal类观点总结

Animal rights

1.Arguments for Animal testing 动物实验的争议

Animals are used in important scientific research

It is necessary to do medical tests on new drugs

Animal testing helps to advance medical and scientific knowledge

Many important medical discoveries involved experimentation on animals

Researchers aim to minimize the suffering that animals experience

Testing for the co*etics industry is now banned in many countrie

2.Arguments against Animal Testing 反对动物实验

The benefits of research using animals do not justify the suffering caused

There are alternative methods of research

The lives of animals should be respected

Humans have no moral right to do experiments on animals

3.Arguments for Vegetariani* 素食主义者争论

Vegetarians do not eat foods that are produced by killing animals

Many people choose a vegetarian diet for moral or health reasons

A healthy diet is possible without eating meat

It is unnecessary to kill animal for food

A vegetarian diet may reduce the risk of disease like cancer

Many people question the treatment of animals in factory farms

4.Arguments against Vegetariani* 反对素食主义

Vegetarians do not eat a balanced diet

In many cultures, meat is the main ingredient in traditional meals

Meat-eaters argue that animals are below humans in the food chain

It is completely natural for us to kill them for food

Our aim should be improve farming methods

Farms should produce organic food

5.Positives of Zoos 公园的积极影响

Zoos paly an important role in wildlife conservation

They can help to protect endangered species

Zoos allow scientists to study animals and their behavior

Zoos are educational, interesting and fun

Children, in particular, enjoy learning about animals

Zoos provide job opportunities.

6.Negatives of Zoos 公园的消极影响

Zoo animals are kept in artificial environments

They are kept in cages or have limited space

Zoo animals rely on humans

They lose the freedom to hunt for food

They best way to save endangered species is by protecting natural habitats.

Some people believe that zoos are unethical

Zoos exhibits animals with the aim of making money

We have no right to use animals for entertainment and profit.

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理论上说，这些范文都是9分满分的，因为都是由考官写的，当然是完全按照雅思评分的标准进行的。不过话又说回来，考官的范文更多地只能拿来欣赏，如果是要模仿，难度还是非常高的，弄不好还会适得其反，因为范文当中很有“形散而神不散”的风范。建议你还是老老实实地按照老拿配陆师上课的方法，加上自身有特色的语言特点，这样更容易征服考官，获得理想的分*樱数消顷。