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对立式观点

1. 选择一方观点进行说明

给出两个对立的事物或者一个事物对立的两个方面，要求考生支持一方并进行说明。
具体表述如下：
TOPIC: Some people like A, others like B. Which one do you prefer—A or B? Give specific reasons t to illustrate your answer.
在这个命题形式的摸版中有陵搏些大写字母的含义如下：
A和B表示选择的两种观点；
CHOOSE A和CHOOSE B表示对A，B的选择；
DO C指题目中提樱蔽及的某件事情，如：Some people prefer A in order to DO C.
请考生在实际写作中根据题目天如他们各自所代表的内容。
MODEL (1)
Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, contradict A. Personally, I would prefer①because I think A has more advantages.
There are numerous reasons why②, and I would like in here explain a few of the most important ones. The main reason is that③. It can be given a concrete example④.
Another reason why I advocate the attitude of A is that⑤. Take the case of a thing that⑥.
One very strong argument for A is that⑦. This demonstrate the undeniable fact that⑧.
Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, ⑨.
But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than hose of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that⊙.
①表明自己的观点；赞同
②填入赞同A的句子
③赞同A的第一个原因
④举例说明原因一
⑤赞同A的第二个原因
⑥举例说明原因二
⑦说明赞叹A的第三个原因
⑧表明A的优势
⑨列出B的1-2个优势
⊙总尺颂祥结观点

MODEL (2)
Some people believe A. These people point out the fact that①. However, other people believe B. They point out that②. They say that③. As far as I am concerned, my preference is for A.
The main reason why I prefer A is that④. We can see that⑤.
A more personal reason why I like A is⑥. As I member, ⑦.
A is superior in another way, that is ⑧ because that⑨.
As a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in A, such as⊙. But these can be compensated by its advantages. So, in comparison with B, A is surely a clever choice.
①支持A的理由
②支持B的理由
③进一步阐述支持B的原因
④支持A的第一个原因
⑤举例说明原因一
⑥支持A的第二个原因
⑦举例说明原因二
⑧支持A的第三个原因
⑨举例说明原因三
⊙列举出A的劣势
MODEL (3)
It is often difficult for people to decide whether to choose A or choose B. But for us students, the advantages of A always outweigh the disadvantages. Those who object A claim that①.
Although at first glance these arguments sound reasonable and appealing, they are not borne out by a careful consideration. ②
In addition, ③. As a result, ④.
Finally, the incomparable advantages of A is that ⑤.
From the above, I think A has a lot of advantages compared with B. So⑥.
①反对A的理由
②支持A的第一个原因并举例说明
③支持A的第二个原因并举例说明
④A的优势
⑤支持A的第三个原因并举例说明
⑥重申观点

2. 比较不同观点的优劣

给出两个对立事物或一个事物对立的两个方面，要求考生说明二者为什么不同或比较它们的优缺点，并给出理由。
具体表述如下：
TOPIC: Some people believe that A while others consider B more appropriate. Give advantages and disadvantages of the two positions and explain which position you support.
MODEL (1)
A and B are two totally different ideas that have caused heated debate over a long period of time. Anyway, I agree with the idea of A. However, it is unfair to say which is better than the other if we don’t see both sides of the story in the following paragraphs.
Some people believe B because①. These people point out the fact that②. They also argue that ③.
However, other people stand on a very different ground. They believe that④. They firmly point out that⑤. An example can give the details of this argument: ⑥. In addition, ⑦.
In a word, A is too tempting not to be chosen. A, as shown above, has ⑧. ⑨.
①人们支持B的第一个原因
②进一步阐述支持B的第一个原因
③支持B的第二个原因
④支持A的第一个原因
⑤进一步阐述支持A的第一个原因
⑥举例说明支持A的第一个原因
⑦支持A的第二个原因
⑧选择A的第一个好处
⑨选择A的第二个好处
MODEL (2)
Some people believe that①. Other people take the view that②. While both methods may have their advantages and disadvantages, they can be applied under different circumstances. Afterwards, I will explain my opinion about it.
For A, ③
But this also demonstrates that④
Moreover, ⑤
B, on the other hand, ⑥. For example, ⑦.
In my opinion, the advantages of B are more than those of A because B fits me better in two ways; First⑧. Second, ⑨.
①人们的第一种观点
②人们的第二种观点
③A的一个优势
④A所隐含的劣势
⑤A的一个大缺点
⑥B的一个明显优势
⑦举例说明B的优势
⑧对我来讲，B的第一个优势
⑨对我来讲，B的第二个优势

单一式观点

1. 陈述支持或者反对的理由

给出一个论点，此论点不包括两种事物的比较，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由。具体表述如下：
TOPIC: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? AAA. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
AAA: 表示题目中给出的观点，请考生在写作时根据实际情况进行替换，

MODEL（1）agree
Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important to take a glance at the arguments on both sides. People who support AAA usually give some, even all of the following reasons. The first is that①.
The second is that②. Third, ③.
Generally, people who attack AAA claim that④. They also often say that there will be problems of⑤.
As far as I am concerned, I come to the notion that there are three main reasons why I support AAA. Firstly, ⑥. Secondly, ⑦. Furthermore, ⑧.
①人们支持AAA的第一个原因
②人们支持AAA的第二个原因
③人们支持AAA的第三个原因
④人们反对AAA的第一个原因
⑤人们反对AAA的第二个原因，或如果选择AAA会带来的问题
⑥我支持AAA的第一个原因
⑦我支持AAA的第二个原因
⑧我支持AAA的第三个原因

MODEL（2）disagree
I disagree with AAA for numerous reasons. The first and foremost reason is①. AAA may have some advantages, ②. There may be nothing wrong with these, and they can be easily understood by many people, but③.
AAA has also had a bad effect on④.
Another innate characteristic of AAA is⑤. In addition, ⑥.
Finally, it seems to be true that AAA⑦, but⑧.
AAA has done many good things. ⑨. However, we also cannot deny that⊙.
①反对AAA的第一个原因
②AAA的优势
③这些优势里所隐含的劣势
④AAA的一个重大缺点
⑤AAA的第一个劣势
⑥AAA的第二个劣势
⑦AAA看起来的一个优点
⑧AAA的一个缺点
⑨AAA的贡献
⊙AAA的不好之处
2. 通过比较来陈述支持或反对的理由
给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由。具体表述如下：
TOPIC: A is superior to B in DOING C. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons to support your point of view.
在模板中用A，B进行比较的两个事物，这种形式与对立观点式有着很多的相似之处，考生可以进行适当的借鉴。
MODEL (1) Disagree
I completely disagree with this statement that choosing A has more advantages than choosing B. And I would like to present two explanations to conform you that I am right.
First of all, ①. Generally, ②. Let me give you an example: ③. Thus, proving my point, ④.
The second thing that must be taken into consideration when choosing A or B is that⑤. As I have said, ⑥.
Finally, the point I am trying to make is that it is not better to choose A than choose B in that⑦.
In sum, ⑧.
①支持B的第一个理由
②进一步阐述支持B的原因
③举例说明原因一
④填入一句支持B的句子
⑤支持B的第二个理由
⑥进一步阐述支持B的第二个原因
⑦支持B的第三个理由
⑧总结观点
MODEL (2) Agree
Something we all cannot neglect as we get older is to accept the opinions of others. On the question whether it is better to choose A or choose B, I have long admitted that A has a strong argument. Privately, however, ①. I disagree with the above statement and support the superiority of B.
Although②. There is no evidence to suggest that③. What’s more, ④. Similarly, it has been said that⑤. To be sure, ⑥.
Another reason why I secretly dispute the statement above is that I am very sure that⑦. For instance, ⑧.
To take the point above to an extreme, ⑨.
For me, A could never equal B. ⊙.
①提出自己的观点：支持B
②A具备的优势
③A胜于B
④A的第一个缺点
⑤A的第二个缺点
⑥支持B
⑦支持B的另一个原因
⑧举例说明
⑨举出一个极端的例子来支持B
⊙比较A和B，总结观点

选择观点式

具体的表述如下：
TOPIC：In order to do XXX, there are many ways: A, B, C, D... Which one do you choose? Give specific reasons and examples to illustrate your answer.

在模板中用大写XXX表示一件事情，A，B，C，D代表做此事所用的不同方法。因为这种 命题形式不常见，所以我们仅提供两个模板供读者参照。
MODEL（1） Actually
How to do XXX? The traditional methods such as A, B and so on or the modern methods for example C and D? Which one you prefer depends on your own experience, life style and emotional concern. I prefer C most in my point of view. Why I prefer C, actually there are three advantages of C as follows.
This can trace back to my childhood. Once with curiosity, I①.
Yet for another reason is that②. I can quote a common example. ③.
Then why do I not like others? For example, why do I not like A? Because I have a bad experience with it. ④. So, even when anyone mentioned it, I would catch a feeling of fear.
There are still many other reasons that can account for my fondness for it, but the obvious ones have been presented as above. ⑤.
①喜欢C的第一个原因
②喜欢C的第二个原因
③举一个例子支持原因二
④举例说明
⑤重申观点
MODEL（1） Actually
It seems, in so many items, very difficult to prefer one to another because all of them have their advantages and disadvantages to the extent that it is hard to distinguish.
Yet that does not mean that they are of the same to me. To be frank, I would prefer A if personal quality is considered as a criterion to choose things.
They why do I prefer A? I like it because it can--, thus making me--.
There is another reason why I choose A, in terms of --, --. No wonder, it again brings me convenience that I cannot get if I choose any one of the others.
The last reason is that--.
In conclusion, everybody wants to choose the one that best fits him/her. So, it is of great benefits for me to choose--.
①支持A的第一个原因
②它所带来的好处
③A的一个方面
④支持A的第二个原因
⑤支持A的第三个原因
⑥重申观点

《十天突破雅思系列第3卷·十天突破IELTS写作完整真题库与6-9分范文》中收录了从2004年1月至今在亚太、欧洲和北美三大考区剑桥所使用的雅思写作完整官方题库中的全部真题，对每道题目都进行了深入的分析与探讨，并且根据不同分数段的范文特点对其各自的写作手法和语言特色进行了详尽的比较与鉴别。书中全部解释例句均取自剑桥官方唯一指定的Cambridge Advanced Learner’s Dictionary。同时本书慎陪还提供了详细的IELTS Map（地图题）写作指南。
此外，本书还附赠了由两位富有经验的英籍专家朗桐孝橡读的纯正英音光盘，便于携带，帮助读者随时随地学习优秀的雅思范文。
《十天突破雅思系列第3卷·十天突破IELTS写作完整真题库与6-9分范文》中的每一天均包含以下6个部分：
1 、Clearing hurdles in the corresponding essay questions
三大考区本类话题全部真题逐一分析
2、 Thorough *ysis of sample & model essays of varied bands
本类话题各分数段范文之间的深层差异解读
3、Essential words and phrases
怎样切实掌握范文里的亮点词汇
4、Dissection of sentence variety
如何培养对于范文中特殊句式的敏感度
5、The Essay on the Rating Scale
准确把握剑桥量化评分局旁
6、For slackers: core verbs and key phrasal verbs

电子书介绍

本书是留学英语考试语言专家慎小嶷（Pat）老师的力作。书中紧密结合 剑桥 大学出凯山启版社出版的“剑12”和《剑桥 雅思 官方指南》（The Official Cambridge Guide to IELTS）所体现出的新趋势，富有创造性地总结出了帮助中国考生突破IELTS写作瓶颈所需的全部应试技巧，并用地道英语对大量语言点进行了深入讲解。书中全部例句均取自近两年中出版的英美本土出版物和剑4——剑12以及《剑桥雅思官方指南》里的官方范文。唯携本书还配有由native speakers外教朗读的音频文件下载，以及方便读者随时随地学习的便携式学习手册，有助于读者高效利用备考时间。

慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作图书目录

致读者英文自序

Day 1其实你不懂雅思写作

多数中国考生无法回答的10个问题 /

My Answers /

Day 2你写的句子读起来为什么“作”

写好3种句子 /

Day 3知错就改——语法和用词的陷阱

中国考生在IELTS作文里最容易失手的词汇总结 /

Day 4经得起推敲的结构

4段式PK 5段式 /

Day 5思维的乐趣——让ideas更充实的秘诀

IELTS作文言之有物的“物”到底是什么 /

头脑风暴 ≠头脑“疯暴” /

IELTS作文最常用的12条思路线索 /

Day 6带着平常心去写作

——写好议论文展开支持句的秘诀

到底什么是well supported? /

native speakers怎样想展开支持句？/

Day 7别了，“ 中盯如式英语 ”——

120急救短语

可以覆盖IELTS议论文全部话题的实用论证短语 /

Day 8真实的高分范文——比你想象的简单

剑桥官方提供的真实范文分析 /

高分范文不是模板的试验场 /

Day 9图表题，能提前写完吗

小作文的3个核心要求 /

决定Task 1成败的基本功 /

开头段的写法 /

介绍数据或描述变化趋势的常用词一网打尽 /

主体段的写法 /

小作文结尾段的写法 /

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