雅思写作TASK 1：饼图的结构分析和句式表达

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1、(剑7 Test 4) Model Answer:

The charts compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000. Between these years, electricity production almost doubled, rising from 100 units to 170 in Australia, and from 90 to 180 units in France.

In 1980, Australia used coal as the main electricity source(50 units) and the reminder was produced from natural gas, hydro power(each producing 20 units) and oil (which produced only 10 units). By 2000, coal had become the fuel for more than 75% of electricity produced and only hydro continued to be another significant source supplying approximately 20%.

In contrast, France used coal as a source for only 25 units of electricity in 1980, which was matched by natural gas. The remaining 40 units were produced largely from oil and nuclear power, with hydro contributing only 5 units. But, by 2000, nuclear power, which was not used at all in Australia, had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units, while coal and oil together produced only 50 units. Other sources were no longer significant.

Overall, it is clear that by 2000, these two countries relied on different principal fuel sources: Australia relied on coal and France on nuclear power.

2、分析：

通过对以上考官范文的分析，可以发现开头段在对题目进行改写以后好再表明总体特征，比如这题总体电力产量的上升需要指出。

而在body部分，因为题中涉及两个发电资源的变化，所以可以划分成两段。段描述澳大利亚的情况，由于小作文中一般包括两个重点部分：Feature和Figure，所以在指出澳洲发电资源的总体特征后，需要重点描述特殊数据，比如值（重要／不重要的发电资源）、相等的数据等等。二段说明法的情况，但如果只是和澳洲一样，单纯对其数据进行分析，就忽略了题目的要求“make comparisons where relevant”。所以需要找出特殊数据分析两个之间的联系，从上述饼图可以看到，在2000年，核能在澳洲并未被使用，然而在法却成为大的发电资源，占75％的发电量。因此，在小作文写作中，图表之间的对比和联系需要通过一个十分显著的特点来概括出来，一句话即可。

结尾段一般是重申某一重要特点或规律，这里说明在2000年，两个发电依赖的能源不同。

在句式表达方面，饼图比较常涉及到的动词有“占（occupy/account for）”、名词“比例（percentage／ratio）”、形容词“主要的（main／dominant／principal）”。段中，在两个不同的年份不能使用“between...and...”和“from...to...”的结构，可以写成 “in the years + 年份”或者“in the year of + 年份”。三段开头 “In contrast”是过渡词，体现前后之间的逻辑关系和对比关系，表示 “相反”，同义词还有 “Conversely/On the contrary”等，而表示类似或相等关系的副词则可以用 “Similarly”表示。同段中，“be matched by…”表示 “和…数量相等”，也等同于“equal to/with”。本段后一句话 “Other sources were no longer significant”说明其他数据都不重要了，图表类文章一般会给大量数据，那么如何进行数据的取舍显得尤为重要。不需要对每个数据进行逐一描述，只需指明特殊数据即可。在数据繁多且主要数据已经描述完毕，其他数据可以不说时使用 “Other figures were no longer significant”。