这么多年
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一起看一下雅思复习资料9 Test 2的范文,学习下动态图
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题目:
The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
范文解析:
The chart shows the time spent by UK residents on different types of telephone calls between 1995 and 2002.
范文开篇的写法是常见的“题目改写”。充分进行了顺序调整和转化,很简单也很实用。
Local fixed line calls were the highest throughout the period, rising from 72 billion minutes in 1995 to just under 90 billion in 1998. After peaking at 90 billion the following year, these calls had fallen back to the 1995 figure by 2002.
必句用了v-ing形式作伴随状语,很好地展现了总体上升(rising)趋势。peaking at 90 billion是一个拐点,之后下降(fallen)。在这些表趋势的词语前面还可以加一下表幅度的副词作为修饰,如showed dramatic / minimal changes呈现了大幅度或者小幅度的变化,或者remained / almost unchanged几乎计划持不变。
这里的the following year指的是1999年,用得特比好,相比After peaking at 90 billion in 1999要有意思得多。
National and international fixed line calls grew steadily from 38 billion to 61 billion at the end of the period in question, though the growth slowed over the last two years.
这句的亮点在于有一个转折词“though”,相较于那些刻板的“after that”,一些转折词如although、however等更容易吸引眼球。
There was a dramatic increase in mobile calls from 2 billion to 46 billion minutes.This rise was particularly noticeable between 1999 and 2002, during which time the use of mobile phones tripled.
这段的亮点在于运用了一个there be句型,这是雅思写作的一个难点之一。很多雅思考生会在句中出现两个谓语。
To sum up, although local fixed line calls were still the most popular in 2002, the gap between the three categories had narrowed considerably over the second half of the period in question.
结尾段也使用了一个although作为转折,突出重点。
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