雅思口语范文解析：帮助别人的经历

口语题目

Describe an occasion when you helped a person.
You should say:
what the situation was
who you helped
how you helped
and explain how you felt after giving help.

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高分范文

I’d like to talk about the time when I helped my clas*ate named Jenny who was bullied by some senior students in middle school.

It was in our second year at school. Me and Jenny and several other clas*ates were playing hide and seek on the playground. We were running from one place to another. And this girl accidentally stepped on another girl’s foot. She apologized immediately but that girl didn’t accept it. And she went away. We continued to play. No one expected that she went back to class and brought 3 other girls to help her. Yeah, she wanted to start a fight. Jenny was scared because she was very shy and weak. When the girls went to her and tried to beat her down, I quickly ran towards her and tried to stop them. We had a very big fight. Luckily, we had some reinforcement. Some boys saw us and came to help. We survived.

Jenny was so touched by what I did for her. But I didn’t see it as a big deal. Helping those in need is what I’m supposed to do. I can’t stand watching people bullied and I have to give a hand to them, especially people I know and care about. That’s all I wanna say. Thank you!

高分表达

1.副词总结：accidently偶然地；immediately立即地；luckily幸运地；especially尤其是

2.地道搭配：beat her down打她； can’t stand watching无法忍受看着……；give a hand to them伸出援手

3.宾语从句的使用：Helping those in need is what I’m supposed to do.

4.高分词汇：bully v./n. 欺负；survive v. 存活