雅思口语范文解析：成功的商人

口语题目

Describe a successful busines*an you know.
You should say:
who is the person
how you know this person
how’s he became successful
and explain why you consider him/her as a successful business person

范文解析

这道题目要求考生描述一个成功的商人，具体的小问题包括：这个人是谁；怎么认识这个人的；他是如何成功的；为什么你认为他/她是个成功的商人。这几个问题，大家可以围绕后两点重点进行解释。

中文大纲

这个人是谁：Alex Smith
怎么认识这个人的：他与我来自同一个城市
他是如何成功的：他继承了父亲的电子工厂，努力工作
为什么你认为他/她是个成功的商人：他诚实可信、努力工作，能够及时做出决定，对有希望的行业进行准确地投资

范文

Mr. Alex Smith is a successful busines*an I know about. He is from my hometown and he now owns two groups of industries and the products line of his companies are famous in our country.

Since he is from the same town where I spent my childhood and teenage time, I have heard a lot about him and few times I met him as well.

He was a son of a successful local busines*an and he inherited his father’s electronic industry many years ago. That was just the start and during these years, he has worked really hard and built his empire in the local business market. In a few years, he took some giant leaps in his business and lately has been awarded one of the best entrepreneurs in the country. From the local electronic business he had inherited from his father, he gradually and successfully amassed the fortune and business success and thus has become one of the enviable busines*en in the country.

Taking great decisions and gradually enhancing the business was his success mantra. Everyone in our locality agrees that he was an honest, hardworking and wise person who knew when to take risks and when not to. His timely decision, investment in promising sectors and hard work have rewarded him well and his industries have offered opportunity for others to earn their daily bread.

重点表达

inherit v. 继承
entrepreneur n. 企业家；创业者
leap n. 跳跃
enviable a. 值得羡慕的；引起嫉妒的
amass v. 积聚；积累