雅思口语范文解析：电视上看过的有趣广告

口语题目

Describe an interesting advertisement you watched on TV.
You should say:
what it was
when you watched it
what it was about
and explain why it was interesting

范文解析

这道题目要求考生描述电视上看过的一个有趣广告，具体的小问题包括：是什么广告；什么时候看的；广告内容是什么；为什么广告很有趣。这几个问题，大家可以围绕后两点进行重点解释。

中文大纲

是什么广告：Cello钢笔广告
什么时候看的：几个月前
广告内容是什么：一个小男孩成长为一位成功的记者，并且获得了国际大奖。广告最后出现了帮助这个男孩成功的人，比如家人、老师、朋友等，还有这支钢笔。广告展示了，这支钢笔默默无闻地帮助了男孩取得了成功。 为什么广告很有趣：广告展示了钢笔对人们成功的作用，非常有创意，*很用心

范文

We watch so many advertisements on TV and some of them we like and feel interesting. One such interesting advertisement was the ad of Cello Pen. This was a creative advertisement and I found it very interesting. I watched this advertisement a few months ago in a TV channel while I was watching a live sport telecasting. I still remember it because it was quite unique and the way it was presented was quite good and touchy.

The advertisement starts with a boy who was in a school and then studied in a college and finally in a university and in the mean time the ad shows some of the successes he achieved and was congratulated. Thus he became a successful journalist and finally won an international prize for his honesty and bravery in his profession. His parents, mentors, teachers, friends and some others were highlighted at the end of the advertisement and as a flash back the Cello pen was shown. The advertisement revealed that the pen has contributed from the beginning to the end of his success and was never congratulated. Yet this is a silent partner of the man’s success.

This ad was a commercial ad of a company who manufactures and sells the pen. Thus the ads revealed how important the pens are in our success and how this pen helps people to become who they are! I guess this was a creative ad and was made with care as it has been a good ad to watch.

重点表达

telecasting v. 电视播放
highlight v. 高亮；强调
reveal v. 展示；揭示
manufacture v. *
touchy a. 动人的