雅思口语范文解析：需改进的公共场所

口语题目

Describe a public place that you think need improvements
you should say:
Where this public place is
What it is like
Why you think it needs improvements
And how to make it better

范文解析

这道题目要求考生描述自己认为需要改善的公共场所，具体的小问题需要回答出这四个方面：

• 这个场所是什么地方
• 现在是什么样子
• 为什么需要提升
• 如何提升

这四个问题中，后三点都可以展开回答，可以任选两点进行展开讨论。

中文大纲

地点：我家正前方的一条路
现在的状况：崎岖不平，有很多沙石，灰尘
为什么要改善：出门的必经之路，有很多的老人和小孩，走路很危险
如何提升：*和管理部门都应该介入

范文

Well, I would like to talk about a path in my neighborhood, which really needs to be improved. Even talking about it makes me mad.

Actually, the path is right in front of our apartment building, and it's the only way that we can take when we go out. Basically, it is uneven, filled with sand and stone, which is very dusty when there are cars going by. Plus, it becomes even worse, like muddy when it rains, so the residents in my community have to walk on this little path with extra attention because we are afraid of being tripped. That must be very painful, you know.

One third of the residents in the neighborhood are children and old people. It's very dangerous for them to walk on this risky road every day or even several times a day. Some old people like to do square dance in the evening, and this little road makes it even impossible. By the way, young people do not like it either, because it is not convenient, on the one hand, for us to go in and go out. It makes us look bad when we invite guests to our home when they see this shabby path. And it is definitely not in line with the artistic design of the buildings in the community.

I think to change the situation, we need to get both the government and management of the building involved, because it is really a big deal, and it's related to the welling-being of the people here. The government should invest money in the construction work on the path, like to pave it with asphalt to make it *ooth. Management people can decorate the path with plants such as flowers and trees etc.

If (he problem is solved, old people can dance there, and children can play games and their parents don't have to be worried about them. The whole environment of the community will look nicer and cozier. In fact, it is not difficult to get it done, but it has been there since we moved in three years ago. Nobody has brought it up but everybody is fed up with it. I think it is time that we worked together to report it to the government. Anyway, it should be dealt with as soon as possible.

重点表达

muddy adj. 泥泞的
be tripped 摔倒
shabby adj. 破旧的