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雅思口语话题part2参考范文之:一次徒步经历 面对高分范文

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雅思口语话题part2参考范文之:一次徒步经历 面对高分范文

雅思口语话题part2参考范文之:一次徒步经历

2021年5-8月雅思口语part2新题预测之:一次徒步经历( Describe a long walk you ever had),范文为高分考生原创,内容有关:几年前在一次重要会议结束后,我去上海出差时,我已经走了一段很长的路来放松自己。那时我真的很累,所以我决定晚上在安静的街道上散步,放松一下。口语水平的提高需要一段很长时间积累的过程,所以找对口语范文很关键。学习模仿雅思口语范文要点有3:1.native speaker的地道用词,2.丰富灵活的动词,3.高分句型并熟练背诵之。话不多说,口语范文自取:


Describe a long walk you ever had.

You should say:

when this happened

where you walked

who you were with

and explain how you felt about the walk

1.适用考生:全适用

2.主题:一次深夜散步的经历

3.故事线:几年前在一次重要会议结束后,我去上海出差时,我已经走了一段很长的路来放松自己。那时我真的很累,所以我决定晚上在安静的街道上散步,放松一下。

雅思口语高分范文示例:

As long as I can remember, I have taken a long walk to unwind myself when I took a business trip in Shanghai after an important conference several years ago. I was really tired then, so I decided to walk along the quiet street with myself in the evening to relax me.

It was rather cold at that time, so there were just few people could be seen in the street. But I didn’t feel lonely because I could enjoy the sereneness. I didn’t recall anything happened that day but just saw the various tall buildings, the old alleys and the thick plane trees in the cold wind. I walked around the city for about one hour, and gradually I didn’t feel any tired.

I am not a neuropsychologist but I believe there is something special going on in the human brain when the body is in motion. So I’m really into taking a long walk when I have spare time, and I feel it definitely has been very influential in my life.

友情提示:本雅思口语高分范文仅供参考,口语高分的终极奥义还在于不断积累和练习。高分范文在手,屠鸭说走就走。

面对高分范文 我该如何准备雅思口语

背诵的确可以积累到一些有用的口语表达和高分句式。但是在考试时,考生极容易僵硬地抛出大段答案,考官很容易发现是在背诵,然后扣分了。面对一个好的范例,最好的办法不是背诵,而是拿来参考学习!下面圈哥就从几个点来给大家介绍一个最大化利用已有范例的好方法!

总的来说!拿到一个范例之后,烤鸭们可以通过四步来实现范例剖析和学习:

1. 找中心思想

2. 分析范例的答题思路以及主要内容结构

3. 记录地道词汇和高分句型

4. 按照笔记(记忆)复述,巩固记忆

摘选了卡片题Positive change in your life中的一道提高题来和大家举个例子:

How has modern technology changed people's lives?

Technological advances have done a lot of good to work and life.

As far as work is concerned, well, the invention of the internet has managed to connect people from around the world, allowing us to tap into resources and talents in a way we had never had before. And more advanced public transport means that more deals and transactions could be made in a shorter span of time. So that’s why working people are more productive and businesses are thriving.

And our life has been made easier thanks to the fast-developing technology. Airplane and high-speed rail enable us to travel long distances within one single day. And home appliances have shared much of our domestic duties, from cooking, sweeping to laundry.

烤鸭们可以发现,这个回答的内容十分丰富,而且涵盖的信息点很多。如果是直接背诵的话,烤鸭估计要晕倒了!那酱紫的一个高分范例要如何去参考学习呢?让我们回到提到的四个steps!

Step 1 中心思想,native speakers 习惯把重点的points放在话的前面来说,网上的范例也一样,重点的points很明显就可以找到:Technological advances have done a lot of good to work and life. 所以我们清楚,这个范例中主要是会将科技发展带来的益处。

Step 2 内容结构,虽然说文章很长,但是毕竟是高分范例!因此结构十分清晰!先谈工作,比如说资源更容易寻找,而且交通便利也方便商务合作等等;再聊生活,比如搭飞机能让我们一天之内就达到目的地,而且家用电器也能分担家务,让人轻松不少。

Step 3 词句积累,在这段话中很多词语和句式都是十分经典的高分口语表达,比如说As far as work is concerned,in a shorter span of time,domestic duties 等等。

Step 4 复述文章,到了这一步的时候,烤鸭就可以根据自己的笔记来进行复述了。要做一篇original 的文章,烤鸭们可以自行发挥,添加或更改自己的内容和信息。比如说聊到对生活的益处,可以不说airplane或home appliances, 而是聊一聊socials network 和 movie entertainment。

很多烤鸭有疑问,为什么要花那么多时间去剖析一篇文章呢?

因为啊,去学习分析一篇文章花费的时间要比直接背诵要少很多,而且分析下来的思路和表达不仅仅能用于这一道题,同时也能用到很多相关的话题中。酱紫在答题的时候,烤鸭就可以泰然处之,临危不乱了。

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