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雅思口语话题part2高分范文之:制造噪音的人 雅思口语常见错误整理

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雅思口语话题part2高分范文之:制造噪音的人 雅思口语常见错误整理

雅思口语话题part2高分范文之:*噪音的人

2021年5-8月雅思口语part2新题预测之:*噪音的人(Describe an occasion that someone or something made noise),范文为高分考生原创,内容有关我的邻居在上周末装修隔壁的房子。电钻、铁锤、其他电动工具的噪音以及工人们的喊叫使我非常烦恼。唯有词汇量丰富且用词地道,表达流畅的考生才能赢得考官青睐。口语水平的提高需要一段很长时间积累的过程,所以找对口语范文很关键。学习模仿雅思口语范文要点有3:1.native speaker的地道用词,2.丰富灵活的动词,3.高分句型并熟练背诵之。话不多说,口语范文自取:


Describe an occasion that someone or something made noise

You should say:

when this happened

who this person was/what this thing was

what kinds of noise was

and explain what you did when you heard the noise.

1.适用考生:全适用

2.主题:邻居装修*噪音

3.故事线:我的邻居在上周末装修隔壁的房子。电钻、铁锤、其他电动工具的噪音以及工人们的喊叫使我非常烦恼。

雅思口语part2高分范文示例:

I would like to tell you an occasion when my neighbor renovated his building which is next to my house the last weekend. The noise of drills, hammer, other power tools, and the shout from workers were extremely bothering to me.

I heard that there had been some problem with water leaking in their house, thus, they needed torip the floor out to find the problem of water pipe system hidden inside. Besides, they also took that chance to re-decorate their house. That’s why the noise of hammers, saws, drills seemed endless on the whole day. Because the owners didn’t have much time off from work, they had to begin very soon in the morning. I must say that the staccato hammer drill at the crack of dawn woke up all of citizens in the neighbour, and prevented us from going back to sleep again. As my house is next to theirs, I almost could feel that the walls shook and it drove meinsane.

Though being so bothered by the noise, I couldn’t do anything but for standing it, hoping it could end as soon as possible. After 2 hours, I nearly went crazy with that noise, so I called up my friends and asked them out for cafe and shopping.

友情提示:本雅思口语高分范文仅供参考,口语高分的终极奥义还在于不断积累和练习。高分范文在手,屠鸭说走就走。

雅思口语常见错误整理

  作为中国考生害怕的雅思考试部分,雅思口语一直就如梦魇一般纠缠着很多基础不太好的考生,特别是在雅思口语考试紧张的考试环境下,很多中国考生往往都是层出不穷的蹦出各式的中式英语来,这在雅思口语考官眼中是很减分的,下面就总结一下中国考生雅思口语错误。下面和小编一起来看看吧:

  1. "Chinese people use trees as chopsticks." (拿树当筷子?这筷子也太大了吧......应该是use trees for making chopsticks吧?由此可见雅思口语中准确使用动词的重要性。)

  2. "I think environmantal protection is essential but not so important." (典型的逻辑混乱......essential就等于very important,环保是至关重要但是不是那么重要的?......无语......)

  3. "Without electricity, the world would become so dark that a person could not even see a hand in front of his face." (缺了至关重要的时间状语at night!这么说的话古代人都是一直生活在伸手不见五指的黑暗中的吗?)

  4. "Watching TV is convenient and people can avoid traffic jam" (这又是什么逻辑?看电视和避免交通拥挤有什么关系?)

  5. "I like writing because it is good for your health."

  (Why?......)

  6. "My grandmother is 98 years old so she is very pure." (为什么98岁就必然“纯洁”?)

  7. "As we all know, every advantage has its disadvantage." (......好深奥......)

  8. "The rate of net-cheating has boomed by 1.27% in the past 2 years." (说这句话的人一定是雅思图表作文没学好。Boom=Increase rapidly,增长1.27%算rapid吗?应该用climb或edge up。)

  9. "Modern ways of life brings people some healthy diseases." (疾病还有“健康的疾病”?貌似说这句话的人想表达的是"健康方面的疾病吧"?那就直接用desease就可以了,因为所有的疾病都是“健康方面”的,要么还有哪方面的?)

  10. "My father is a photograph......" (我爸爸是一张照片?这个强劲的......应该是photographer。)

  11. "The data is very astonished!" (“数据非常吃惊”?典型的没有学好现在分词和过去分词的区别,应该用astonishing-“让人惊讶的”。)

  12. "At that time, I was studied at university." (“我那时候在大学里被研究?”你是小白鼠吗?应该是I was studying at university。)

  13. "Traveling can enlarge our eyesight." (旅行能够拓宽我们的视力?应该是broaden our horizon吧。)

  14. "Today, more and more people are getting old." (不是more and more people在变老,是everybody!只要你是地球人都在getting old的......)

  15. -"Are you a student or are you working now?"

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