雅思口语描述一本书 求雅思口语考试的范文

Part 1重点考题：　　Birthday, home, sport, music, Internet, newspaper, bike, swimming　　Part one:(考试大!)　　Birthday考试大论坛　　How do Chinese people celebrate the birthday?　　Do you think birthday is important to your life?　　Do people like going to the parties?　　Why some people hate parties?　　Bike(考试大!)　　Do you like using bike for work or school?　　Which kind of transportation do people like to take?　　What are the benefits of riding bicycle?　　Swimming:　　Is it good to teach children to swim?　　Do you like swimming or your friends?　　Why are some people afraid of swimming?　　Music　　What music do you like? Why　　陪判镇Can you play any musical instrument?　　What musical instrument do you like?　　Are there any friends around you playing some instruments, like piano or guitar?　　Have you ever listened to someone playing a musical instrument?　　What musical instrument do you enjoy most and why?　　Sport来源:考试大网　　What sports are popular among Chinese people?　　Should we teach sports to children? Why?　　What is the role of sports?　　Do you think sports can help you relieve your mood?Computer/Internet　　What do you do with computers?　　Do you think that children should learn to use computers?　　Do you think that life is better with computers?　　When did you begin to use computers?　　What’s the influence of computers on you?　　Living place考试大(www．Examda。com)　　Where are you living now?　　Do you like your living environment?(考试大!)　　Is it good or bad for children?　　芦粗Is there anything for improvement?　　What can you see from your windows?　　What is hanging on the wall in your house?　　Photography　　Do you like taking photos?　　On what kind of situations do you take photos?　　Could you tell me one of your happy experiences of taking photos?　　Relax来源:考试大冲桐网　　What do you do in your leisure time?　　What relaxation do people around you like?　　What kind of activities do people of your country do for relaxation?　　Why do people need leisure?　　What will you do if you have extra spare time?　　Newspaper　　When did you begin to read newspaper?　　What’s the difference between Chinese newspapers?　　Weekend　　Is weekend important to people?来源：考试大　　What do people do on weekend?　　Do you think people should be asked to work on weekends?　　Do you think people should get more money if they work on weekends?　　Which day do you like more on weekend?　　What do you often do on that day?(考试大!) Part 2:　　第二部分考试总的原则就是“人，物，事件，地点，媒体”，只要同学们按照我的课堂讲过的TSE方法以及公式去准备5篇范文，任何话题都可以套，答案在公共邮箱里，详细请看我的公共邮箱和博客。下面的题，是10月份全国最重点的考题以及背形，无论是在哪个地方考试，基本上会按照以下的考题出，前面的是重点考题，括号里的是题目的变形，就是可以换来用的，同学们多发挥想像力。比如我要同学们描述一本书，我在课堂讲过，这类题形是媒体题，从“读者，欢迎度，内容，读后感等等入手”，这本书的内容可不可以与电影，杂志，表演和网站一样呢，当然可以。　　Part 2:　　People:　　Old people　　Actor　　A neighbor　　Object:　　Food　　photo　　Place:　　A place that worked or studied before　　Experience:　　Long journey　　A happy experience来源： www. Something you are succeeded in doing　　Media:　　TV program　　Law　　Book　　Performance　　News　　重点考题变形以及互换 1.A book you have read recently (performance, magazine, TV program, a news website, a film)　　3.A photo (a good experience in your life)　　4.A good law in China 7.A tourist attraction (a place with a lot of water, a place that is polluted, a city you have visited, a journey you have taken)　　8.An old person (a person who is good at his/her job, school friend, teacher, teenager)　　9.A place you have worked or studied before(An organization, A recent change in your life )　　11.Something you would like to learn（the foreign language you would like to learn besides English ）(考试大!)

雅思考试听力回忆
Section1
1. 选good example, 因为这个题目很明显里面听到了role model ,
2. 选size , 原文中有班级太large
3. 选B 4.45， 虽然根据最后原则，C选项是最后出来的，但是肯定选B

后面选为什么小女孩不能去上课
4. 选class is full,因为这里原文说I have to put you in the waiting list
5. 选the other activity in the evening, 我记得里面是说她星期六有太多的activity,如果选这个课，晚上就会很晚回家
6. 选 too expensive , 父亲说太贵了

接下来是填空
7. 我写的是write music, 原文肯定说了，但是最后一次说的是 compose music, 所以两个都对
8. 课程收费，写85
9. 这个题目很特殊，题目是 date Emma start on
关键词是Emma什么时候可以上课，原文第一次说的是7th September，但这个不是答案，因为女的说这是该课程的开始时间，父亲就说Emma有特殊情况，所以只能在14th September才能开始
10. 填写上课老师的名字，Jamal Curtis

Section 2
这是一个旅游场景，讲的是一个island 的情况，女的独白
11.选择题，选去这个岛的交通工具，正确答案选(B) ferry, 因为女的说(A)被取消了改链拦，只能用ferry, 而直升飞机(C)作为交通工具被delayed
12.至15题填写以下4个地方在哪个方向， A代表North，B代表East, C.代表south
12和13都要选择C.
14题选B
15题选A.这个题目很有意思，在讲到这个题目的时候，她把north, east,全都讲到，最后那个south才是正确答案，最后原则适用
后面的题目就是填空题了，只能记得三个
16. 是说要带上你的medication
17. 是说可能mobile会没有信号，或者失去作用
18. 写rivers,一定注意复数
19 monkeys， 一定注意复数，这个题目是说monkeys会bite人，（19和20题相隔比较近核胡，要注意写的速度）
20. 我没有听我就猜到了，因为题目是try the local _______ , 我就猜肯定是什么food, 结果一定正确答案是seafood

Section 3 ,全是表格题，讨论2本书各自的特点，是一个女的老师问一男一女的学生，他俩分别读了各自的一本书。
21. 填写wider than， 这个题目的横轴是讨论这两本书分所cover 的range
22. text from magazines 这个地方我犹豫了一下，23题就在跟22题同一个格子里，所以我23题听得没有问题，答案很特殊celebrities（名人），一定注意复数，但是magazines我应该可以肯定是22题答案，而且注意复数
中间的我就回忆不起来了，要填写比如graphs, academic。我记得在第26题的样子那个空是这个整个表格第一列最底下那个格子，应该填the approach， 后面还有title我记得没有复数,和explanation注意拼写,还有最后一个followed by a general discussion，

section4是一个讨论在一个university开communication conference，31和31问选这个唤仔地方的两个原因，提到基础设施不错，31题就是填写good of facilities（注意复数），32题是另外一个原因，听到的是range of research，然后问开会给学校带来什么帮助，33.raise fund from government (一定注意拼写)
提到这里有四个牛人，要填他们分别以什么在会上作专题演讲，（表格题）
第一个是一个教授，34.politics and the media，
第二个是35.humor of speech，
第三个人是填36translation,
第四个是37.crime，然后是填空，
38. 是说有staff做technical support equipment，这里填写是否是equipment,我忘记了，印象中好像不是
39. informal language， 肯定不是different language
40. 最后一个是collate feedback我记得没有复数，这里这个空前面这个动词很有意思用了collate，我也没有见过，

听力考试总结： 听力我是严格按照我上课讲的方法去做的，画出关键词，预测，跟上节奏，没看也没有背诵任何机经。方法上没有任何问题。本次考试应该是一篇旧题+3篇新题。我的节奏把握的可以，没有出现漏题的现象。这次选择题不多，所以题目题型上说不是很难。填表题和提纲填空题，简答题，选择题，还是这些常考题型。而且section3和section4都是一种题型贯穿始终。单词拼写非常重要在这样的题型中，然后就是单复数，本次考试单复数考的很多，请考生以后一定要注意单复数的现象，我特地留意了一下。最后誊写答案的时候，发现写完就只有2分钟了，看来誊写答案还要快一点点，可能写的时候太注重书法了。特别注意，因为阅读和听力的答案是写在同一张答题卡的正反面，一定不要把答案写错正反面，这就麻烦了，出现了这种问题自己负责

口语考试回忆：
Part 1 . What’s your full name ?
First , let me know something about yourself . do you work or study now?
Why do you choose this work
Do you like work with other people
Do you like travel?
Which country you would like to travel?
What things do you think it is interesting in your country to the travelers
What sport do you like to do
Are there any sport facilities in the place where you live
Do Children always do sport

Part 2 , describe a interesting speech or talk
- who gives this speech
- where is the speech
- what the speech is about and explain the reason why you think it is interesting
(我所有的part 2 topic都没有事前准备过，也没有去问过刚刚考过的考生，这个临时拿到的时候，有点迷茫了2秒钟，但突然灵机一动，我可以讲我的英国专业课老师给我们讲的一堂关于行为金融学的课，我就立马把它改成一个speech,于是我就如鱼得水的用英文讲我的专业知识，感觉发挥不错)

part 3 why do you think people attend conference
do you think visual aid will help the conference
do you think visual aid will distract the audience attention
do you like listening to a speech
why do you think people get nervous in public speaking
are there any ways to help people improve their public speaking
do you think people learn more from the conference speaker than the discussion with the other conference attendants .

口语总结：我是6号下午第一批考试的（1：20开考），别人都进去了，我最后才进去，打开门是一个黑人女的，因为考点据说有个印度老太，我想这就好啦被我碰到了，跟印度人说话，因为白人的口语还是更好懂一些。不过我告诉自己，出国在黑人区打工，印度人，黑人口音应该没有太多问题。跟她交谈，发现口音真没有什么问题，我觉得不会造成障碍，她应该是美国人，美音很重，略带一点点黑人腔。我进去每个问题都很流利，没有卡壳，虽然有三个问题要她重复了一下（不是因为口音，而是问题有时候太长了，一下没有不敢确定），我语速比平时快很多，噼里啪啦就考完了，等我出来，发现自己是第一个出来。个人觉得不难，很多时候自己的一些经历，所碰到的事情，和上课备课所积累的素材在口语当中有了很大的帮助。所以有东西可以说。我没有用口语说话套路，也没有用什么gap filling，都是自己想怎么说就怎么说。各位同学你的口语在这15分钟里面呢，哪些是套话，哪些背的，哪些是你临场发挥讲的，哪些是你自己真正的东西，考官是很容易可以察觉出来的。技巧是小事，个人语言功底，经历，平时的练习，反应是最关键的。其实我觉得反应很关键，你不用准备很多素材，一个素材就可以对付很多问题，关键是你是否那几秒钟可以想出来。我是考的G类，可能问的问题会有点点偏向于工作场景，以上内容仅供参考。我的口语考试所问我的问题基本就这些，不会有太大的差异。

另外： 监考不是很严格，我的考场的那个中国女考官是我上大学时候的大学英语老师，她肯定人除了我，但我们没有打招呼。我看到发到卷子后，在没有听到指令打开试卷的时候（无论是听力、阅读还是写作），都有人提前打开试卷看内容（我是很老实的，完全遵守规矩），以前都是直接记名字，现在会先提醒你要你别看。因为只有两个人监考，所以我那考场那个英国帅哥基本不管事，我旁边的人看了很久。我记得坐我前面一个哥们，考试阅读考官快说time is up, drop your pencil，他回头看我的阅读试卷，因为我俩都考试G类，然后还再转回去改动答案。

1、15秒：审清题目，拟定内容 当 你拿到话题卡后，迅速浏览最上面的标题，千万不要错看或漏看任何一个单词。由于考生在考前都有大量准备，许多口语话题在脑海中已经形成惯性。
2、25秒：记录话题背景要点 话
题卡前两个提示点大都关于Who、What、Where、When等背景信息的描述雀敏，所以考生可以利用10秒钟时间迅速在你的稿纸上记录一下时间，地点和所讲述的人或物的名称。对于这些背景信息，最好能够用缩写或者用只有你自己才能够读懂的顷坦枝略写的方式，比如长城你可以直接写作
GW,紫禁城可写作F city。有时候，你也可以直接在稿纸上简单的画上两笔，以作提示。
3、35秒：记录话题主体要点 话 题卡的第三个提示点基本上询问Why和How。比如对于一件物品，会问 Why you bought
it对于一本书，会问Why you read it对于一件事，会问Why it is unforgettable (or, why you
enjoyed it)。 当然，有的时候也会通过What让考生进行细节的描述，比如描述一位老师，会问 What was special
about him/her.描述一位餐厅，会问What its environment looks like描述人物性格，会问What is
his/her personality and
lifestyle。所以，对于话题描述的主体部分，考生最好能够列出几个点，可以是关键词或短语，但最好不要用长句子。另外，要注意各个点之间的联系和点与点之间的衔接，按照一定的时间或者信慎空间顺序。
4、45秒：记录话题思想要点话题卡中最后一问通常以Explain how或者Explain what and how,
有时候也通过疑问句来引导考生说出自己的感受或观点，比如Are you going to change it in the future? Why
or why not,What made it so memorable for you?What made the movie so
appealing to
you?等等。在雅思口语培训过程中，通常会提供给考生一些关于心理感受的词或短语，甚至要求考生背诵相应的2-3个描述心理活动的段落。通过大量的接触雅思话题卡，你一定会发现第三个提示点大都是问某个人，某件事对你造成的影响;你从某个建议或故事中得到的启发;你对某件物品，某个地方的喜爱程度。如果你能够在考前就有所准备，看到话题卡中的思想要点时，就能够迅速想出关键词，列出大纲了。
5、50秒：回顾所记，开始答题当你完成了前45秒的准备，如果考官还没有问你是否已经准备好，你可以再给自己五秒钟的时间把记下的关键词，大纲迅速浏览一遍。总而言之，雅思口语话题卡一
定要做一些简单的笔记，帮助自己理清思路，避免在接下来描述的1到2分钟里出现磕磕绊绊，大脑短路，无话可说的尴尬场面。
俗话说：磨刀不误砍柴工。只要大家能够在准备话题卡的那50秒钟训练有素，一定会大幅度提高话题的内容质量和描述时连贯度。

1. Birds 鸟类
Do you like birds?
What birds popular in China?
核心词汇：轮岩magpie喜鹊 , swan天鹅, pigeon鸽子 and peacock孔雀
主要说喜鹊 因为喜鹊是好运的象征，他在我们中国有文化背景.
2. Birds and pets 比较
Is it popular to keep birds as pets in your country?
可以再补充几个核心的鸟类词汇parrot鹦鹉, thrushes画眉。
3. Flower: 花
Do you like flowers?
核心词汇：Rose, Ja*ine茉莉花, Peony牡丹, Carnation康乃馨
Do Chinese people like send flowers to people on some festivals?
Do Chinese people use flowers as a gift?
Have you received flowers?
Is there any special meaning for flowers?
表达的核心意思：玫瑰代表爱情，茉莉代表纯洁和年轻，牡丹则意味着富有和高贵
4. Noise and neighbor噪音和邻居
what kind of sound do you like?
音乐的声音，light music,
乐器的声音 flute长笛，drum鼓，pinao 钢琴
why is there noise?
各种车辆Vehicles---horns,
各种建筑工地的机器噪音Noise made by engines in building sites
火车站汽车站飞机场等等。
Do you know your neighbors?
Do you think it is important to have good relationship with neighbors?
因为大家住在一起可以共同帮助，共同分享很多，
Do you prefer young people to be your neighbor or old people?
这个问题还是分年轻人还是年老人
当然还是分开说
5. Cooking做饭
Who does the cooking in your family?
What does he or she often cook?
不羡闹仅做中国的饭菜，列举出来几个，还做外国的饭菜，参照我发的讲义
6. Fruit水果
Do you like fruit?
水果的种类：strawberry, melon, kiwi猕猴桃, cherry樱桃, blueberry蓝莓, raspberry红莓.
How often do you eat fruit?
What kind of fruit do you like best?
Why? 水果含有丰富的维他命，不含脂肪 卡路里也很低等等
What are the benefits of eating more fruit?
7. Vegetables蔬菜
Do you like vegetables?
How often do you eat vegetables?
What kind of vegetables do you like best?
What are the benefits of eating vegetables?
8. Driving开车
Do you often drive?
Is it necessary to learn driving?
Is it important to drive well?
When would you allow your children to drive?
9 English 英语学习
Why do you study English?
How does your teacher teach English?
What teaching style do you like?
现在兄桐罩最流行的英语教育就是communicative language teaching.
Do you prefer group learning or individual learning?
Group learning: 可以小组讨论可以交换学习计较可方法还可以想起她人学, 培养学生独立思考的能力和习惯这是一种很重要的技能。
How do you study English?
Where do you usually study English? With whom?
Do the young and the elderly learn English in different ways? What are the differences?
how many languages can you speak?
what languages do you like?
what are the difficulties in learning a language?
what did you collect when you were young?

10 collect收集
这个话题可以嫁接到各种音乐唱片上，各种电影上，也可以嫁接到风筝上
do you still collect it now?
what do you like to collect?
if you had a lot of money, what would you like to collect?
do you like to wear watches?
提醒自己要有时间观念 时间安排合理
do you think that time flies?
11 Sports:运动
Do you do sports?
Does you community have any sports equipment?
. What sport do you do? Do you think swimming is good?
Shape one’s body, good for lose weight, practice your lung volume, strengthen your muscle
Where do people go for swimming?
What sport are you going to learn in the future?
Are there any good sports facilities in your community?
What sport do you want to do in the future?

11. Friends朋友
Do you want to go out alone or in a group?
How often do you meet your friends?
What do you do when you are with friends?
12. Food食物
What food do you like?
What food don't you like?
Which restaurant is your favorite?
do you like cooking?
who does the cooking in your family?
what does he or she like to cook?
13. Internet网络
What do you do with internet?
What are the advantages and disadvantages of internet?
网络把整个世界带到你的身边，可以有效快速的找到你所需要的信息，但是缺点是网络犯罪和诈骗很多 总的来说网络带给我们的益处大于坏处
Do you think that life is better with the internet?
When did you begin to use the internet?
What’s the influence of the internet on you?
14. Living place你的详细居住地址
Do you live in a house or a flat?
I live in four-bedroom flat, which is on the 4th floor. It is in Zhongyuan district of Zhengzhou, not far from city center.
What can you see from the windows of your home?
可以看到有一个大的喷泉或者是人工湖，然后就有一个大的花园还有很多特殊建造的运动器材
15. Work: 工作
Do you think your job is easy to do? Why?
What’s your job responsibility?
16 Vacation:度假旅游
这个问题的思路嫁接到带水的地方也就是旅游景点 大连或者是青岛或者是英国
Do you like traveling?
What’s the most interesting journey?
Which country do you want to visit?
When did you have your vacation last time?
17。Society & Culture:社会和文化
Have you received any gift?可以说flowers
When do people give gifts in your country?过节日的时候，生日的时候，你可以举个例子五月的第二个周日是母亲节大家都送康乃馨来一次表达自己对母亲的感谢和爱
When will you give gifts?
Do you think it's difficult to choose a gift?
Have you ever made a gift by yourself to somebody?
18. bicyle 自行车
Do most people ride bicycles?
Did you learn to ride a bike when you were young?
Are there any benefits of bicycle riding?
益处是锻炼身体，休闲娱乐，缓解交通压力 reduce traffic pressure，

Why so many people ride bicycles in your country?
中国过去是自行车王国used to kingdom of Bicycles
在过去自行车是主要的出行工具main means of transportation
随着交通的快速发展rapid development of public transportation， 私家车的普及widespread of private cars
Do you think bike riding is safe?
What are the differences between being a child and being an *?

19.休闲活动Leisure activities:
When did you go shopping last time?
Do you like going to a party?
What do you dislike most about a party?
Do you like shopping?
What do you dislike most about shopping?
When do you usually go shopping?
Do you prefer *all shops or shopping malls? Why?

part 2 (高频考试题目)优先准备一下话题，然后有时间的同学可以把后面人事物地媒体的剩余东西准备一下
a foreign artist you admire (movie star, singer, painter, etc)
谈论施瓦辛格
a walk you took
谈论你和他们要参加一个party这个聚会的主题是海盗呀，是食物呀，是化装舞会要带各种形状图案的mask面具
谈论你看过的一本历史书，一个电视节目，
a family that you like (not your own)
你的好朋友的家庭，因为他们家父母做的一手的好菜，家里还养了很多宠物，和花
a wild animal endangered animal 说说那些濒临灭绝的动物，他们的驻地被人共占用，他们被人们猎捕，社会工业的发展污染了他们的水源和食物
a happy event (in your childhood) ===a family event ===go for a picnic 这三个题目都可以互相串起来，
a school you went to when you were young (小时候的学校）
your favorite subject (不要说大学的pe ）
a science lesson you learned说数学，物理说你很擅长的话或者说你学不懂
something you bought but has not been used frequently (*过的不怎么用的东西，与equipment*过了学英语的那个器材）
a trip you planned but didn't go for说大连和青岛，英国
A party you enjoyed 一次晚会国际学生晚会===a party you would like to hold （注意将来时）
手工制品 something you made by yourself 旗袍风筝剪纸中山装
a letter or email you received 通知你去参加party
a special meal 和上面这个话题连接，有中国饭菜举几个例子有外国饭菜
last weekend运动，看电影，听音乐
Old thing in your family旗袍风筝剪纸中山装
A person who visited you 最好的朋友
A public event 跟踢足球，篮球的比赛连接
An exciting sport也可以准备一下极限运动，
A change you would like to make 你通过看电影听音乐和用iphone*下载动词，来提高自己的英语具体看我发的讲义
A course you want to learn 英语 体育运动 饮食做饭 做衣服
Good news from phone 参加聚会
Something that is good for health 水果和蔬菜
sports event you watched that you want to do 嫁接到足球比赛
a trip not as good as you planned 实际就是要描述旅游中的突发事件，丢东西啦。交通啦。堵车啦。天气啦。。。。。
a picnic or a meal in a park 嫁接到国际留学生自己带食物去参加的话题（这个场景我在国外留学的时候经常会这样特别是到了夏天的时候大家一般都会park在举行）
an important conversation 父母跟你谈打算送你出国的事情
where when with whom what it was about

备战雅思考试“必*书籍”推荐

一、“必*真经”

1. 真题：

（1）剑桥4-12

（2）新东方真题精讲4-12

点评：真题是考试的基础，题型和考法都从真题里来，钻研真题是考出一个基础雅思分（6.0）的基石，所以剑桥4-11是必备的，1-3题太老所以忽略，如果时间紧张的话，备考雅思时间仓促，重点在7-12这6本上。报考雅思培训班的时候会赠送教材，但是建议上淘宝*几套做模拟测试，上考场前刷2-3遍是很正常的事情。

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2. 阅读：

（1）《雅思阅读真经总纲》—— 刘洪波

（2）《雅思阅读真经5》—— 刘洪波

（3）《剑桥雅思阅读考点词真经(机考笔试综合版)》—— 刘洪波

点评：刘老师的“同义替换理论”帮助了很多考生，这套书籍连贯性好，一般都整套购*。在淘宝购*这套书籍的时候商家经常会赠送《雅思真经（一本通）》。建议安排123的顺序备考使用。

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3. 听力：

（1）《雅思王听力真题语料库（机考笔试综合版）》 —— 王陆

点评：听力其实对于中国考生来讲是最容易拿高分的，只要对于词汇这块能够细心的拼写，掌握常规词汇，这本书涵盖了核心词汇，赠送光盘还有“英音” 、“澳音”和“印音”的朗读区分。方便考试提前适应考场上突入起来的非纯正英语口音。

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4. 口语：

（1）《雅思口语全薇机经》—— 刘薇

点评：雅思嫌液天后刘薇出版的这本“口语备战宝典”，算是口语里面相当有分量的一本参考书。整芹皮物本书很有质感、平面设计国际化，涵盖了实战验证过的经典答案，为学生指出了错误的“中国式”表达，并且该书经过雅思考官的审定，对于学生来说，如果要背答案的话这本就够了。

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5. 写作：

（1）《雅思写作真经总纲》—— 刘洪波

（2）《顾家北手把手教你雅思写作 5.0版》—— 顾家北

点评：对于小作文部分，顾家北的书解释的较为详细，写法和语法是完整全面的；对于大作文部分，刘洪波的大作文写作体系理论比较好入门，顾家北的ABC理论很有特色，两者可以结合着看。

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二、“必*辅导”

烤鸭们应该知道雅思考试中只有“雅思口语”和“雅思写作”是由雅思考官来完成批阅的，特别是“雅思口语”，基本就是雅思考官基于你客观的陈握纯述而做出的主观判断，所以有些书必须要*，有些辅导（自学还是跟别人学）也是必须要*的。

1. 口语

建议联系专业的雅思考官，比如之前担任过考官的“前考官”进行模拟联系，这样可以避免通过不停的交报名费来适应考试，现在雅思考试费用为2020元，还是一笔不小的费用，而现在的雅思考官测试也不过几百元而已。

2. 写作

建议联系英语几乎为母语的华人或者是外国人联系，按照每篇文章收费，每次可以仔细讲解需要修改的地方，如果考虑报班的同学，建议针对写作可以报一个1对1的考前突破或短期加强课程。

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